"" dil ki saugaat hai wo ""

by nirala on February 08, 2011, 03:33:35 AM
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pyar hai wo dil ki sogat he wo
chupaye na chupe reshmi wo bahar hai wo

khuli aankhon ka palko me saja ek khab he wo
roshan ho jahan jisse wo chamkta shaab hai wo

aab o haya se bhari ek nasheela daab hai wo
tanhaiyon me nibhaye tootkar aisa saath hai wo

dekh ke bhul jaye khud ko nir aisa sabreela hayaat hai wo
deewane dil ki dhardkano ki suron se saja ek saaj hai wo

bemausam barasta tapakta boondo ki aasbaab hai wo

kya kahe ki ab kya hai wo
nir ke seene me ab to saanson ki pehchaan hai wo
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2011, 05:58:15 AM »
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Wah kamaal ki tareef ki apni mahebooba ki Nirala ji.bahut khoobsurat peskash.hats off. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2011, 06:00:26 AM »
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bahut badhiya nirala ji..

likhte rahiye yunhi..

dher sarii daad~
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2011, 11:56:39 AM »
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ufffffffffffff.......last line to jaaN leliya Nir ji
Dhadkan ...........hmmmmmm
koun hai vo jara khulasa bhi kiya karo

 happy3
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2011, 12:18:52 PM »
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wo hai mere dil ki bahut hi khas aur sirf pahli aur aakhri ek tamanna Usual Smile
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hahaha
aap sabka thanx dil se.
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2011, 12:23:30 PM »
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bahot aachi feelings he nirala ji........mast mast romantic .....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2011, 01:02:13 PM »
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mast poem Nirala ji.......
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nirala
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2011, 01:10:30 PM »
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ye kya Koyal sahiba sad5
mai wah wahi batorne ko nahi likhta kabhi.
tumse 2 line natkhat se bhare mere style ka chahiye tha--
koi gal nai thanx ji--
Matrix yara aapko bhi Thanku Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2011, 01:55:54 PM »
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Bachnaa nazar se usski teekhee kataar hai wo
Jabaan jo chal jaaye tou Tejj Talwaar hai wo

Mat samajhna kay seedhi-saadi saugaat hai wo
Reshmi leebaas mai chhupi huyee aafat hai wo

lo yaar 2 ki jagah 4 line likh di sharaarti andaaz me.....


pyar hai wo dil ki sogat he wo
chupaye na chupe reshmi wo bahar hai wo

khuli aankhon ka palko me saja ek khab he wo
roshan ho jahan jisse wo chamkta shaab hai wo

aab o haya se bhari ek nasheela daab hai wo
tanhaiyon me nibhaye tootkar aisa saath hai wo

dekh ke bhul jaye khud ko nir aisa sabreela hayaat hai wo
deewane dil ki dhardkano ki suron se saja ek saaj hai wo

bemausam barasta tapakta boondo ki aasbaab hai wo

kya kahe ki ab kya hai wo
nir ke seene me ab to saanson ki pehchaan hai wo
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2011, 02:46:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2011, 03:57:12 PM »
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ye hui na baat Sahiba Usual Smile
aapke 4 line bahot pyare aur sachhe hain ji Dilwa se than q Usual Smile
Rishi ji aapka saath bahut suhana hai--saath rahne ke liye bahut saara Thanq.
mujh Nacheej par bhi achhe shayars time dete hain M happy aur haan mai hamesha khus hi rahta hun dear.
thanx n be happy dost
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2011, 03:58:16 PM »
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ye hui na baat Sahiba Usual Smile
aapke 4 line bahot pyare aur sachhe hain ji Dilwa se than q Usual Smile
Rishi ji aapka saath bahut suhana hai--saath rahne ke liye bahut saara Thanq.
mujh Nacheej par bhi achhe shayars time dete hain M happy aur haan mai hamesha khus hi rahta hun dear.
thanx n be happy dost
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