Dil ke darwaaze -Panna 8:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #105 on: February 24, 2008, 11:44:38 AM »


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #106 on: February 24, 2008, 11:54:47 AM »

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Dil ke darwaaze sey yaadon ke rishta kal bhi tha aur aaj bhi hai
Dil ke darwaaze sey tanha hoon mein aaj bhi hoon

Kyun durr hua tum meri nighaon sey teri raha tak jahu akele pal pal
Dil ke darwaaze sey kabhi waqt mile toh lout aana

Yeh dil ka dard samjh jana mere sanam..
Hum toot gaye hai iss duri mein..

Aapki khushi meri sar aankhon par.
Khawab jhoota kissi ko dikhaya nahi karte

Meri jaan yuhi aapne honeyrose ko satya nahi karte
Dil ke darwaaze sey yaadon ke rishta kal bhi tha aur aaj bhi hai

Honey aap bahut accha likhti hai. But

kahi kahi yeh line "dil ke darwaze" jam nahi raha rhytematic nahi hai.
jaise

Dil ke darwaaze sey kabhi waqt mile toh lout aana

Kyun durr huwe tum meri nighaon sey
Teri raah dekhkar pal pal guzar rahi hu
kabhi waqt mile toh lout aana pyar mere

aisa kuch likhe to shayad accha hota.
Her line pe Dil ke darwaaze likhna zaruri nahi hai
Sorry aapko bura lage to mafi chahungi.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #107 on: February 24, 2008, 11:58:02 AM »

Wow really nice Roja..i really loved those line bohat acha hai dear .. Usual Smile


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #108 on: February 24, 2008, 03:56:39 PM »

Nice One Didi,.
And Nice One Roja Sis,.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #109 on: February 28, 2008, 12:46:42 PM »

Shukriya Azeem bro..

Mere nazar sey ek bhar dekh loh
Iss dil mein pyaar hi pyaar hai dekh loh

Sarey rasmo rewaj ko tohd kar aaye ho dekh loh
Durr tak saath janmo ka rishta hai humare dekh loh

Aapke pyaar mein nawaazish mangte hai dekh loh
Lambi umar ki duwa mangte hai dekh loh

Meri nazar se kabhi jo ek dafa dekh loh
Apne liye pyar hi pyar chahat hai dekh loh.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #110 on: February 28, 2008, 12:49:44 PM »

Bahot khoob di..bahot acha likha aapne..


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #111 on: February 28, 2008, 12:54:40 PM »

Shukriya punam.. Usual Smile


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #112 on: February 28, 2008, 04:36:54 PM »

Bahoot Khoob Didi Jaan,.
Har Baar Ki taraah kamaal ka Likha Hai Aapne,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #113 on: February 28, 2008, 05:35:31 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 28, 2008, 04:36:54 PM

Bahoot Khoob Didi Jaan,.
Har Baar Ki taraah kamaal ka Likha Hai Aapne,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

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Shukriya Azeem bro ji.. Usual Smile


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #114 on: February 28, 2008, 06:24:55 PM »

Mein sadiyon sey tanhai mein chur hoon
Mujhe aapne pyaar mein mukammal kardo..

Ek adhi pyaas hai ushe poora kardo..
Na dekhi zameen na aasmaan mere armano ko poora kardo..

Jab tak hai ruh mein ek pyaar ki talab woh poora kardo
Akele hoon mein ruswa hoon main tum mujhe aapna naam kardo..


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #115 on: February 29, 2008, 02:49:25 PM »

Aapse milte hi kitni jaldi yeh mulakat guzar jata hai
Ishq ki pyaas bujh nahi paati aur waqt guzar jata hai

Aapke yaadon mein dubkar raaton ki needh guzar jata hai
Har din har saal ek bojh si guzar jata hai..

Iss bevajah udaasi ka sabab na guzar jata hai
Yeh toh waaqif hai ke pyaar ka imtihan na guzar jata hai..

Nakaam hasraton ka silsila na guzar jata hai
Aapse milte hi kitni jaldi yeh mulakat guzar jata hai.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #116 on: March 02, 2008, 12:01:09 PM »

U Are Welcome Sis,.
And Nice One Again,.
Lage Raho,.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #117 on: March 02, 2008, 12:01:55 PM »

Nice One Majid Bhai,.


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #118 on: March 02, 2008, 12:47:35 PM »

Thank you majid aur Azeem bro.. Usual Smile


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Re: Dil ke darwaaze

«Reply #119 on: March 02, 2008, 02:35:51 PM »

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Ek adhi pyaas hai ushe poora kardo..
Na dekhi zameen na aasmaan mere armano ko poora kardo..

hahaha.. yeh kya likh dala Honey... Jin k liye aapne likha
yeh pade to bemaut marjayenge...hahaha.. hassi bahut aa rahi hai.
Keep flowing your emotions... We are always here to read you.


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