Dil Ke Darwazon Pe Phirr Koi Dastak Diya Hai

by jnyana91 on May 18, 2015, 10:14:02 PM
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Dil ke darwazon pe phirr koi dastak diya hai,
Arson se band darwazon ko kholne ki koshis koi kiya hai,

Haathon me guldastan ke saath sapne hazar woh laya hai,
Ojhal in aankhon me ek ummeed phirr koi jagaya hai,

Zindegi jahan tham gayi thi wohi se phirr suru karna hai,
Kyun ki mere naks-e-kadam par chalne ko mujhse wada koi kiya hai,

Ek chehra jisse chand pasand hai,woh mujhe pasand hai,
Usse dil ke dwaar bhej kar khuda! Kya ehsaan kiya hai!

Woh chehra mere liye chaand se uski roshni chura kar laya hai,
Dil ke andheron ko roshandaar karne bahut kareeb koi aaya hai,

Dil ke darwazon pe phirr koi dastak diya hai....

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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2015, 04:51:20 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2015, 07:48:30 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on May 19, 2015, 07:48:30 AM
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Shukriya jeet jee....
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