Dil ke darwaaze

by honeyrose on January 29, 2008, 08:46:32 PM
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«Reply #345 on: July 13, 2008, 10:18:48 AM »
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 Applause super lines syed...

Nice lines sonia ..
Thanks palu...

Dastak hum dete hi rahe
Aap kisi khyalon mein khoye hue rahe
Kaise yaqeen dilai humare muhabbat aapse
Mere maut tak intazaar karungi dilse
Iss dil se nahi mitne denge aapka naam marte marte
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«Reply #346 on: July 13, 2008, 10:41:43 AM »
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Kuchh log samjhe nahin,,
Mere alfaaz ko,,
Baat ki thi par jami nahin,,
Dastak to kuchh nahin,,
Humne to deewar phalaang li,,
Unke dil men ghus kar bhi,,
Unki muhabbat na mil saki..


Dil ki baat hai
samajne wale samaj jayenge
Diwar chalan marne ki kya hai zarurat
Darwaza dil ka khulla rakho pyarse
Aayega wo din bahar bankar aapke zindagi mein
Tab charo tarah pyar hi pyar paoge ek din..
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punam
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«Reply #347 on: July 13, 2008, 10:48:00 AM »
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bahot khoob Palkhi.. syed ji..sonu..Honey di...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #348 on: July 13, 2008, 11:01:15 AM »
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Thank you punam dear aapne kuch nahi likha tongue3
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syednaami
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«Reply #349 on: July 13, 2008, 05:54:59 PM »
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bahot khoob Palkhi.. syed ji..sonu..Honey di...
Shukriya jee,,, aap to kuchh likhye... Punam Saahiba...
Dil ki baat hai
samajne wale samaj jayenge
Diwar chalan marne ki kya hai zarurat
Darwaza dil ka khulla rakho pyarse
Aayega wo din bahar bankar aapke zindagi mein
Tab charo tarah pyar hi pyar paoge ek din..


Dil ke dareeche band hone ko hain,,
Kon ab milneko hai kya khabar hamen..
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«Reply #350 on: July 14, 2008, 01:48:09 PM »
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Nice One Sabne Achcha Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #351 on: July 14, 2008, 02:48:17 PM »
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Thanks Punam dear,,thanks Azeem bro..

Agar samajh na hi tha to kyun door hain humse
Aankhon se roshni kyun lete chale hain humse
Tumare nazar se duniya dekhte hue chalte hain
Aapki muskurahat dil mein chupaye hue chalte hain
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«Reply #352 on: July 14, 2008, 02:57:51 PM »
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Teinku Punam Di..... tongue3

     Wonderful going Sonia Di, Syed Ji nd Gulab Di!!! tongue3

   Jab Bhi Teri Yaad Athi Thi Tho Inn Honton Par Ek Ajaab Si Muskurahaat Ahh Jathi Thi,
    Jab Bhi Tera Naam Lehthi Thi Tho Dil Ki Dharkan Ek Pal Kai Liyai Rookh Si Jathi Thi,
  Jab Bhi Tum Pass Athai Thai Tho Lagtha Tha Jaise Iss Dhoonya Or Koy Nahin Humare Siva,
  Jab Bhi Teri Ankhoon Mein Dehkthi Thi Tho Appnai Liyai Chuppa Hua Pyar Unmein Dehkthi Thi.....
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«Reply #353 on: July 15, 2008, 04:17:04 AM »
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Beautiful HoneyRose jee...
Superb Sabah...
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palkhi
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«Reply #354 on: July 15, 2008, 02:44:18 PM »
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thanks syed ji.....thanks shihab ji......... tongue3
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«Reply #355 on: July 15, 2008, 04:00:13 PM »
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Dil ke darwaze main aaj tala lag gaya
Jo socha nahi woh aaj hota gaya

Dil ke kareeb kisii ko basaya
Aaj usne hi dil ko todkar chalte paya

Yeh pyar yeh wade jhoote nazar aaya
Is badi dunia main khud huwe paraya







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«Reply #356 on: July 15, 2008, 09:01:54 PM »
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Kis ka darvaza aaj band ho gaya,,
Socha nahin tha ab soch ke hoga kya,,

Dil ke qareeb kyun basaaya tha,,
Dil ke andar hi ghar banaana tha,,

Jhoot sach ki kahan thi khabar aapko,,
Pyar ki khaatir kabhi khud ko jalaya hota..

Kahte ho bemuravvat is duniya ko,,
Munh mod kar to khud bhi jaa rahe ho na..

Ek khat nahin likh sakte the tum,,
Hum ne hi ghair ko apna banaya tha..

|Syed Naami|
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«Reply #357 on: July 17, 2008, 01:09:37 AM »
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OMG............... Sonia di nd Syed Ji.........just fabulous!!!!!!!!...........
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«Reply #358 on: July 17, 2008, 10:19:07 AM »
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Dil ke darwaze main aaj tala lag gaya
Jo socha nahi woh aaj hota gaya

Dil ke kareeb kisii ko basaya
Aaj usne hi dil ko todkar chalte paya

Yeh pyar yeh wade jhoote nazar aaya
Is badi dunia main khud huwe paraya








Applause Nice lines Sonia...



Kis ka darvaza aaj band ho gaya,,
Socha nahin tha ab soch ke hoga kya,,

Dil ke qareeb kyun basaaya tha,,
Dil ke andar hi ghar banaana tha,,

Jhoot sach ki kahan thi khabar aapko,,
Pyar ki khaatir kabhi khud ko jalaya hota..

Kahte ho bemuravvat is duniya ko,,
Munh mod kar to khud bhi jaa rahe ho na..

Ek khat nahin likh sakte the tum,,
Hum ne hi ghair ko apna banaya tha..

|Syed Naami|


 Applause Wah kamaal ka likha hai Syed aapne

Shukriya Palu ,,Shihab..



Dil ka khel khelte khelte khilona bangaye
Tumari chahat mein intezaar karte karte pujaran bangaye

Dil ka darwaaza khula hi tha joh aapne iss beech dewaar bana diye
Kadam kadam pe khaaton ke bichone pe aapne paron se chalte gaye

Samjaye na samje the hum aapne dil ki baat ek raaz bana diye
Dil ka khel khelte khelte ek afsaana bangaye
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«Reply #359 on: July 17, 2008, 01:43:54 PM »
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Bahoot Khoib Doston,.
yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
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