Dil ki khwaishein

by Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:32:35 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 20, 2008, 03:18:15 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:32:35 PM
Kah jaaye wo jo hum sun.na chahte hai
Ya Rub bas yahi ek dua dil se hum chahte hai

Ankhein batati hai unki jo jo baatein
Hum bas ab unki juban se sun.na chahte hai

Chupate rahte hai, humse, aor dosto main shamil
Unki, bas unki zindagi main, shamil hona chahte hai

Apni chahto main qaid, na jaane kaya kaya khawab saja liye
Kar ke qaid unhe ab, her khawab unhe batana chahte hai

Hu madhosh mujhe nahi hai ab apni khabar koi
Bana kar unhe madhosh, dunia se bekhabar ho jaana chahte hai

Dil ki khwaishein na puche Pooja se ab koi
Unki saanso per apni zindagi chalana chahte hai


Wah Wah Wah!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 bahut hi pyaari aur Khoobsurat kavita likhi hai pooja aapne...
 Hum to Kahenge ke aap hameshaKhumar-e-ishq mein likhe.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #16 on: December 20, 2008, 03:25:23 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 08:15:35 PM
Applause Applause Applause

aapko khumar mein likha dekh accha laga,behtareen rachna.

kya kahe,kya na kahe,asmanjasta hein bani hui
 dil mein dabi baat,zuba se nikaal de yuhi?
bharam dil ka,bus bana rahe pal do pal
aasan nahi kisi ke dil mein kar paana dakhal!

madhoshi kuch ghari ki behka sakti hein zarror
kshanik bhar ka hota hein jaanta hu ye saroor
ghaavo pur marham bana ke unko sehlaana chahte he
kya hamaari zuba se woh yeh sub sun-na chahte he!!



Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 08:46:55 PM
waah pooja ji waah..bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan janm di he aapney.umda.

In bimaariyon ka ilaaj hi agar ikraar hai
to saaf sunlo,mujhko tumse pyaar hai!
teri takdeer ko pur kaise meri hatheli du main
jaanta hu haasil nahi mujhey kabhi bahaar hai!!

tum kyon sawaalon se joojhtey ho
samandar mein saahil khojtey ho?
doobney ko hum to kub se tayaar hai
bolo aisa saath tumko sweekar hai!!





PRATEEKJI..aapka Kya Kehna!!!
Aap ki likhi kavita par Har ek line, har ek shabd par Wah Wah Kehte Rahe..
bahut bahut khoob Prateekji..
   
  "jaanta hoon haasil nahi mujhe kabhi bahaar hai" 
 Wah, kya baat kahi prateekji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: December 21, 2008, 04:24:46 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 08:46:55 PM
waah pooja ji waah..bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan janm di he aapney.umda.

In bimaariyon ka ilaaj hi agar ikraar hai
to saaf sunlo,mujhko tumse pyaar hai!
teri takdeer ko pur kaise meri hatheli du main
jaanta hu haasil nahi mujhey kabhi bahaar hai!!

tum kyon sawaalon se joojhtey ho
samandar mein saahil khojtey ho?
doobney ko hum to kub se tayaar hai
bolo aisa saath tumko sweekar hai!!


Prateek ji, jawab de chuki hu apki is kavita ka, magar ek baar aor de rahi hu..

Batayege hum apne dil ki, pahle apna haal batao
chupa rakha hai jo dil main, wo sab juban per laao

aise kaise kar le saweekar, shabdo main na behlaao
kyun kare hum tumse pyaar, yah khul kar hume batlaao
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«Reply #18 on: December 21, 2008, 04:25:19 AM »
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Quote from: cara on December 20, 2008, 01:05:35 AM
lovely--poojaji.

khawabome,khayalome,sansome,
dil ki har khawishhonme tu hi tu nazar aata hai.

Thanks cara
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«Reply #19 on: December 21, 2008, 04:25:45 AM »
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Quote from: gurinder on December 20, 2008, 02:15:24 AM
beautiful  very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

shukaria Gurinder ji
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«Reply #20 on: December 21, 2008, 04:26:19 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 20, 2008, 10:29:03 AM
WAH WAH WAH, KYA PYARI MEHFIL SAJI HAI
BUSS KUCH HAATI, GHODEY, BAND BAJOH KI KAMI HAI
KHWAISH SAB KI HO JAYE PURI
DUA HAI RABB SEY,NA KISI KI AAS RAHEY ADHURI

