Dil ki khwaishein

by Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:32:35 PM
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«Reply #90 on: December 25, 2008, 11:20:48 AM »
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Areeeeeee Prateek Ji & Jasbir Ji.. aap Bhi Likhiye Na.. Aap Yahan Likhenge to Humen Bahut Accha lagega..!! Main aur Pooja Ji to Kisi Bhi Topic par Shuru Ho Jate Hain, Phir Kuch Lambe Hi Sawal Jawab Chalte Hain...!! Aur Humari Vajah se aap Yahan Likhna band Mat Kijiye.. Pooja Ji aap Bhi Kuch Kahiye..!! Plz Zaroor likhiye..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #91 on: December 25, 2008, 02:12:24 PM »
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Pooja ji,filhaal meri request hain yeh panne behad khoobsurat bun gaye hein...aapki aur Mann ji ki shaayri se..inhe jaari rakhiye...aur sama mehkane dijiye...khumaar ka..is kavita ka jawaab yahan pat uchit nahi lagega.Padhne ka lutff aa raha hein filhaal to....wahi lene dijiye....

Prateek ji, Apke sawbhav se kuch kuch parichaye hone laga hai. apse nivedan hai ki mere sath likhte waqat app itna vichar na kiya kare.. bas jo dil main ayye wo likh diya kijiye.

kaya kahe, kaya na kahe, apki isi ada ke maare hai
najaro se kah jaoge sab, shabd per kyun itna vichare hai

kaya hai uchit, kaya anuchit, sawal kyun itne sare hai
kabhi to kholo lub, hum kab se intzaarein hai

apki kavita ke jawab main he to janma hai yah thread
phir kyun app he yaha likhne main hichkicha-re hai

utha lo kadam, likho jo bhi dil chahe yaha per
apki kalam ke hum he nahi, deewane aor bhi bahoot sare hai
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«Reply #92 on: December 25, 2008, 02:14:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob.. Pooja di, Prateek Ji, Diya, Shihab Ji aur Mann.. Applause Applause


Mahiya bahoot he acha laga ki app is thread main aai, parra aor saraha bhi. magar hume kab tak app apni kalam ke jadu se vanchit rakhegi. Kuch apse padne ko milta to acha lagta...

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«Reply #93 on: December 25, 2008, 02:16:41 PM »
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yes, i too am enjoying the writings. Thats the reason, not interfering with my scribblings in between. Please continue.

Jasbir Singh

Jas ji apke is baat ke jawab main ab kaya likhu main  DOH DOH DOH

feel free to add your shayri!!
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«Reply #94 on: December 25, 2008, 02:27:12 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Yeh Jawab to aapka Humara Dil hi Loot ke Le gaya..
Bahut Hi Pyaar Bhara Jawab diya Hai aapne..!! Har Lafz Bahut Pyaara Hai.. Applause Applause


Mar Mitne Ki Tamanna Hai Sanam, Tere Har Ek Andaaz Par,
Hosh Kho Dene ki Khwaish Hai, Tere Labon Ki Mithaas Par...

Mana Ki Tasveer Meri, Apne Dil se Lagaaye Rakhti Ho,
Par Humen to Qatl Hona hai, Tujhe choone Ke Ehasaas Par...

Kaash..!! Ek Baar Tu Kahati, Ki Bhar Lo Mujhe Baahon Me,
Dil Apna Fanaa Tak Kar Jate Hum, Tere is Ek Izhaar Par....


Shukaria ji shukaria, jo itani asaani se dil loota diya  NaNaNa yah sab apke shabdo ki jadugari hai jo humse is tarah likhwa jaati hai. behad payara jawab likha hai apne...


na karo wo baat, jo yah dil dhardka jaaye
hum kho rahe hai hosh, na aor madhoshi cha jaaye

is kadar na karo zikar apne ahsaason ka
kahin ajj haya ka parda na humse uth jaaye

na aao pass ajj humare, itna sanam
kho de hosh aor armano ki agan mehak jaaye
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«Reply #95 on: December 25, 2008, 02:57:05 PM »
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Wah Ji Wah ..! Kya Baat Hai..!! Kabhi Paas Bulaati ho aur Aur Phir Kareeb aa kar Tarsaati Ho.. Hahahaha..
Jawab to Masha-allah.. Behad khubsoorat diya hai aapne.. Applause


Paas..!! Aur Paas....! Zara Aao To E-Mere Sanam,
Ke Kuch Sargoshiyaan Karo, Mere Seene Pe Humdam.....

Bahak Jane do Jazzbaat, Is Ishq ki Barsaat Me,
Karo Inti Mohabbat, Ke Hosh me Aane Na Payen Hum...!!

