Dil ki khwaishein

by Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:32:35 PM
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Kah jaaye wo jo hum sun.na chahte hai
Ya Rub bas yahi ek dua dil se hum chahte hai

Ankhein batati hai unki jo jo baatein
Hum bas ab unki juban se sun.na chahte hai

Chupate rahte hai, humse, aor dosto main shamil
Unki, bas unki zindagi main, shamil hona chahte hai

Apni chahto main qaid, na jaane kaya kaya khawab saja liye
Kar ke qaid unhe ab, her khawab unhe batana chahte hai

Hu madhosh mujhe nahi hai ab apni khabar koi
Bana kar unhe madhosh, dunia se bekhabar ho jaana chahte hai

Dil ki khwaishein na puche Pooja se ab koi
Unki saanso per apni zindagi chalana chahte hai
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2008, 05:42:06 PM »
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Really Nice Pooja Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2008, 05:45:22 PM »
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Shukaria Rajesh ji, kuch dosto ko shikayat ho gai thi ki dard main bahoot likh rahi hu.. dosto ki shikayt door karne ke liye Ajj Khumar-e-Ishaq main he rahna hoga  DOH

Apni chahto main, aa teri chaht mila du
dekhu tujhe is tarah, yah dunia tumhe bhula du
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2008, 08:15:35 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

aapko khumar mein likha dekh accha laga,behtareen rachna.

kya kahe,kya na kahe,asmanjasta hein bani hui
 dil mein dabi baat,zuba se nikaal de yuhi?
bharam dil ka,bus bana rahe pal do pal
aasan nahi kisi ke dil mein kar paana dakhal!

madhoshi kuch ghari ki behka sakti hein zarror
kshanik bhar ka hota hein jaanta hu ye saroor
ghaavo pur marham bana ke unko sehlaana chahte he
kya hamaari zuba se woh yeh sub sun-na chahte he!!

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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2008, 08:23:47 PM »
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Shukaria Prateek ji!! Apki he kavita se prabhavit hokar is kavita ki rachna hui hai!!
Bahoot he simple shabdo main apne bahoot gahri baatein likh di hai.. Hamesha ki tarah bahoot khoobsurat kavita likhi hai apne, app bahoot jaladi offline ho jaate hai so jaladi main jo man mai ayya wo he likhne ja rahi hu


Her waqat jis ke shabdo main majbooti,
Kyun wo ajj sawalo ke majhdhaar hai
Dil main hai daba smundar pyar ka
Lubo per khamoshi ka sailaab hai

Asaan nahi hai kah dena, dil ke baato ko
Magar apne pyar se kyun inkaar hai
Ghavo ko na kuredo shabdo se
Inki dawa sirf ek tera Ikraar hai!!
 
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2008, 08:28:25 PM »
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aap ki kwaish bahut pyari hai. dua kartey hai puri ho sab.

hum lafzo sey bhi dua karengey
buss abb kal kuch likehengey


jasbir singh
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2008, 08:46:55 PM »
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waah pooja ji waah..bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan janm di he aapney.umda.

In bimaariyon ka ilaaj hi agar ikraar hai
to saaf sunlo,mujhko tumse pyaar hai!
teri takdeer ko pur kaise meri hatheli du main
jaanta hu haasil nahi mujhey kabhi bahaar hai!!

tum kyon sawaalon se joojhtey ho
samandar mein saahil khojtey ho?
doobney ko hum to kub se tayaar hai
bolo aisa saath tumko sweekar hai!!



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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2008, 09:03:52 PM »
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waah pooja ji waah..bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan janm di he aapney.umda.

In bimaariyon ka ilaaj hi agar ikraar hai
to saaf sunlo,mujhko tumse pyaar hai!
teri takdeer ko pur kaise meri hatheli du main
jaanta hu haasil nahi mujhey kabhi bahaar hai!!

tum kyon sawaalon se joojhtey ho
samandar mein saahil khojtey ho?
doobney ko hum to kub se tayaar hai
bolo aisa saath tumko sweekar hai!!



wow kaya baat hai, isko kahte hai nahle per dehla marna, bahoot khoob Prateek ji, thori deri ho gai jawab dene main, office main hu so kuch kaam karne lag gai thi, kaya majbooti dikhai hai apne shabdo main.. last ki do line main phir doobna kyun?

humm soch main daal diya apne Prateek ji, kis tarah jawab likhu...


Sun.ne ko taras rahe the jo shabd
Akhir wo kah daale tumne
Mere sawalo ki barsaat main
Pyar ke kuch chintein daale tumne

Takdeer badalti rahti hai
Kyun jawab takdeer per daale tumne
Na kabhi modna, munh humse
Sir ko jhuka, sath sweekara humne!!
 


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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2008, 09:51:35 PM »
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Nice Prateek ji and Good one from you Pooja Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2008, 09:55:03 PM »
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Shukaria Rajesh ji!!
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cara
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2008, 01:05:35 AM »
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lovely--poojaji.

khawabome,khayalome,sansome,
dil ki har khawishhonme tu hi tu nazar aata hai.
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gurinder
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2008, 02:15:24 AM »
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beautiful  very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2008, 10:29:03 AM »
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WAH WAH WAH, KYA PYARI MEHFIL SAJI HAI
BUSS KUCH HAATI, GHODEY, BAND BAJOH KI KAMI HAI
KHWAISH SAB KI HO JAYE PURI
DUA HAI RABB SEY,NA KISI KI AAS RAHEY ADHURI

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2008, 01:28:06 PM »
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Kah jaaye wo jo hum sun.na chahte hai
Ya Rub bas yahi ek dua dil se hum chahte hai

Ankhein batati hai unki jo jo baatein
Hum bas ab unki juban se sun.na chahte hai

Chupate rahte hai, humse, aor dosto main shamil
Unki, bas unki zindagi main, shamil hona chahte hai

Apni chahto main qaid, na jaane kaya kaya khawab saja liye
Kar ke qaid unhe ab, her khawab unhe batana chahte hai

Hu madhosh mujhe nahi hai ab apni khabar koi
Bana kar unhe madhosh, dunia se bekhabar ho jaana chahte hai

Dil ki khwaishein na puche Pooja se ab koi
Unki saanso per apni zindagi chalana chahte hai


BAHUT KHOOB POOJA JI
AAPNE BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI
KEEP GOING
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diya786
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«Reply #14 on: December 20, 2008, 01:31:58 PM »
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waah pooja ji waah..bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan janm di he aapney.umda.

In bimaariyon ka ilaaj hi agar ikraar hai
to saaf sunlo,mujhko tumse pyaar hai!
teri takdeer ko pur kaise meri hatheli du main
jaanta hu haasil nahi mujhey kabhi bahaar hai!!

tum kyon sawaalon se joojhtey ho
samandar mein saahil khojtey ho?
doobney ko hum to kub se tayaar hai
bolo aisa saath tumko sweekar hai!!





BAHUT ACCHE PRATEEK JI
AAPNE BHI KAMAAL KA LIKHA HAI
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Kaise kahein yeh kaisa pyar hai tumhara
nigahon mein chupa hua ikraar hai tumhara

Yakeen karo apni is mohabaat pe
ise bhi intezaar hai tumhara


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