Dil ki khwaishein

by Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:32:35 PM
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«Reply #195 on: July 14, 2009, 05:03:58 AM »
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bahoot khoob Mann ji... wah kaya jawab likha hai.. uff ab main kaya likhu.... jara kalam ko sambhal kar Mann ji.... apki tarag itani speed main khumar-e-ishaq mai meri kalam nahi chalti...  Crying

Lag gaye jo gale, to phir ghar ja na payege
sanam tere he bahon main goom ho kar rah jayege

yah Fiza yah kaynaat bhi thum jayegi wahin ke wahin
hum in fizao ki Arzoo ban jayege
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«Reply #196 on: July 14, 2009, 05:36:19 AM »
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Khumar-e-ishq me hum bhi zara kamzor hain par kuch likh dete hain

Arzoo hai door se dekhne ki,
paas aana bhi chahte hain,
Tammanna nahi tumhe paane ki,
Magar khona bhi nahi chahte hain.
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«Reply #197 on: July 14, 2009, 05:41:58 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 14, 2009, 05:03:58 AM
bahoot khoob Mann ji... wah kaya jawab likha hai.. uff ab main kaya likhu.... jara kalam ko sambhal kar Mann ji.... apki tarag itani speed main khumar-e-ishaq mai meri kalam nahi chalti...  Crying

Lag gaye jo gale, to phir ghar ja na payege
sanam tere he bahon main goom ho kar rah jayege

yah Fiza yah kaynaat bhi thum jayegi wahin ke wahin
hum in fizao ki Arzoo ban jayege


Pooja ji.. Ishq Me Hi Likhwaana hai aapse ab.. Dard Ki taraf Ghoome na aapki Qalam.. Yehi Zidd hai Ab.. tongue3 tongue3

Bahut hi Pyaara Jawab likha hai pooja ji.. Bahut Khoooob.. Applause


Fiza Ki Tamanna Hai, Kayenaat Ki Khwaaish Hai,
Tum Mujh Me Sama Jao, Yeh Dil Ki Farmaaish Hai...

Ho Rahi Hai Barsaat, Zara Thahar Jao E-Sanam,
Yeh Meri Nahi, Mere Pyaase Dil Ki Samjhaaish Hai..!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #198 on: July 14, 2009, 05:48:50 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 13, 2009, 06:22:14 PM
aai la aaina, kya khoob likha hai aap ney,
maja aaloh rey... great lines


jasbir singh

thnxx so much jasbirsingh sahab
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«Reply #199 on: July 15, 2009, 07:42:31 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 14, 2009, 02:38:51 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot bahot khoob likha hai Pooja ji aur Mann ji
bahot khoob

halka halka khumaar bechaini badhata hai
rafta rafta phir ye dil beemaar ho jata hai

mohabbat ki ibtada bhi jaise intaha se kum nahi
lamha lamha beqaraar hoke bhi bekarari hi chahta hai




Bahut Bahut Shukriya Yash Bhai.. Aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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Pooja
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«Reply #200 on: July 20, 2009, 05:01:28 AM »
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bahoot khoob Mann ji and Kaash ji!!
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«Reply #201 on: July 20, 2009, 05:01:55 AM »
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Quote from: Vikk on July 14, 2009, 05:36:19 AM
Khumar-e-ishq me hum bhi zara kamzor hain par kuch likh dete hain

Arzoo hai door se dekhne ki,
paas aana bhi chahte hain,
Tammanna nahi tumhe paane ki,
Magar khona bhi nahi chahte hain.

Nice sharing Vikk ji
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«Reply #202 on: July 20, 2009, 05:07:18 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 14, 2009, 05:41:58 AM

Pooja ji.. Ishq Me Hi Likhwaana hai aapse ab.. Dard Ki taraf Ghoome na aapki Qalam.. Yehi Zidd hai Ab.. tongue3 tongue3

Bahut hi Pyaara Jawab likha hai pooja ji.. Bahut Khoooob.. Applause


Fiza Ki Tamanna Hai, Kayenaat Ki Khwaaish Hai,
Tum Mujh Me Sama Jao, Yeh Dil Ki Farmaaish Hai...

Ho Rahi Hai Barsaat, Zara Thahar Jao E-Sanam,
Yeh Meri Nahi, Mere Pyaase Dil Ki Samjhaaish Hai..!!


