dil ki gali mein aaj phir......:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

mudassirali

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dil ki gali mein aaj phir pey chal si sunaii di hai
merey dil ney phir se mujhey ishq ki duhaii di hai

karvat badal kar kal meri puri raat kati jab
subha honey par mujhey ishq ki razaaii di hai

kal jab mujh ko na chain tha need bhi koson duur thi
aawaz azaan ki thi ajab gunah kiya lori sunaii di hai

maaf karna merey dost dil ki aawaz nahin yeh
mainney hamesha har gunah ki kya safaii di hai

ronaq hai merey chehrey par sach ka bhi noor hai
sach ki seekh mujh ko meri maa sey sunai di hai

kehta hai "mahak" tumsey gar ghalat kabhi tum ho
sach kehnay pey allah ney bhi to mithaii di hai.

doston assalamalaikum ek ghazal pesh kari hai alag andaz mein likhney ki koshish dil mein kuch baat thi lafzon sey bayan kardi ummed hai ghazal pasand aaye ya na aaye baat zuroor pasand aaeygi.agar is ghazal ko koi sahab kisi achchey andaaz mein likhdein to mein unka bohot shukr guzar rahoonga. allah hafiz.
(Mudassir ali "Mahak")


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Shikha12

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2007, 11:53:53 AM »

Quote from: mudassirali on December 09, 2007, 04:52:01 PM

doston assalamalaikum ek ghazal pesh kari hai alag andaz mein likhney ki koshish dil mein kuch baat thi lafzon sey bayan kardi ummed hai ghazal pasand aaye ya na aaye baat zuroor pasand aaeygi.agar is ghazal ko koi sahab kisi achchey andaaz mein likhdein to mein unka bohot shukr guzar rahoonga. allah hafiz.
(Mudassir ali "Mahak")

Bahut achhe khayaal hai gazal mein.. Usual Smile

Aap hi ke khayaal, thoda sa pher badal kiya hai isme...
Koi galti ho toh... please maaf kariyega... Usual Smile

Dil ki gali mein aaj jo ajab si halchal sunaai di hai,
Lagta hai jaise humare dil ne ishq ki duhaai di hai...

Khayaalon mein jiske badali karwate tamaam raat,
Usney subah hone par mujhe ishq ki razaai di hai...

Bechaini thi dil mein, neend aankhon se koson duur,
Phir bhi uski awaaz mein mujhe lori sunaai di hai...

Maaf karna doston, jo buri lage humare dil ki baat,
Begunaah ho kar bhi sada humne apni safaai di hai...

Nooraani sa lage chehra, ho sachhai agar dil mein,
Sach ki yeh seekh mujhko meri maa se sunaai di hai...

Woh kehte hai ada se, ki ab likhe bhi to kya likhe,
Har akhar mein tumhare "mahak" gazal dikhaai di hai...


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baadal102

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2007, 08:01:49 AM »

BAHUT AACHE ALI JI.
&
SHIKHA JI


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diya_barsat

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2007, 08:02:48 AM »

nice one guys


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Talat

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2007, 10:52:39 AM »

Mudassir and Shikha, very nice !


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varunkumar06

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2007, 12:23:10 PM »

ver good
keeep in touch


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mudassirali

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2007, 03:14:56 PM »

shikha ji aapney kafi umdaa tariqey sey meri likhi hui ghazal ko pesh kiya hai, balkey ya yoon kahein key ghazal ko sahi kar key pesh kiya hai. shukriya


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Pooja

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Re: dil ki gali mein aaj phir......

«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2008, 11:01:32 PM »

bahoot khoob mudassirali and shikha!!


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