Dil Ki Dhadkan - Syed Iqtedar Hussain

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Dil Ki Dhadkan Tumhi Se Chalti Hai
               Aur Sanson Me Tum Hi Tum
Ab Khayalon Pe Tum Hi Chaai Ho
               Aur Aanhon Me Tum Hi Tum

Haal Dekho To Mera Jaanogi
               Main Tera Aks Banke Jeeta Hoon
Dukh Bhara Dil Udas Chehra Hai
               Aur Ankhon Me Tum Hi Tum

Ae Meri Jaan Main Ne Tere Liye
               Apni Ninden Haram Karli Hain
Meri Har Raat Me Teri Yaaden
               Aur Khwabon Me Tum Hi Tum

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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2020, 12:47:47 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2020, 02:23:09 PM »
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Quote from: Rustum Rangila on June 02, 2020, 11:49:20 AM
Dil Ki Dhadkan Tumhi Se Chalti Hai
               Aur Sanson Me Tum Hi Tum
Ab Khayalon Pe Tum Hi Chaai Ho
               Aur Aanhon Me Tum Hi Tum

Haal Dekho To Mera Jaanogi
               Main Tera Aks Banke Jeeta Hoon
Dukh Bhara Dil Udas Chehra Hai
               Aur Ankhon Me Tum Hi Tum

Ae Meri Jaan Main Ne Tere Liye
               Apni Ninden Haram Karli Hain
Meri Har Raat Me Teri Yaaden
               Aur Khwabon Me Tum Hi Tum

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain, Alias Rustum Rangila
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Haal Dekho To Mera Jaanogi
               Main Tera Aks Banke Jeeta Hoon
Dukh Bhara Dil Udas Chehra Hai
               Faqt Waja Sitamgar Tum Hi Tum
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2020, 06:19:21 AM »
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Dear Sir, thanks for suggestion - but sorry i can't...
Waese main shayari ke barey me kora hoon, meri knowledge poetry ya kisi bhi field me bahot kam hai - par Radeef aur Qhafiya janta hoon - is liye meri taqreeban sabhi poetry me (kuch ho na ho) Radeef aur Qhafiya zaroor milega (kahin par ye ghalat bhi hota hoga) - ab upar poetry me (Sanson / Aanhon / Ankhon / Khwabon) ab agar "Khwabon" ki jagah "Sitamgar" aaega to beshak is poetry par sitam hoga...
And again thanks for suggestion - ghaltiyan batate rahiye Sir ho sakta hai kal ko mere kaam aaye - Thanks Usual Smile
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Quote from: Mast Khalander on June 02, 2020, 12:47:47 PM
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Haal Dekho To Mera Jaanogi
               Main Tera Aks Banke Jeeta Hoon
Dukh Bhara Dil Udas Chehra Hai
               Faqt Waja Sitamgar Tum Hi Tum
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Quote from: nandbahu on June 03, 2020, 11:44:05 AM
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