JASBIR SINGH


shukaria Jas ji
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«Reply #21 on: December 21, 2008, 04:26:53 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on December 20, 2008, 01:28:06 PM
BAHUT KHOOB POOJA JI
AAPNE BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI
KEEP GOING Applause Applause

Thanks DIYA
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«Reply #22 on: December 21, 2008, 04:27:27 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 20, 2008, 03:18:15 PM
Wah Wah Wah!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 bahut hi pyaari aur Khoobsurat kavita likhi hai pooja aapne...
 Hum to Kahenge ke aap hameshaKhumar-e-ishq mein likhe.. Thumbs UP

BAHOOT BAHOOT SHUKARIA KHWAISH JI
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«Reply #23 on: December 21, 2008, 05:53:27 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 19, 2008, 09:51:35 PM
Nice Prateek ji and Good one from you Pooja Ji

shukria hazoor.
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«Reply #24 on: December 21, 2008, 05:59:19 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on December 20, 2008, 01:31:58 PM
BAHUT ACCHE PRATEEK JI
AAPNE BHI KAMAAL KA LIKHA HAI Applause Applause

Kaise kahein yeh kaisa pyar hai tumhara
nigahon mein chupa hua ikraar hai tumhara

Yakeen karo apni is mohabaat pe
ise bhi intezaar hai tumhara



diya ji-shukriya,aap ne padha aur saraahna ki.
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«Reply #25 on: December 21, 2008, 06:02:50 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 20, 2008, 03:25:23 PM
PRATEEKJI..aapka Kya Kehna!!!
Aap ki likhi kavita par Har ek line, har ek shabd par Wah Wah Kehte Rahe..
bahut bahut khoob Prateekji..
  
  "jaanta hoon haasil nahi mujhe kabhi bahaar hai" 
 Wah, kya baat kahi prateekji Applause Applause Applause Applause





aap tuk yadi likha pahuch jaaye,to wahi us kavita ka uphaAR hota hai,aur kya chahiye fir...shukriya janaab.
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«Reply #26 on: December 21, 2008, 06:27:09 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 21, 2008, 04:24:46 AM
Prateek ji, jawab de chuki hu apki is kavita ka, magar ek baar aor de rahi hu..

Batayege hum apne dil ki, pahle apna haal batao
chupa rakha hai jo dil main, wo sab juban per laao

aise kaise kar le saweekar, shabdo main na behlaao
kyun kare hum tumse pyaar, yah khul kar hume batlaao

jo dil mein chupa rakha hein, usey dil ki saanse bun apnao
fir nahi kehna padega tumko,'zubaa pe lao ,zubaa pe lao'

shabd kisko behla sakey hai,chahe main kahu ya tum sajao
saath sweekaro ya nahi tum,pur itna na humko aajmao

pehley sweekaara, fir poochtey ho kaaran batao
agar-magar ki baaton mein,mohhabaton ko na uljhao

maan jao,paas aao,jasbaaton ko aur nahi ub dafnaao
chal chuke jub raah meri,kadmon ka fir nahi tum dagmagao!!
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«Reply #27 on: December 21, 2008, 08:45:36 AM »
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Sabne bohat khoob likha hain maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: December 21, 2008, 04:29:48 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 21, 2008, 06:27:09 AM
jo dil mein chupa rakha hein, usey dil ki saanse bun apnao
fir nahi kehna padega tumko,'zubaa pe lao ,zubaa pe lao'

shabd kisko behla sakey hai,chahe main kahu ya tum sajao
saath sweekaro ya nahi tum,pur itna na humko aajmao

pehley sweekaara, fir poochtey ho kaaran batao
agar-magar ki baaton mein,mohhabaton ko na uljhao

maan jao,paas aao,jasbaaton ko aur nahi ub dafnaao
chal chuke jub raah meri,kadmon ka fir nahi tum dagmagao!!








bahut hi badiya prateek.


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #29 on: December 21, 2008, 08:14:50 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on December 20, 2008, 01:31:58 PM
BAHUT ACCHE PRATEEK JI
AAPNE BHI KAMAAL KA LIKHA HAI Applause Applause

Kaise kahein yeh kaisa pyar hai tumhara
nigahon mein chupa hua ikraar hai tumhara

Yakeen karo apni is mohabaat pe
ise bhi intezaar hai tumhara



bahoot achi lines likhi hai diya !!

khud main chupa kar pyar,
kyun humko bekarar karte ho
nigah utha kar to dekho
kyun jamane se darte ho
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