|| Dil bhi hai pyasa........Priya ||

by manzil-e-ishq on January 21, 2011, 09:47:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2011, 09:17:55 AM »
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bht bht shukria nirala ji......
thanx geet ji aapko mera ye khayal pasand aaya......
thanx alot kritika ji... & intezaar ji....

maar to aapki poetry ne dala mg.....
kya likha hai..... maza aa gaya padh ke....
& shukria ji ki aapko meri koshish pasand aayi....

thanx kb..... par ye kya... likhne ka mann hua par aapne kuch likha hi nahi.... likho jaldi se or post karo....

bht khoob apriya ji....

shukria rishi ji& bekarar ji....

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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2011, 10:57:16 AM »
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Koi tou aysee baat kaho
Bujhe dil ki pyaas joho

Priya k hote kyu Piya hai pyassa
Ye kisne phenkaa hai ulta paassa
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«Reply #17 on: March 21, 2011, 02:08:51 PM »
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Hai baat jara si… ruaab jara sa…
Nazar bhi hai pyasi.. ye dil bhi hai pyasa…

Deed ko teri hain tarse ye ankhiya…
Ki preet jara si… hai mera tamasha….

Thi teri hi aadat is dil ko sada se….
in aankho se chalke hain megh bhara sa….

Hu tum bin adhuri… sajan mere sun lo…
Raahe ye sooni na dengi dilasa….

Ye meri wafien bulati hain tumko…
Hai meri dua me… bas tu hi rava sa……



Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Kehne Priya Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash...

Ishq Ke Khumaar Mein Doobi Hui Yeh Rachna mann Ko Lubha Gayi

Bahut AChe  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #18 on: March 22, 2011, 01:38:35 PM »
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pasandagi ka bht bht shukria khwaish ji.....


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Kehne Priya Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash...

Ishq Ke Khumaar Mein Doobi Hui Yeh Rachna mann Ko Lubha Gayi

Bahut AChe  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #19 on: March 22, 2011, 01:39:27 PM »
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thanx shihab....

Kya Kehne...Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji...


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
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