-----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 03:29:14 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2012, 04:43:02 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: June 26, 2012, 05:52:10 AM »
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 Applause Applause HIRDAY JI JO APNE JAN NA CHAHA USKE LIYE MAIN TO KAHITA HOON
SAMNE ANE PE NAZEREN CHURATE HAIN TAB
APNI YA UNKI MOHABAT PE SHAQ HOTA HAI JAB
 
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«Reply #17 on: June 26, 2012, 06:44:56 AM »
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Vaah hriday jee
bahut sundar.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: July 23, 2012, 02:01:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 22, 2012, 03:38:25 PM
waah waah bahut khoob Hriday ji dil se daad qubool kare
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«Reply #19 on: July 24, 2012, 03:02:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa @Heer@ ji....!!!

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«Reply #20 on: July 25, 2012, 11:22:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Suman ji....!!!

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bahut khoob. dil se likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: August 06, 2012, 11:58:52 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Soudagar ji... itne khoobsurat comments padh ke dil mera garden garden ho gaya.... thank you soooooooo much.... and aapki cadbury me share lene aajaanaa aap.... !!!

Quote from: soudagar on June 22, 2012, 04:52:36 PM
hriday ji bemisal rachna........ bahut hi zabardast likhte hai aap.......aapki rachna padhna bhi ek soubhgya ki baat hai.......is khubsurt aur umda qalaam ke liye dhero daad aur dhero mubarakbaad .... aur meri tarah se ek cadbury dairy milk jo maine apni tarah se best rachna likhne walo ko dene ki sochi hai rau ki jagah.... happy3 happy3

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«Reply #22 on: August 07, 2012, 01:53:03 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shireen ji....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on June 22, 2012, 05:55:56 PM
Bohat Khub, i really liked the last four lines....

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Mohabbat Ko Dard Samaj Kar Khud Ko Na Tadpaya Kijiye,
Pyar Jab Bhi Kheeche Mere Aur Bas Chale Aaya Kijiye,
Aa Kar Samne Yun Nazron Ka Churana Thik Nahi Jaana,
Ishq Mein Hosh Luta Kar Aalam Madhoshi Ka Paya Kijiye..!!
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«Reply #23 on: August 07, 2012, 02:27:47 PM »
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 Hats off to you!
Quote from: ~Hri  Hat's off for your writting day~link=topic=81860.msg1227668#msg1227668 date=1340378954
hum milte nahi usse is dar se ki mohabbat naa ho jaaye,
par tanhaayi me yaad jo aati hai, wo uusi ki hoti hai,
nazar nahi milaate usse ki kho na jaayen un aankhon me,
par khwaab raat ko mere aankhon me bas uusi ki hoti hai,

wo sochti hai ki kya huwa wo rishta , kyun toot gayaa,
maanti hai humein bewafaa aur yaad me hamaari roti hai,
kabhi izhaar kiya nahi mohabbat ka usne humse, magar
seene se lagaake hamaari tasveer wo har raat soti hai,

maloom hai humein ki mohabbat thik nahi, dil dukhta hai,
par jaane kyun har baar usse milne ki chaahat hoti hai,
ajaaye wo hamaare saamne to hum hi nazar churaate hain,
koi bataa de mujhe ki dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai?


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«Reply #24 on: August 08, 2012, 03:22:32 PM »
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Thanks a lot Roy ji...!!!

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«Reply #25 on: August 09, 2012, 12:58:29 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji.. aapne to humein bahut badi upaadhi de di... !!!

Quote from: mkv on June 22, 2012, 06:29:17 PM
Hriday jee
Hum to pahle hi apko "Muhabbat" topic ka ustaad kah chuke hai...aapse accha koee nahee likh sakta.
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«Reply #26 on: August 09, 2012, 03:47:05 PM »
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Hirdayu ji aur Sheeren Hakini  ji

Dono ki guftugoo parh kar Maza aa gaya
Parhte parhte khayalon men kho gaya

Sochne laga kis ke liye kiya likhoon
Samajh nahin aa raha likhoon to kiya likhoon

Hazir jawaabi dono ki taarif-e-kabil hai
Kiso ko pahle kisko doosre number pe rakhoon

Bas iltja dono ke liye Khuda se karta hoon
Aap dono  likhte rahen aur main parhta rahoon
na cheez bansi
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«Reply #27 on: August 10, 2012, 12:17:11 PM »
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thanks a lot Armanje ji...!!!

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«Reply #28 on: August 13, 2012, 02:50:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shaukeen ji....!!!

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«Reply #29 on: August 14, 2012, 01:06:57 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooooo much Suman ji....!!!

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