dil e bewafa ki bebasi...

by bewafa sanam on August 25, 2011, 11:28:39 AM
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Aapki woh baatein,woh mulakaatein yaad karna achcha lagaa,
Khokar dil ka sukoon,bechain hona achacha lagaa,
Hairat hoti hai mujhe dil e bewafa ki bebasi dekhkar dosto,
Jo rehkar mujh mein, unki dhadkane sunaane lagaa....

this is my first ever shair...so plz lemme knw hw u guyz felt abt this shair....
thnk you!!!
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