dil jalaya humne

by saahill on November 13, 2011, 01:28:15 PM
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kar na sake hum apne pyaR ki raushni unke dil mein .

Dil ko jalaya humne aur dil ko bhi khaak kiya.

Sahil
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«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2011, 02:04:04 PM »
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bahut khub saahil ji... kuch jod raha hu ish line me..


kar na sake hum apne pyar ki raushni unke dil me.,

raushni mili unhe bahut jab apne dil ko jalaya humne..
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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2011, 03:16:40 PM »
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thx tauheed sahib sath dene ke liye . Waise apki line achi hai .

By mistake incmplete reh gaya use complete kar diya
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2011, 05:27:22 PM »
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Nice One sahil jee daad

And touhid jee aapne bhi khoob kaha daad..


Hum bhi kuch kah dete hai tongue3


Ho naa paaye hum unki dil e aarzoo
Dil ko unke kadmoN mein bichayaa bhi 

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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2011, 04:33:50 AM »
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bahut khub ,,,sahil ji
kar na sake hum apne pyaR ki raushni unke dil mein .

Dil ko jalaya humne aur dil ko bhi khaak kiya.

Sahil

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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2011, 05:20:36 AM »
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thx parwaz sahib and sunil ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2011, 06:24:53 AM »
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Superb creation Sahill ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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