DIL KARE..........

by Naya_Daur on December 16, 2005, 10:16:55 AM
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Dil käre  Geet bän tere bullän te äwän  
         Dil käre  Pänchi bän ämbäri udäh jäwän  
         Dil käre  Bnä ek tärä käde chämkä käde tut jäwän  
         Dil käre  Bän teri äkh dä äthru tere sääre dukh pee jäwän. ?
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2005, 03:52:00 PM »
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nice one dear..... keep it up.... punjabi words na.... tongue3
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2005, 08:06:04 AM »
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i guess u dont understand punajbi words,, sorry for inconvience,,,but i write in punjabi,,
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2005, 06:05:04 AM »
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Dil käre  Geet bän tere bullän te äwän  
         Dil käre  Pänchi bän ämbäri udäh jäwän  
         Dil käre  Bnä ek tärä käde chämkä käde tut jäwän  
         Dil käre  Bän teri äkh dä äthru tere sääre dukh pee jäwän. ?

wowowowoowowo.....
waise mujhe punjabi samjh nahin aati hai lekin i understood ur poem..........it's meaning full.....and it's really nice....thanxxx fro the grt share......
keep it up.....
tc
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2005, 08:13:55 AM »
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thnks!!!!!!!
aap bhi bhut achha likhti hain chanda ji,,
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2006, 07:42:02 PM »
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Teri yaad dilon bhula nahi sakde
lakh chauan te v yaar tere jeha pa nahi sakde
manea k waqt ne thodi dur kar dita
par ik duje de dil ton dur ja nahi sakde..
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