Dil bhi tumhara, hum bhi tumhare !

by Rishi on October 19, 2004, 09:03:16 AM
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #75 on: December 05, 2004, 11:11:31 AM »
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thnax mnajmi Usual Smile
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«Reply #76 on: December 05, 2004, 11:24:19 AM »
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thnx mnajmi!!!


hehehe!!!


oye nach de!!


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«Reply #77 on: December 05, 2004, 11:41:08 PM »
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very beautiful words archi....!
aur tum to do lines mein bada kamaal karte ho heart....!
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kaboo mein nahin hai dhadkan dil-e-bekraar ki,
saanson mein ye kaisi madhoshi chhaa rahi hai,
sambhaale se bhi sambhalta nahi aaj dil mera,
jaan-e-bahaar meri mujh se milne ko aa rahi hai....

kaisa hoga un se pehli mulaqat ka wo manjar,
tham jaayegi dil ki dhadkan unhein dekh kar,
aur bhi surkh ho jaayenge un ke gaal gulaabi,
jhuk jaayengi aankhein jo mujh se milegi nazar....

khamosh lab aur jhuki huyi wo nigaayein un ki,
ya khuda ab kaise hongi un se baatein dil ki,
unki gori kalayiyon mein khanakati chuddiyaan,
ban jaayengi un lamhon mein zubaan un ki....
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«Reply #78 on: December 06, 2004, 05:43:26 AM »
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awesome !! :D

feel like writin a reply though i dun have time right now!!But dat was reallly reallllyyy breathtakin! Usual Smile
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Rishi
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«Reply #79 on: December 07, 2004, 12:01:06 AM »
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Thanx Archi....!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #80 on: December 08, 2004, 05:32:35 AM »
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Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
very nice rishi ji!!!



Sota raha aapke khwab dekhthe hue raath bhar.
Ab din aaya tho kya hua,koi tikana nahi is khwab ka...



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superb u all........  heart..........rishi......maansi.......sabhi logon ki bahot acchi shayari  kisi ki bhi kisi se kam nahin hai.......nice work all.........

Maine Jis Lamhe Ko Pooja Hai Use Bas Ek Baar
Khwab Ban Kar Teri Ankhoon Mein Utarta Dekhon....................
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KaMaL
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«Reply #81 on: December 08, 2004, 07:45:13 AM »
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Bahut ache Waheed ji...
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KaMaL
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«Reply #82 on: December 08, 2004, 07:47:20 AM »
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Quote from: "Rishi"

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kaboo mein nahin hai dhadkan dil-e-bekraar ki,
saanson mein ye kaisi madhoshi chhaa rahi hai,
sambhaale se bhi sambhalta nahi aaj dil mera,
jaan-e-bahaar meri mujh se milne ko aa rahi hai....

kaisa hoga un se pehli mulaqat ka wo manjar,
tham jaayegi dil ki dhadkan unhein dekh kar,
aur bhi surkh ho jaayenge un ke gaal gulaabi,
jhuk jaayengi aankhein jo mujh se milegi nazar....

khamosh lab aur jhuki huyi wo nigaayein un ki,
ya khuda ab kaise hongi un se baatein dil ki,
unki gori kalayiyon mein khanakati chuddiyaan,
ban jaayengi un lamhon mein zubaan un ki....
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Kamaal ka likha hai Rishi bhai..
Maja aa gaya...


NaaaM....

Ye jo is seene mein humaare, dill basa hai
Uspe humne tumhaara, naaam likha hai

Jeene ke liye sab duniya mein, Saaans lete hain
Jeete hain hum bhi lekin, Tumhaara naam lete hain
Dhadka hai jab-bhi ye dil, Tumhein yaad kiya hai
Ye jo is seene.......

Jaisa hai naam tumhaara, Bilkul hi waise ho tum
Phool khilte hain har taraf, Jo muskuraate ho tum
Tumhaare liye hi to, ye "KaMaL" khila hai
Ye jo is seene.......
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #83 on: December 08, 2004, 05:50:35 PM »
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V nice Kamal Usual Smile
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KaMaL
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«Reply #84 on: December 09, 2004, 07:45:18 AM »
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thanks mansi ji
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akela
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«Reply #85 on: December 09, 2004, 08:56:31 AM »
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nice all of you
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roomaharis
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«Reply #86 on: March 13, 2005, 08:00:08 PM »
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:cry: Suna Hai Loug "Ussey" Aankh bhur ke dekhtey hain
So "Uss" ke Sheher mein kuch din theher ke dekhtey
hain

Suna hai boley tou baaton se phool jhartey hain
yeh baat hai tou chalo baat kar ke dekhtey hain

Suna hai Raat ko ussey Titliyaan sataati hai
Suna hai Raat ko Jugnoo theher ke dekhtey hain

Suna hai uss ke badan ki taraash aisi hai
ke phool apni qabaaein katar ke dekhtey hain

Rukey tou gardishein uss ka tawaaf karti hain
chaley tou uss ko zamaaney theher ke dekhtey hain

Kissey naseeb ke be-pairahan ussey dekhey
kabhi kabhi dar-o-deewaar ghar ke dekhtey hain

kahaaniyaan hi sahi , sab mubaalghey hi sahi
agar "woh" khawaab hai , "Taabeer" kar ke dekhtey hain

Judaaiyaan tou muqadder hai phir bhi jaan-e-safar
kuch aur door zara saath chal ke dekhtey hain

"Toou" saamney hai tou phir kiyon yaqeen nahin aata
yeh baar baar jo aankhon ko mal ke dekhtey hain

yeh kaun loug hain maujood teri mehfil mein
jo Laalachon se Tujhey ....Mujh ko jal ke dekhtey hain

Na tujh ko maat hui hai na mujh ko maat hui
So Ab ke donon hi chaalein badal ke dekhtey hain

Buhut dinon se nahin hai kuch "Uss" ki khair khabar
chalo zamane walo, Aey Yaar chal ke dekhtey hain :cry:
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sanya310
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«Reply #87 on: March 13, 2005, 08:02:56 PM »
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wah wah kya likha hai roomaharis!!! bohot hi ache n touching
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #88 on: March 13, 2005, 08:10:00 PM »
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Hope waits upon the flowry Prime,
And Summer, tho' it be less gay,
Yet is not look'd on as a time
Of Declination and Decay,
For with a full Hand that does bring
All that was promis'd by the Spring.
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roomaharis
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«Reply #89 on: March 13, 2005, 08:13:33 PM »
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:cry: omer bher tarasta raha mai roshani kay liay
Dia mairay haath mai de ker hawanoon ko taiz ker dia

Rooti hui aankhain hustay huay lubb
Taqdeer ne kia haseen intikhab-e-saza ker dia


Thak gya mai us se kehtay kehtay dil ki baat mager
Pal mai us ne kahi baton ko unkahi ker dia

Takra jaoon mai kabhi jo muqader se to pochoon
Kyon hyat hi mai mujhay behyat ker dia :cry:
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