Dil Hai Ghamgeen Bahot...

by Iqtedar on August 22, 2013, 07:34:15 PM
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Dil Hai Ghamgeen Bahot Ashk Baha Lene Do
Dil Se Tasweer-e-Butan Apne Laga Lene Do

Kaahe Ko Door Raho Aao Qareen Paas Raho
Pyaas Nazron Ki Mujhe Aaj Bujha Lene Do

Dard Ki Taab Nahi Hai To Bahot Door Raho
Caah Hai Gham Ki To Seene Se Laga Lene Do

Dard Imkaan Se Badh Jaye To Darman Nahi (Darman = Elaaj)
Haath May Aaj Mujhe Jaam Utha Lene Do

Gham-e-Jaana Ki Qhasam Dard Utha Hai Dil May
Apni Parchaai Sahi Dil May Basa Lene Do

Souz Wade Pe Bahot Cham-e-Ghazalan Ke Mere
Yaad Ki Shamma Gaye Raat Jala Lene Do

By my father ‘Late Mohtaram M. A. Hussain Souz Sahab’.
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2013, 08:08:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

hats off to your father... Usual Smile

bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai iqtedar bhai.. Usual Smile

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2013, 08:37:57 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob ....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2013, 08:57:18 PM »
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Shukriya Touhid bhai, Hriday ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2013, 09:49:58 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal . bahut daad aur marhoom ke haq mein duaa e maghfirat .
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2013, 10:07:59 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai Iqtedar saheb
aur ghazal section me post karna chahiye tha aapko

Aapko fakhra hona chahiye, ye ilm aapko virasat me mila hai.

bahut bahut umda
har sher laajavaab..
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2013, 10:14:45 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal . bahut daad aur marhoom ke haq mein duaa e maghfirat .
Asalamalaekum Sir,,, JazakAllah Khaer...
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2013, 10:19:10 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai Iqtedar saheb
aur ghazal section me post karna chahiye tha aapko

Aapko fakhra hona chahiye, ye ilm aapko virasat me mila hai.

bahut bahut umda
har sher laajavaab..

Shukriya mkv ji, aapki baten sach may bahot achi lagi - thanks again Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2013, 10:26:09 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Behatreen ghazal hai..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2013, 10:59:18 PM »
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aise naadir qalaam se ru ba ru karwaane ke like bahaut bahaut shukriya apka .... lajawaab aur bemisaal ghazal hai !!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2013, 01:07:40 AM »
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Nashwani ji shukriya Usual Smile
Zarraa ji pasand karne ka shukriya Usual Smile
Acha lagta hai jab apne walid ke likhe ki tareef sunta hoon to Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2013, 12:38:48 PM »
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wah wah dhero daad Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2013, 01:00:12 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero daad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2013, 01:49:38 PM »
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Khoobsurat sharing iqtedar ji... allah un par reham farmaaye.. aameen...
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Nandbahu ji, Prashad ji pasand karne ka shukriya Usual Smile
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