**~** Mann **~**

wah wah wah kaya baat hai, Mann ji kamaal kar jaate hai app apne shabdo ke sath... apki bhasha mai.. bahoot masat lines likhi hai apne tongue3

na kar ajjmaish meri, apni is farmaish se
dhadak raha hai dil, teri bahon ki garmaish se
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«Reply #203 on: July 20, 2009, 05:09:57 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 14, 2009, 02:38:51 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot bahot khoob likha hai Pooja ji aur Mann ji
bahot khoob

halka halka khumaar bechaini badhata hai
rafta rafta phir ye dil beemaar ho jata hai

mohabbat ki ibtada bhi jaise intaha se kum nahi
lamha lamha beqaraar hoke bhi bekarari hi chahta hai




bahoot khoob Kaash ji,...

Lamha lamha kar ke intzaar, dil bekarar hota hai
atta hai sanam jab samne, armano per na ikhtiyaar hota hai

dil kahe kuch, lub kuch aor he kah jaate hai
chahat mai deewano ka ajab he haal hota hai
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«Reply #204 on: July 23, 2009, 12:48:45 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kaash ji ,beautiful lines by all of you. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #205 on: July 23, 2009, 03:51:13 PM »
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Bahut Acche Kaash Bhai & Pooja Ji.. Bahut accha likha hai aap dono Ne.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #206 on: August 21, 2009, 04:13:49 PM »
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Shukaria Madhu ji and Mann ji!!
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«Reply #207 on: August 22, 2009, 06:10:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob likh rahe hain sab...kaashji...poojaji..aur sab... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil ki Khwaisein es kadar badhti jaati hain
K-ab aahista-aahista ki ey-dost tu-n-kar baat
Ghan-ghor baras raha hai Sawan-Bhado chitchor
Ab tou har pal khil raha hai dil ka por-por....


Quote from: @kaash on July 23, 2009, 12:39:39 PM

 Applause Applause Applause

bahot khoob likha hai Pooja ji


ahista si jumbishen ashista se hi badhti hain
aahista aahista phir baagh me bahaaren aati hain
saawan ki baarish ho ya bhado ki ghatayon ka shor
har mausham me mizaaj-e-ishk ki khushbu bas jati hai
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«Reply #208 on: August 23, 2009, 03:50:09 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 22, 2009, 06:10:36 AM
Bahut khoob likh rahe hain sab...kaashji...poojaji..aur sab... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil ki Khwaisein es kadar badhti jaati hain
K-ab aahista-aahista ki ey-dost tu-n-kar baat
Ghan-ghor baras raha hai Sawan-Bhado chitchor
Ab tou har pal khil raha hai dil ka por-por....



wah kaya baat hai, kash mujhe bhi aise shudh hindi ke shabd aa jaaye likhne,...bahoot khoob
koshish kar rahi hu kuch shudh hindi ke shabd sung likhne ki...

ghangor barsaat main, sab naya naya najar atta hai
chanchal yah man, pawan sung, baadal ban jaata hai

Prem ras ko sinchta hai khud main boond boond
pakar sneh ka ek jhonka, fiza mai baras jaata hai
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«Reply #209 on: August 24, 2009, 11:25:20 AM »
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Poojaji bahut koobsurat lines likhi hai aapne.....Wo bhi Shudh hindi mai....kabile tariff hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Waise aap panjabi-urdu-hindi mix jo bhi likhti hain padhne mai mazaa he aata hai
quki aap k bhav bahut sunder hote hain...

Bada rasik hota ye barsaat ka mousam,lata yadon ka bhandaar
Ye garajti-barasti kali ghatayen,Gauri ki julfo ka khumaar
Beech-beech chamakti bijleeyen,jaise uski chanchal muskaan
Naach-naach uthta man mayur,dil bharta ab ghar ki oor Udaan

Tabhi Sunaai deta kahin duur bajta ye geet....
"Teri do takia ki naukari....mera lakhon ka saawan jaaye..."



Quote from: Pooja on August 23, 2009, 03:50:09 PM
wah kaya baat hai, kash mujhe bhi aise shudh hindi ke shabd aa jaaye likhne,...bahoot khoob
koshish kar rahi hu kuch shudh hindi ke shabd sung likhne ki...




ghangor barsaat main, sab naya naya najar atta hai
chanchal yah man, pawan sung, baadal ban jaata hai

Prem ras ko sinchta hai khud main boond boond
pakar sneh ka ek jhonka, fiza mai baras jaata hai
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