Dil ke darwaaze

by honeyrose on January 29, 2008, 08:46:32 PM
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«Reply #75 on: February 07, 2008, 02:02:32 PM »
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::)uff Honey kya likh diya hai aapne.. Roll Eyes

Pyar k her kadam pe hai mushkile
Her kadam pe hai kante..

Apna dil ka darwaza sambalkar kholo
Kahi phoolon ki jagah kanton se mulakaat na ho teri
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«Reply #76 on: February 07, 2008, 02:09:24 PM »
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Likha To Bahoot Badiya Hai Aapne Bhi Roja Sis,.
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«Reply #77 on: February 07, 2008, 02:10:27 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on February 07, 2008, 12:49:36 AM
Dil ke darwaaze ki chaabi mil gayi mujhe yaaro
Kaun hai chandramukhi aur kaun hai yahan paro Roll Eyes
Chalo aaj unke dil ke darwaaze ko khol dete hain
Dil mein liye phirte hain kya armaan zara woh bhi dekh lete hain Winking


hmm Raj bhaiya bahut accha kaam kiya chavi doond nikale aapne. Aapka kalyaan ho... aur Madam Honey itna accha aap k naam pe
aur likha hai... Read those lines... and enjoyyyy..
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«Reply #78 on: February 07, 2008, 02:15:35 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 07, 2008, 02:02:32 PM
::)uff Honey kya likh diya hai aapne.. Roll Eyes

Pyar k her kadam pe hai mushkile
Her kadam pe hai kante..

Apna dil ka darwaza sambalkar kholo
Kahi phoolon ki jagah kanton se mulakaat na ho teri




...

Aap jaise phool mile dostho ka..
Toh kya gum-e-zindagi humhe.. Usual Smile

Haan dil ke darwaaze to..
Sirf unke liye kulle gha..
Joh iss dil ka hai shezada hamesha..


Dil ke darwaaze hai pyaar ke darwaaza..
Aap aur humara dosthi ka darwaaza
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«Reply #79 on: February 07, 2008, 02:30:34 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 07, 2008, 02:15:35 PM
Quote from: Roja on February 07, 2008, 02:02:32 PM
::)uff Honey kya likh diya hai aapne.. Roll Eyes

Pyar k her kadam pe hai mushkile
Her kadam pe hai kante..

Apna dil ka darwaza sambalkar kholo
Kahi phoolon ki jagah kanton se mulakaat na ho teri




...

Aap jaise phool mile dostho ka..
Toh kya gum-e-zindagi humhe.. Usual Smile

Haan dil ke darwaaze to..
Sirf unke liye kulle gha..
Joh iss dil ka hai shezada hamesha..


Dil ke darwaaze hai pyaar ke darwaaza..
Aap aur humara dosthi ka darwaaza


Uffffff Diwani :D
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«Reply #80 on: February 07, 2008, 02:33:20 PM »
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Usual Smile Good Going EveryOne.. Winking
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«Reply #81 on: February 07, 2008, 02:57:18 PM »
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Quote from: Shikha12 on February 07, 2008, 02:33:20 PM
Usual Smile Good Going EveryOne.. Winking

Shikha di aap b kuch likh dete to accha hota.
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«Reply #82 on: February 07, 2008, 03:05:08 PM »
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WAH! WAH! WAH!
BAHUT KHOOB HONEY..DIL KO CHU GAYI AAPKI LIKHI LINES.. Usual Smile

PAR PAAJI KO CHAABI KAB MILI Huh?...KAL HI PAAJI NE KAHA THA KE CHAABI GUM GAYI HAI...AUR AAJ MIL BHI GAYI.. :D Grin

AB ZARA HONEY JI DIL KE DARWAAZO KO IRON KA BANWA DO.. Usual Smile

PUNJAB DE PUTTAR HAI RAJBIR PAAJI..DARWAAZA TAKDA HONA CHAHIYE.. :D Grin Winking

KI MAIN KOI JHOOT BOLEYA!!! tongue3 :D Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #83 on: February 07, 2008, 03:29:21 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 07, 2008, 02:57:18 PM
Quote from: Shikha12 on February 07, 2008, 02:33:20 PM
Usual Smile Good Going EveryOne.. Winking

Shikha di aap b kuch likh dete to accha hota.

Well I try Roja...
Mushkil yeh hai ki samajh nahin aa raha, kiski side leni chahiye... Usual Smile

Neways... Here's my try.. Winking

Dil pe yeh pehra sa lagaaya kyon hai,
Muhabbat ke ehsaaso se sajaaya kyon hai...

Bahut Gehraai hai, Isme tanhaai hai,
Jis kisi aankh mein basey yeh,
Wohi ashkon se dabdabaayi hai...
Yeh samunder daaman mein basaaya kyon hai...

Yahan dard aur zakhmon ka bazaar mile,
Yahan jhoothe vaadon ka karobaar mile,
Sacche dil waalon, yeh to kaho,
Jhoothi baaton se khud ko behkaaya kyon hai...

