Dil ke aaine me....

by punam on December 28, 2007, 11:56:15 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 02, 2008, 05:20:03 PM »
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prem ji thanx...
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«Reply #16 on: January 02, 2008, 05:23:29 PM »
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Samir ji bahot khoob reply diye aap ne...
ab mujhe kya likhun samjh me nahi aaya..bas kuch toh likh di hun...

jab jab woh saamne aaye.
bahot kuch kehna chaha..
bahot kuch poochna chaha...

suna tha jo dil mera ..
aaj usme yeh awaaz hai kaisa..
khwaabon me aaj yeh roop hai kiska..
kahi woh toh nahi.. yeh unse poochna chaha..

iradon me aaj yeh armaan kiska
dil ke aaine me yeh tasveer hai kiska..
nazron ko aaj intezaar hai kiska..
kahi woh toh nahi.. yeh unse puchna chaha..

padh chuki thi dil main unka
dikhta tha pyar hi pyar aankhon me jo unka..

kehena toh maine unse bahot kuch chaha
chahti hun kitna unko batana chaha..

par saamne jab bhi unko paaya
lab tak aake ruk gayi baat.. kuch bhi main keh na payi
dab ke rehgayi sab dil me..
jo kuch maine kehna chaha...
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«Reply #17 on: January 02, 2008, 05:27:07 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB PUNAMJI,PEHLE WALA SHER THA BAHUT KHUMARI KE SAATH LIKHA GAYA HAI...SAMIR AAP NE BHI BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..
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«Reply #18 on: January 04, 2008, 05:10:03 PM »
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Quote from: punam on January 02, 2008, 05:23:29 PM
Samir ji bahot khoob reply diye aap ne...
ab mujhe kya likhun samjh me nahi aaya..bas kuch toh likh di hun...

jab jab woh saamne aaye.
bahot kuch kehna chaha..
bahot kuch poochna chaha...

suna tha jo dil mera ..
aaj usme yeh awaaz hai kaisa..
khwaabon me aaj yeh roop hai kiska..
kahi woh toh nahi.. yeh unse poochna chaha..

iradon me aaj yeh armaan kiska
dil ke aaine me yeh tasveer hai kiska..
nazron ko aaj intezaar hai kiska..
kahi woh toh nahi.. yeh unse puchna chaha..

padh chuki thi dil main unka
dikhta tha pyar hi pyar aankhon me jo unka..

kehena toh maine unse bahot kuch chaha
chahti hun kitna unko batana chaha..

par saamne jab bhi unko paaya
lab tak aake ruk gayi baat.. kuch bhi main keh na payi
dab ke rehgayi sab dil me..
jo kuch maine kehna chaha...

thanks punam ji n khwaish ji,punam jo ap jo bhi likhti hai acha likhti hain, nice one again

apki khamoshi ab hume tadpa rahi hai,
kiyon chup hai aap kiyon hume sata rahin hai
jo bhi puchna chahti ho puchti kiyon nahi humse
bharosa nahi humper kiya isiliye chupa rahi hain

sunna chahte hain hum bhi awaz tumhare dil ki
yeh dhadkane tumhari kiske geet ga rahi hain
hum bhi tadap rahe hain , armaan jag rahe hain
tasveer apki humare bhi khayalon pe chha  rahi hai

dil me jo bhi hai humare bata chuke hain hum sab
per ap kehne me kiyon itna sharma rahi hain
kehna chahti ho to keh bhi to apna samjhke humko
mann hi mann hume bus chahe ja rahi hain

dil me daba ke baaton ko rakhna nahi kabhi bhi
keh bhi do aap jo bhi kehna chah rahi hain
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«Reply #19 on: January 05, 2008, 11:57:42 AM »
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Nice reply again sameer ji...
thanx.. aap ko meri likhi huyi shayari pasand aayi...

pooch rahe wo humse..hum unhe chahte hain kitna
dil ke aaine me hai tasveer kiska
shayad meri chahat pe unko bharosa nahi..

pyar karte hain mujhse aur ye sochte hain
mujhe unse mohabbat hai ya nahi

dekh unhe pal me padh sakti hun dil
par aaj tak wo mujhe samajh paye nahi

samajhti hun main wo chahte hai mujhe
darte hai kahi kho na de mujhe...

karte hain wo mujhse pyar jo itna
bar bar pooch rahe wo hamse...hum unhe chahte hain kitna...
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«Reply #20 on: January 05, 2008, 12:33:22 PM »
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Very Nice Thread Punam...
And Good Contributions by Everyone here...
Sab Poetry bahut achhi likhi hai yahan... Usual Smile

Good Going.. Winking
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«Reply #21 on: January 07, 2008, 11:57:21 AM »
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"nazar mila na sake hum unse to kya gam hai,
 dil se dil ka rishta to bana."
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«Reply #22 on: January 08, 2008, 04:09:58 AM »
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Good one


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punam
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«Reply #23 on: January 08, 2008, 12:00:11 PM »
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Thanx shikha di..Hema ji.and javedarshad ji...
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«Reply #24 on: January 09, 2008, 03:09:37 PM »
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wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Punam..Usual Smile Usual Smile

Sab ek se badh Kar ek ... Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: January 10, 2008, 01:25:55 PM »
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Bohot khoob Punam, very nice thread and good ones by Badal and Samir... Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: January 10, 2008, 09:50:37 PM »
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NICE PUNAM AND SAMIR
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«Reply #27 on: January 11, 2008, 02:10:47 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Likha Hain Sabne, Bohat Accha Aaghaz Tha Punam Ji.
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punam
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«Reply #28 on: January 11, 2008, 04:37:24 PM »
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Thanx Vicky ji..Talat di..Pooja di...aur Ravi ji...
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«Reply #29 on: January 11, 2008, 07:21:54 PM »
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Good one punam and samir
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