-----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 03:29:14 PM
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hum milte nahi usse is dar se ki mohabbat naa ho jaaye,
par tanhaayi me yaad jo aati hai, wo uusi ki hoti hai,
nazar nahi milaate usse ki kho na jaayen un aankhon me,
par khwaab raat ko mere aankhon me bas uusi ki hoti hai,

wo sochti hai ki kya huwa wo rishta , kyun toot gayaa,
maanti hai humein bewafaa aur yaad me hamaari roti hai,
kabhi izhaar kiya nahi mohabbat ka usne humse, magar
seene se lagaake hamaari tasveer wo har raat soti hai,

maloom hai humein ki mohabbat thik nahi, dil dukhta hai,
par jaane kyun har baar usse milne ki chaahat hoti hai,
ajaaye wo hamaare saamne to hum hi nazar churaate hain,
koi bataa de mujhe ki dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai?


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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2012, 03:38:25 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Hriday ji dil se daad qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2012, 03:50:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2012, 04:48:06 PM »
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wo sochti hai ki kya huwa wo rishta , kyun toot gayaa,
maanti hai humein bewafaa aur yaad me hamaari roti hai,
kabhi izhaar kiya nahi mohabbat ka usne humse, magar
seene se lagaake hamaari tasveer wo har raat soti hai,

bahut khoob. dil se likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2012, 04:52:36 PM »
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hriday ji bemisal rachna........ bahut hi zabardast likhte hai aap.......aapki rachna padhna bhi ek soubhgya ki baat hai.......is khubsurt aur umda qalaam ke liye dhero daad aur dhero mubarakbaad .... aur meri tarah se ek cadbury dairy milk jo maine apni tarah se best rachna likhne walo ko dene ki sochi hai rau ki jagah.... happy3 happy3

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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2012, 05:55:56 PM »
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Bohat Khub, i really liked the last four lines....

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Mohabbat Ko Dard Samaj Kar Khud Ko Na Tadpaya Kijiye,
Pyar Jab Bhi Kheeche Mere Aur Bas Chale Aaya Kijiye,
Aa Kar Samne Yun Nazron Ka Churana Thik Nahi Jaana,
Ishq Mein Hosh Luta Kar Aalam Madhoshi Ka Paya Kijiye..!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2012, 06:03:56 PM »
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BOHOT KHObsooray  hello2  Clapping Smiley  notworthy  icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2012, 06:27:52 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooo much Shireen ji.....!!! aapne bahut bahut khoobsurat jawaab likha hai... jiske jawaab me maine ek chhoti si koshish ki hai....!!!

chehraa bas tumhaaraa hi hai aankhon me shaam aur sawere,
kya karun, kya naa karun kuch samajh me aataa nahi mere,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi ki sab kuch keh du tumse, magar
dekh lun tumhe to baaki kuch bhi samajh me aataa nahi mere...


Quote from: Shireen Hakani on June 22, 2012, 05:55:56 PM
Bohat Khub, i really liked the last four lines....

Applause Applause Applause

Mohabbat Ko Dard Samaj Kar Khud Ko Na Tadpaya Kijiye,
Pyar Jab Bhi Kheeche Mere Aur Bas Chale Aaya Kijiye,
Aa Kar Samne Yun Nazron Ka Churana Thik Nahi Jaana,
Ishq Mein Hosh Luta Kar Aalam Madhoshi Ka Paya Kijiye..!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2012, 06:29:17 PM »
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Hriday jee
Hum to pahle hi apko "Muhabbat" topic ka ustaad kah chuke hai...aapse accha koee nahee likh sakta.
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2012, 02:49:29 AM »
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Very NICE Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2012, 11:26:37 AM »
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Bohat Khub Hriday Jee Applause Applause Applause


Subah Shaam Aap Ka Basera Rehta Hai Meri Aankho Mein,
Puchta Dil Kaisa Hai Sama Us Paar Sajan Teri Aankho Mein,
Pyar Ke Jadu Se Lagti Hai Duniya Rangeen Khawabo Jaisi,
Intezar Mein Hoti Hai Bin Mausam Barsaat Meri Aankho Mein..!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2012, 12:48:00 PM »
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bahut acche janaab
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2012, 01:15:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shireen ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause

in aankhon se tum motiyon ko yun zaayaa naa karo,
meri mohabbat ko is tarha tum aazmaayaa naa karo,
hum to hamesha yahi chaahte hain ki tum khush raho,
bahaake apne aansoo meri mohabbat ko tadpaayaa naa karo...

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on June 23, 2012, 11:26:37 AM
Bohat Khub Hriday Jee Applause Applause Applause


Subah Shaam Aap Ka Basera Rehta Hai Meri Aankho Mein,
Puchta Dil Kaisa Hai Sama Us Paar Sajan Teri Aankho Mein,
Pyar Ke Jadu Se Lagti Hai Duniya Rangeen Khawabo Jaisi,
Intezar Mein Hoti Hai Bin Mausam Barsaat Meri Aankho Mein..!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2012, 01:18:12 PM »
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you both (aap aur Shireen jee) are rocking. keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2012, 03:55:20 PM »
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Thanks Suman Jee!
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