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«Reply #96 on: December 25, 2008, 03:13:29 PM »
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dikha gaye palo main apni jadugari aor ab hum soch main  DOH bahoot he natkhat pyar se bhara hua jawb diya hai apne

chero na is kadar ki hum baat bhi suna na sake
halat yah ho gaye hai ki uth kar door bhi ja na sake

shabd kab se ho rahe khatam, nigah uthane ke halat nahi
aisa na ho ki lipat ker tere seene se, phir wapis aa na sake
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«Reply #97 on: December 25, 2008, 03:22:01 PM »
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Aaye Haye.. Pooja Ji.. Lagta Hai aaj to aap Jaan Lekar hi Rahengi.!! Hahahaha Last line to Waqai Jaan Le gai.. Bahut Khoob..!! Applause


Lipte Rahen, Simte Rahen, Tere Hi Aagosh Me,
Jaan Hi Nikal Jaye Chaahe, Ab Is Haalaat Me....

Lafz Khatm, Dharkan Chup, Bas Labon Ko Milne do,
Aaj Karne do Mohabbat, Bheegi Bheegi Is Raat Me..



**~** Mann **~**



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«Reply #98 on: December 25, 2008, 03:54:07 PM »
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Shukaria ji shukaria, jo itani asaani se dil loota diya  NaNaNa yah sab apke shabdo ki jadugari hai jo humse is tarah likhwa jaati hai. behad payara jawab likha hai apne...


na karo wo baat, jo yah dil dhardka jaaye
hum kho rahe hai hosh, na aor madhoshi cha jaaye

is kadar na karo zikar apne ahsaason ka
kahin ajj haya ka parda na humse uth jaaye

na aao pass ajj humare, itna sanam
kho de hosh aor armano ki agan mehak jaaye


Bohat khoob pooja ji... aachay sher hein.. Applause

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #99 on: December 25, 2008, 08:12:33 PM »
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Jas ji apke is baat ke jawab main ab kaya likhu main  DOH DOH DOH

feel free to add your shayri!!


na JI naaaa ... itni sohni kwaishey ho rahi hai,

HUM TOH DOOR SEY HI MAJA LEH RAHEY HAI
SOHNI SOHNI KHWAISHOH KA ANAND LEH RAHEY HAI

KWAISHEH AAP KI SARI POORI HOTI RAHEY
YEH DILOH KEY GULAAB KHILTEY RAHEY

YEHI DUA HUM BHI KARTEY HAI
KHWAISHOH KEY MAUSAM MEH
YEH KHWAISH HUM  BHI KARTEY HAI


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #100 on: December 25, 2008, 09:10:21 PM »
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shukaria Jas and SH JI
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«Reply #101 on: December 25, 2008, 09:31:52 PM »
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shukaria Jas and SH JI

WELCOME JI


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #102 on: December 26, 2008, 12:19:13 AM »
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Aaye Haye.. Pooja Ji.. Lagta Hai aaj to aap Jaan Lekar hi Rahengi.!! Hahahaha Last line to Waqai Jaan Le gai.. Bahut Khoob..!! Applause


Lipte Rahen, Simte Rahen, Tere Hi Aagosh Me,
Jaan Hi Nikal Jaye Chaahe, Ab Is Haalaat Me....

Lafz Khatm, Dharkan Chup, Bas Labon Ko Milne do,
Aaj Karne do Mohabbat, Bheegi Bheegi Is Raat Me..



**~** Mann **~**


wah kaya baat hai Mnn ji, bahoot khoob....

hosh bhi jayege, yah jaan bhi jayegi
teri he panaho main yah zindagi beet jayegi

dil ki bas yahi khwaish, teri dhadkano main ho mera he naam
meri dhadkane, teri dhadkano ko sun.ne main beet jayegi
 
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«Reply #103 on: December 26, 2008, 07:09:47 AM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji..is baar to aapne Dil Hi Loot Liya.. itna Pyaara Aur Mohabbat se Bhara Jawab jo Likha Hai aapne.. Applause


Tamannaaon Ki Bheed Me, Ek Tamanna yeh Bhi Hai,
Ke Mera Har ek Lamha, Teri Hi Panaahon me Guzre...

Beet Jaye Zindgi, Teri Hi Zulfon Ki Chaawon Me,
Aur Har Raat Meri, Teri Mohabbat-e-Mehfil Me Guzre...!!
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«Reply #104 on: December 26, 2008, 12:15:06 PM »
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oye hoye, maja aa raha hai
iss mehfil meh abb toh
nasha sa chah raha hai

yeh ishq ka bukhar chalta rahey
madhoshi ka yeh jaam yuhi chalta rahey
 
jasbir singh
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