Dil ki khwaishein

by smardia on December 24, 2008, 09:26:53 AM
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N TUM HAMHE JANTE HO,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE HAI
YE TO MEHFIL HAI RUHON KI,SHAKLE KAHAN KOI HAI
FIR BHI RUBARU HONE KI Dil ME khwaish KYU HAI 
PADH KER KALAM AAP K KYU MILNE KI KHWAISH HOTI

LAGTA HAI DARD-KI-GALIYON ME KABHI MULAKAT HUI HOGI
N TUM HAMHE JANTE THAY,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE THAY

SURENDRA   icon_flower
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2009, 12:45:55 PM »
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Wah very nice and beautiful creation Surendra ji, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:kamaal ka likha aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2009, 12:56:33 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai  Usual Smile Bahut acche Surendra ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2009, 04:27:07 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Surender ji...
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2009, 04:41:46 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on December 24, 2008, 09:26:53 AM
N TUM HAMHE JANTE HO,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE HAI
YE TO MEHFIL HAI RUHON KI,SHAKLE KAHAN KOI HAI
FIR BHI RUBARU HONE KI Dil ME khwaish KYU HAI 
PADH KER KALAM AAP K KYU MILNE KI KHWAISH HOTI

LAGTA HAI DARD-KI-GALIYON ME KABHI MULAKAT HUI HOGI
N TUM HAMHE JANTE THAY,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE THAY

SURENDRA   icon_flower

Bahoot he achi lines likhi hai apne smardia ji!!

Rooh ne kab kaha koi shakal paai hai
karmo ke gati ne her deewar giraai hai
na khwaisho ka koi chehra, na armaano ki koi soorat
kitna bhi kar lo muhobbat,
payar ki asali pehchan kab kisne paai hai


Dobara likhne ki koshish karugi... ajj kaam mai bahoot busy hu.. ek najar apki lines per parri aor jo man ne kaha likh diya... magar khud ko sahi sa nahi laga... so dobara koshish karugi ki kuch likhu jo apki lines ka sahi maynemain sath de sake!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2009, 04:55:27 PM »
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bahut Khoooooob Likha hai Smardia ji & Pooja Ji.. Bahut accha likha hai aap dono ne.. Yunhi Likhte rahiye taki Yeh Jugalbandi aage Badh sake.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2009, 05:16:47 PM »
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bahut khub Smardia ji & Pooja di Applause Applause Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2009, 12:29:55 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Pooja ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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smardia
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2009, 11:34:42 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya aapka....MADHJI
AaPKI NAZAR PADI HAMAARI CHAND LINO PAR..aapko pasand aayi tou likhna saartha hua...
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 23, 2009, 12:45:55 PM
Wah very nice and beautiful creation Surendra ji, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:kamaal ka likha aapne.
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2009, 11:38:37 AM »
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 Rojaji aapka dhanyavaad...aapko lines pasand aayi...hame achha laga
Quote from: Roja on July 23, 2009, 12:56:33 PM
Wah kya baat hai  Usual Smile Bahut acche Surendra ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2009, 11:40:47 AM »
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Sophiji aapki daad k liye shukriya....
Quote from: Sophi on July 23, 2009, 04:27:07 PM
Bahoot khoob Surender ji...
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2009, 11:46:00 AM »
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DAIR SE SAHI PAR AAPKO HAMARI LINES NAZAR TOU AAYI....
dHAYAVAAD-SHUKRIYA....

aapki lines tou as usual bahut achhi hain he....
Par jaisa kaha aapne aur  intezaar rahega...aapki behad sunder lino ka....
Quote from: Pooja on July 23, 2009, 04:41:46 PM
Bahoot he achi lines likhi hai apne smardia ji!!

Rooh ne kab kaha koi shakal paai hai
karmo ke gati ne her deewar giraai hai
na khwaisho ka koi chehra, na armaano ki koi soorat
kitna bhi kar lo muhobbat,
payar ki asali pehchan kab kisne paai hai


Dobara likhne ki koshish karugi... ajj kaam mai bahoot busy hu.. ek najar apki lines per parri aor jo man ne kaha likh diya... magar khud ko sahi sa nahi laga... so dobara koshish karugi ki kuch likhu jo apki lines ka sahi maynemain sath de sake!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2009, 11:47:25 AM »
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Maanji aapka bahut bahut shukriya...
AAp bhi kuchh likhte is thread mai...
Quote from: Mann on July 23, 2009, 04:55:27 PM
bahut Khoooooob Likha hai Smardia ji & Pooja Ji.. Bahut accha likha hai aap dono ne.. Yunhi Likhte rahiye taki Yeh Jugalbandi aage Badh sake.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2009, 11:50:26 AM »
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Dhanayavaad...poppoetryji...aap k naam se wakif nahi hu xshma kariyega...
Quote from: poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:16:47 PM
bahut khub Smardia ji & Pooja di Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2009, 11:02:48 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on December 24, 2008, 09:26:53 AM
N TUM HAMHE JANTE HO,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE HAI
YE TO MEHFIL HAI RUHON KI,SHAKLE KAHAN KOI HAI
FIR BHI RUBARU HONE KI Dil ME khwaish KYU HAI 
PADH KER KALAM AAP K KYU MILNE KI KHWAISH HOTI

LAGTA HAI DARD-KI-GALIYON ME KABHI MULAKAT HUI HOGI
N TUM HAMHE JANTE THAY,N HUM TUMHE PAHCHANTE THAY

SURENDRA   icon_flower

Ek baar phir se koshish ki hai... magar phir se kuch baat nahi bani....   DOH DOH
Zajbaato ke saaye, kai baar samjhaye nahi jaate
Milte hai kuch apne, jo khud ko samjhaye nahi jaate
Her ek shabd unka lagta hai apna apna sa
Uthate armmano se yah dil bachaye nahi jaaye

Mil chuke hai kahin, ya yah wo hai jiska tha intzaar
Aise sawalo ke jawab se khud ko karar dilaye nahi jaate
Mil le bas dil is shakas ek baar, yahi sil chahe
Aise chahat ke zajbaat, kabhi bhulaye nahi jaate….

Zajbaato ke saaye, kai baar samjhaye nahi jaate
Milte hai kuch apne, jo khud ko bhi samjhaye nahi jaate
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