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punam
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Na karo koi sawaal mujhse
ki main jawaab de na paaungi
na puchho mujhse kuchh
ki main jhoot bol na paaungi...
na bolo karte ho pyar mujhse
ki main inkaar kar na paaungi
na dekho meri aor aise
ki main aankh mila na paaungi...
na aao itna qareeb mere
ki main door rah na paaungi
na chaho mujhe itna
ki main khud ko sambhaal na paaungi...
na pukaaro pyar se yun mujhe
ki main khud ko bhool jaaungi
na phailao baahen meri aor
ki main khud ko rok na paaungi...
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2008, 04:14:21 PM » |
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 Good one Punam!!
na aao itna qareeb mere
ki main door rah na paaungi
na chaho mujhe itna
ki main khud ko sambhaal na paaungi...
na pukaaro pyar se yun mujhe
ki main khud ko bhool jaaungi
na phailao baahen meri aor
ki main khud ko rok na paaungi...
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2008, 05:05:57 PM » |
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Wah Kya baat Hai Punam.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Behad Pyaare Alfaaz Likhe hain.. Great Work
**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2008, 09:58:03 PM » |
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Bohot khoob bohot achha andaaz he..
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2008, 06:20:37 PM » |
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What a smash!
suniye punam: ye pahla kalam hai jo rajguru ko bhaya hai...
hats off to you... carry on..
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2008, 06:52:58 PM » |
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Thanx pooja di...chalo aap k acha laga...
Thanx a lot..Mann ji ..aaj kal aap kuch likh nahi rahe...chalo koi nahi iss thread dekhe aap ko acha laga yehi bahot hai....
syyid ji haosla afzai k liye sukriya...
Thanx sammual ji ....
Rajguru jee,,, Mujhe nahin maloom par aap ne is kavita ki antaraatma ko dekh liya hai...
Haan dil se likhi hui kavita hai... Aap ko keval sukriya hi kehe sakti hun...isse bada kya hota hai mujhe pata nahi...
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2008, 07:13:22 AM » |
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Na karo koi sawaal mujhse
ki main jawaab de na paaungi
na puchho mujhse kuchh
ki main jhoot bol na paaungi...
na bolo karte ho pyar mujhse
ki main inkaar kar na paaungi
na dekho meri aor aise
ki main aankh mila na paaungi...
na aao itna qareeb mere
ki main door rah na paaungi
na chaho mujhe itna
ki main khud ko sambhaal na paaungi...
na pukaaro pyar se yun mujhe
ki main khud ko bhool jaaungi
na phailao baahen meri aor
ki main khud ko rok na paaungi...
acha lagaa kai dino baad aapko padhna... Netra... |
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2008, 08:27:14 AM » |
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Na karo koi sawaal mujhse
ki main jawaab de na paaungi
na puchho mujhse kuchh
ki main jhoot bol na paaungi...
na bolo karte ho pyar mujhse
ki main inkaar kar na paaungi
na dekho meri aor aise
ki main aankh mila na paaungi...
na aao itna qareeb mere
ki main door rah na paaungi
na chaho mujhe itna
ki main khud ko sambhaal na paaungi...
na pukaaro pyar se yun mujhe
ki main khud ko bhool jaaungi
na phailao baahen meri aor
ki main khud ko rok na paaungi...
its great........simple words and hammering effect..... bahoot achchi kavita........har line suljhi hui...good work punam |
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chotu
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2008, 02:02:09 PM » |
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awesome poetry  |
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2008, 11:23:14 AM » |
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acha lagaa kai dino baad aapko padhna...
Netra...
Thanx Netra ji... |
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2008, 11:26:29 AM » |
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its great........simple words and hammering effect.....
bahoot achchi kavita........har line suljhi hui...good work punam
sukriya sanjeev bhaiya...bas aaplogon ki aashirvad aur sath chahiye...
main toh koshish hi kar rahi hun kuch likhne ki... |
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2008, 11:32:10 AM » |
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awesome poetry
Thanx chotu ji...Bohat Khoob Punam Ji
Bohat Pyaara Likha Hai Aapne...
Lagey Raho.
Sukriya shihab ji...aap aaye yehan aap ko acha laga..yeh bahot hai...
bahot hi pyara likha hai aap ne ...thanx... |
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2008, 02:44:25 PM » |
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Dil ki Gehraiyon mein, Utarkar To dekho
Mohabbat Ke Samuder Mein Doob Kar To Dekho
Karta Hai Har Koi Pyaar Is Duniya Mein
Apni Palkon Ko Zara Sa Uthakar To Dekho.
Karenge Tumhe Itna Pyaar.e.HumDum Mere
Apni Baahon Mein Hume Lekar To Dekho
Kabhi Na Chhodenge Tanha Is Safar Mein Hum
Humsafar Apna Humein, Banakar To Dekho.
Milega Aapko Pyaar Hi Pyaar Yahana se
Bus Ek Baar Humse Dil Laga Kar To Dekho.
bahoot khoob Shihab!! |
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2008, 04:07:34 AM » |
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punam ji aap ka topic "Dil he bohot kamzor mera" nihayat umda he,
jee chaha is par kuchh arz karun, lihaza ye chand ash'aar pesh-e-khidmat he.
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on eTI community..