Dil pe darwaazon ko banaaya kyon hai,
Kaid karne ka iraada yeh lagaaya kyon hai...  Huh?
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«Reply #84 on: February 07, 2008, 03:47:49 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 07, 2008, 03:05:08 PM
WAH! WAH! WAH!
BAHUT KHOOB HONEY..DIL KO CHU GAYI AAPKI LIKHI LINES.. Usual Smile

PAR PAAJI KO CHAABI KAB MILI Huh?...KAL HI PAAJI NE KAHA THA KE CHAABI GUM GAYI HAI...AUR AAJ MIL BHI GAYI.. :D Grin

AB ZARA HONEY JI DIL KE DARWAAZO KO IRON KA BANWA DO.. Usual Smile

PUNAB DE PUTTAR HAI RAJBIR PAAJI..DARWAAZA TAKDA HONA CHAHIYE.. :D Grin Winking

KI MAIN KOI JHOOT BOLEYA!!! tongue3 :D Winking Usual Smile
Quote from: Shikha12 on February 07, 2008, 03:29:21 PM
Quote from: Roja on February 07, 2008, 02:57:18 PM
Quote from: Shikha12 on February 07, 2008, 02:33:20 PM
Usual Smile Good Going EveryOne.. Winking

Shikha di aap b kuch likh dete to accha hota.

Well I try Roja...
Mushkil yeh hai ki samajh nahin aa raha, kiski side leni chahiye... Usual Smile

Neways... Here's my try.. Winking

Dil pe yeh pehra sa lagaaya kyon hai,
Muhabbat ke ehsaaso se sajaaya kyon hai...

Bahut Gehraai hai, Isme tanhaai hai,
Jis kisi aankh mein basey yeh,
Wohi ashkon se dabdabaayi hai...
Yeh samunder daaman mein basaaya kyon hai...

Yahan dard aur zakhmon ka bazaar mile,
Yahan jhoothe vaadon ka karobaar mile,
Sacche dil waalon, yeh to kaho,
Jhoothi baaton se khud ko behkaaya kyon hai...

Dil pe darwaazon ko banaaya kyon hai,
Kaid karne ka iraada yeh lagaaya kyon hai...  Huh?


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KHAWISH JI KA REPLY:

Khawish ji mujhe toh nahi pata mere dil loha hai ki nahi lol tongue3
Haan par iss dil pey chaabi itni asaan nahi hai jah yeh..
Yeh toh wohi kulle gha jiske pass hai master key ka khazana..
Waise pair bohat keechi aapne mera, kahi fisal na jahoo mein..Grin tongue3


Shikha ji very very
super lines likha aapne ..
Dil ke darwaaze ko jaan diya aapne.. Usual Smile
Dil ke darwaaze hai dostho ka darwaaze
aur pyaar ka darwaaze
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«Reply #85 on: February 07, 2008, 03:50:15 PM »
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wah kya baat hai ...
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«Reply #86 on: February 08, 2008, 11:36:22 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 07, 2008, 11:24:45 AM
Shukriya azeem bhai aur punam dear.. Usual Smile


Dil ke darwaaze sey chup chupke dekha hai sanam..
Ley aaye hoon mein suhag ka joda sanam.

Bas dulhan banake ley jahoo mujhe sanam.
Iss dard-e-zindagi sey kat tha nahi hai mann..

Dil ke darwaaze sey chupke ley jahoo sanam..
Aaj dil ko hue tasalee aap humare hai meri kush nazeeb..

Aapne aapko na sambhal pah rahi hoon mein..
Dil ke darwaaze sey dekho aapke dil ke kareeb hoon mein

Dil ke darwaaze sey dekh lo mujhe meri khushiyan
zameen ko chumm rahi hai sanam.



Wah kya baat hai honey ji bahoot khub



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«Reply #87 on: February 08, 2008, 12:15:42 PM »
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Dil Ke Darwaaze Par Dastak Kisne Maari Thi,.
Ye Jaan Ne Ke Liye Dil Me Raat se Bekaraari Thi,.

Maana Ke Tumhe Adat Hai Hijaab Me Rehna Ka "Jaanasheen",.
Itna Hi Bataa To Kaafi Hai Jeene Ko, Kya Wo Dastak Tumhari,.
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«Reply #88 on: February 08, 2008, 01:37:35 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 08, 2008, 12:15:42 PM
Dil Ke Darwaaze Par Dastak Kisne Maari Thi,.
Ye Jaan Ne Ke Liye Dil Me Raat se Bekaraari Thi,.

Maana Ke Tumhe Adat Hai Hijaab Me Rehna Ka "Jaanasheen",.
Itna Hi Bataa To Kaafi Hai Jeene Ko, Kya Wo Dastak Tumhari,.



Ohhhhhh Aapka b Dil ke darwaaze pe ab dastak de rahe hai kya?
valla valla.... Further NO COMMENTS...
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«Reply #89 on: February 10, 2008, 06:47:16 AM »
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Dil ke darwaaze sey aaj aapko meine dil diya
Dil ke darwaaze sey kash woh samajhtey
Iis dil ki tadap ko

Chupke sey kahe gayee hai dil ke baatein...
Dil ke darwaaze sey aaj aapko meine dil diya..

Zuban sey na kehe paaye woh haaseen khwab..
Aapke paas na hone ki kami mehsus hoti hai.

Dil mein humare kayi khayal sa utha hai..
Khwab toot ney ka durr humhe hota hai..

Yun hi intezaar mein guzar gayee yaadon ke pal..
Dil ke darwaaze sey aapko meine dil diya..

Hum tere dil mein rahe gayee ek yaad bankar..
Aapke labh pa khilenge hum muskaan bankar..


 
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