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Dil ki baat - shikha

by Shikha sanghvi on July 13, 2015, 01:19:34 PM

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Shikha sanghvi

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Kaise tarif kare hum aapki e sanam,
Kya mishaal de hum aapke khubsurat dil ki.

Aap to vo roshni ho zindgi mai humari,
Jiske aage suraj ki roshni bhi kum pad jati hai.

Diwane ho gaye hai hum muskurahat pe aapki,
Jiske aage har gum ka andhera bhi door ho jata hai.

Nazar humari milti rahi nazar se aapki,
Par dil ki baat na kabhi Shikha labo pe la pati hai.

Shikha


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Re: Dil ki baat - shikha

«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2015, 03:13:00 PM »

Very nice shikha ji bohut khubsurat lines


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Re: Dil ki baat - shikha

«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2015, 03:22:01 PM »

bahut khoob Shikha Jee waah.
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Re: Dil ki baat - shikha

«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2015, 04:18:46 PM »

Bahut khoob


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Re: Dil ki baat - shikha

«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2015, 08:20:39 PM »

Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on July 13, 2015, 01:19:34 PM

Kaise tarif kare hum aapki e sanam,
Kya misaal den aapke khubsurat dil ki hum.

Aap to vo roshni ho zindgi mai humari,
Jiske aage suraj ki roshni bhi kum pad jaati hai.

Diwane ho gaye hai hum muskurahat pe aapki,
Jiske aage har gum ki tariki bhi door ho jaati hai.

Nazar humari milti rahi nazar se aapki,
Par dil ki baat na kabhi Shikha labo pe la paati hai.

Shikha

bahut hee khoob. Clapping Smiley

Shikha Jee I have suggested some small changes, If you like them you are welcome to make those changes. In the second line I have moved the word hum from middle to the end of the line, it now rhyme with word sanam. In the sixth line, I have changed the word andhera to tariki, by changing this you can now change the word jaata to jaati, which will then rhyme with jaati in 4th line.