Dil Badal Kar Dekhlo

by Mohammad Touhid on May 12, 2010, 07:18:57 AM
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kitna pyar hume tumse hai iska ehsas karke dekhlo,
yakeen na ho to humse apna dil badal kar dekhlo.,
rozana yaad kitna har pal hum karte hai aapko,
jaan loge humse apni yaadein badal kar dekhlo.,

basi hai tasveer sirf teri hi mere aankho me,
khudse hamari aankhe badal kar dekhlo.,
har saans me tera naam lete hai hum,
khudki sanse bhi humse badal kar dekhlo.,

chahat kisi ko pane ki kya hoti hai duniya me,
dil-e-chahat ko teri mujhse badal kar dekhlo.,
ummid kya hoti hai kisi ko kisi se duniya me,
jaanu humse wo ummid bhi badal kar dekhlo.,

tere pyar ke sadke to meri jaan bhi kurbaan hai tujh par,
jaan dene ka jajba kya hai humse kurbani badal kar dekhlo.,
jahan ki sari khushi mil gayi hai tujhse milkar,
kam se kam apni khushi badal kar to dekhlo.,

Tumse kitna pyar hai dil me utar kar dekhlo.,
naa yakeen aaye to fir dil badal kar dekhlo.,
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 08:40:11 AM »
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Wonderful poem Touhid ji,bahut hi khoob likha aapne.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 10:10:41 AM »
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Humein bahut din se aapke post ka intzaar tha aur aaj mila aur aisa mila ki kya kahen... yakeen na ho to

"Ek baar humse hamara intzaar le ke dekho"

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bahut khoobsurti se aapne mohabbat ko apne shabdon me utaara hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Touhid ji... bahut hi umda... bahut achcha laga padhke.... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 10:22:56 AM »
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Nice poem Touhid-ji.... Applause Applause Applause

Khayaal aur soch alag-alag hain yaar apne
Aao samajhne ki khatir ye badal kar dekhlo


kitna pyar hume tumse hai iska ehsas karke dekhlo,
yakeen na ho to humse apna dil badal kar dekhlo.,
rozana yaad kitna har pal hum karte hai aapko,
jaan loge humse apni yaadein badal kar dekhlo.,

basi hai tasveer sirf teri hi mere aankho me,
khudse hamari aankhe badal kar dekhlo.,
har saans me tera naam lete hai hum,
khudki sanse bhi humse badal kar dekhlo.,

chahat kisi ko pane ki kya hoti hai duniya me,
dil-e-chahat ko teri mujhse badal kar dekhlo.,
ummid kya hoti hai kisi ko kisi se duniya me,
jaanu humse wo ummid bhi badal kar dekhlo.,

tere pyar ke sadke to meri jaan bhi kurbaan hai tujh par,
jaan dene ka jajba kya hai humse kurbani badal kar dekhlo.,
jahan ki sari khushi mil gayi hai tujhse milkar,
kam se kam apni khushi badal kar to dekhlo.,

Tumse kitna pyar hai dil me utar kar dekhlo.,
naa yakeen aaye to fir dil badal kar dekhlo.,
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 10:41:07 AM »
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bahot aachha likha he aapne....
but ye to movie ka song he.
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 01:26:04 PM »
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shukriya... koyal ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile

apka bhi shukriya ... madhu sahab.... Usual Smile Usual Smile


kapil ji aapka to kya kehna....
aap hamesha khush kar dete hai...
bas isi tarah hamari ghazal ko sarahte rahiyega.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
shukriya.....


Think hat ke ji.... aapka shukriya.. aapka naam to hume nahi maaloom....
magar sirf aakhir k do line ush gane ke hai.. baki puri ghazal maine hi likhi hai....

ye pura likha hua hamara hai mere khayalat hai.,
yakeen na ho to fir wo gana sun kar dekhlo...
**** SHUKRIYA **** Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2010, 05:28:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob Touhid Ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2011, 07:19:05 PM »
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badlo yaar kabhi to dil badal kar dekhlo..
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2012, 06:01:02 AM »
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Romantic!!!! Bohat Khub!!!...Dil Badal Kar Dekh Lo!!!!
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Romantic!!!! Bohat Khub!!!...Dil Badal Kar Dekh Lo!!!!
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shireen Ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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