Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera..... -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: June 27, 2008, 04:27:55 AM »

wah wah randeri sahab koob kaha aapne.......


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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #16 on: June 27, 2008, 06:57:53 AM »

chote mote banto par bawaal nahi karte
sacha chane wale kabhe sawal nahi karte icon_flower


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #17 on: June 28, 2008, 01:41:10 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on June 27, 2008, 04:27:55 AM

wah wah randeri sahab koob kaha aapne.......

Shukriy bekarar bhai, aap ne izzat bakhshi.


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punam

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #18 on: June 28, 2008, 05:04:51 AM »

Sayyid ji sukriya ...yehan aap aaye padhe aur kuch likhe dekh ke bahot acha laga..

bahot khoob likhe aap...


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syednaami

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #19 on: June 28, 2008, 05:21:24 AM »

Meri chhahat agar savaal hai, -
Javaab uska tera visaal hai, -
Mere batoon se khafa ho kyun, -
Khaamoshi se dil beqarar hai. –

Josh men hosh khone ka maqaam hai, -
Na mila tera pyar woh bhi swikaar hai, -
Mila kar dekhlo aankhen abhi, -
Ya kahdo manzoor nahin tera pyar hai. –

Qurbat milegi teri yeh aas hai, -
Door ho kyun shayad koi raaz hai, -
Chaahat pe karti ho meri aitbaar, -
Aake kahdo yahi mera pyar hai. –

Awaaz ko tumne apni dabaya hai, -
Maloom nahin kaisi teri kaya hai, -
Kyun tum humse chhupao kuchh, -
Kya tumne Naami ko ghalat paya hai. –

(Syed Naami)

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Wah Punam Saahiba,,, yeh Nazm jab padhi tab se kuchh likhne ka socha tha par busy hone ke baais main yahan par na likh paya...
Khair,,, aap ne yun to lajawaab kar diya par mahfil men aakar yunhi chup rahna bhi thheek nahin hai... is liye kuchh khaas to nahin par aam si paishkash arz karta hun... Qabool ho...


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sarthika

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #20 on: June 28, 2008, 05:24:30 AM »

bahoot khoob Punam, Shihab and Sami jee


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rajguru

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #21 on: June 28, 2008, 10:04:51 AM »

Suniye Punam: Jo bhi dil se likha hota hai vo khubsurat hota hai..
aisa mera man na hai..
aur ye kavita such main khubsoorat hai..
aapka ye andaaz aur nikhare aisi dua karta hu..

Quote from: punam on June 24, 2008, 06:52:58 PM

Thanx pooja di...chalo aap k acha laga...

Thanx a lot..Mann ji ..aaj kal aap kuch likh nahi rahe...chalo koi nahi iss thread dekhe aap ko acha laga yehi bahot hai....

syyid ji haosla afzai k liye sukriya...

Thanx sammual ji ....

Rajguru jee,,, Mujhe nahin maloom par aap ne is kavita ki antaraatma ko dekh liya hai...
Haan dil se likhi hui kavita hai... Aap ko keval sukriya hi kehe sakti hun...isse bada kya hota hai mujhe pata nahi...


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punam

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #22 on: June 28, 2008, 11:10:40 AM »

sukriya rajguru ji..aap sab ki dua sath ho...aur kya chahiye...
thanx a lot...


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punam

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #23 on: June 28, 2008, 11:21:13 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 27, 2008, 04:07:34 AM

punam ji aap ka topic "Dil he bohot kamzor mera" nihayat umda he,
jee chaha is par kuchh arz karun, lihaza ye chand ash'aar pesh-e-khidmat he.

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bahot khoob syyid ji...aap jaisa likh nahi sakti par reply me kuch likhne ki koshish ki hun..

na zid karo aaj kuch aise tum
ke main haar maan jaungi tumhare zid ke aage..

na karo mujhse muhabbat itni
ke jee na paungi tumse juda hoke...

na karo giriftaar mujrim samjh ke mujhe
ke riha hona na chaahun tumhare qaid men aake..

na kaho dil hai buhat kamzore tumhara
ke dil men ghar kar ke baith jaun aake...


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punam

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #24 on: June 28, 2008, 12:42:47 PM »

sukriya shihab ji...aap bhi kuch likhte..


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punam

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #25 on: June 28, 2008, 12:46:31 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on June 28, 2008, 05:21:24 AM

kya khoob likha aap ne ..der se sahi aaye reply kiye yehi bahot hai...

tumhara pyar aaj saath hai
dil me kal ka khaof hai
dil ka haal behaal hai
tum bin jeena dushwaar hai...

raaz dil ka aaj main
laa di zuban pe jaan le
ab faisla tum pe hai
bas jawaab ka intezaar hai...

dil me aaj toofan hai
daba ke muskurana muhaal hai
tumhe kaise samjhaaun main
dil kitna bechain hai...


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #26 on: June 29, 2008, 04:48:50 AM »

Quote from: punam on June 28, 2008, 11:21:13 AM

Badi khushi hui punam ji aap ne kaafi waqt diya or bohot kubsurat likha, allah kare zor-e-sukhan or zyada.


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Pooja

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #27 on: June 30, 2008, 05:14:41 PM »

bahoot khoob Sami, Punam and Sayyid jee!!!


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2008, 11:19:24 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on June 30, 2008, 05:14:41 PM

bahoot khoob Sami, Punam and Sayyid jee!!!

Shukriya pooja ji.


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punam

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Re: Dil Hai Bahot Kamzor Mera.....

«Reply #29 on: July 04, 2008, 04:45:14 PM »

Thanx sayyid ji...and Pooja di...


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