|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
Karar payenge kaise... jara is dil ko samjha do...
juba pe layenge kaise... jara is dil ko samjha do....
surur aapka hi hai...... jo chalkta hai aankho se....
kya batayenge sabse.... jara is dil ko samjha do...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Anshumali
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2011, 12:46:29 AM » |
|
Karar payenge kaise... jara is dil ko samjha do...
juba pe layenge kaise... jara is dil ko samjha do....
surur aapka hi hai...... jo chalkta hai aankho se....
kya batayenge sabse.... jara is dil ko samjha do...
Good One ... Priye Ji ! |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
nirala
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2011, 06:09:29 AM » |
|
good lines Ishq ji--
dil ko samjhana kisi Birle ke hi bas ki baat hoti hai--
daad hai ji
""
kya laut ayega wo---
ya bhool jayega wo---
kya bhool payega wo mujhe
ya kuch pal ko mera dil hi jalayega wo---
dil jalakar mera
kon sa sukhh payega wo---
khaak me milakar mujhe
kya khud bhi khaak na ban jayega wo---
""
don mind
""
thanx
""
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Matrix Guy
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2011, 06:42:59 AM » |
|
hay reeeeeeeeeeee...........
ye kya ho gaya pria apko ekdum.........khud se hi sawal aur khud ke hi jawab.........ye kesi guftgu he ji.........
well dear bahot hi sweet post he...romantic feel wali.cute cute post........ dil ko batana kya, dil Se chupana kya
ishq he ye ab aur khudko samjana kya
ikraar kar lo ya inkaar kar lo
jo ho gaya ishq to fir dil ko bahkana kya
bahe kholkar lipat ja us dilbar se
ee nadaan dil apne sanam se ab sharmana kya
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2011, 06:49:49 AM » |
|
bht bht shukria parwaaz ji ki is choti si koshish ko saraha aapne..... Priyaa jee Aadaab!
Very nice lines..... Flow is also good..
Keep writting...
Khuda Hafez..  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2011, 06:51:06 AM » |
|
bht bht shukria naresh ji....
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2011, 06:52:33 AM » |
|
sahi kaha nirala ji dil ko samjhana bht mushki kaam hai..... thanx alot ji..... & very nice lines by u... good lines Ishq ji--
dil ko samjhana kisi Birle ke hi bas ki baat hoti hai--
daad hai ji
""
kya laut ayega wo---
ya bhool jayega wo---
kya bhool payega wo mujhe
ya kuch pal ko mera dil hi jalayega wo---
dil jalakar mera
kon sa sukhh payega wo---
khaak me milakar mujhe
kya khud bhi khaak na ban jayega wo---
""
don mind
""
thanx
""
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2011, 06:54:03 AM » |
|
thanx mg..... & aapka reply to as usual.... mindblowing hai ji..... sach me superb lines..... hay reeeeeeeeeeee...........
ye kya ho gaya pria apko ekdum.........khud se hi sawal aur khud ke hi jawab.........ye kesi guftgu he ji.........
well dear bahot hi sweet post he...romantic feel wali.cute cute post........ dil ko batana kya, dil Se chupana kya
ishq he ye ab aur khudko samjana kya
ikraar kar lo ya inkaar kar lo
jo ho gaya ishq to fir dil ko bahkana kya
bahe kholkar lipat ja us dilbar se
ee nadaan dil apne sanam se ab sharmana kya |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2011, 05:54:16 PM » |
|
Bahut Khub Priya JI
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
killbill
|
|
|
«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2011, 06:03:29 PM » |
|
bahut badhiya Manzil E Ishq ji.
Jara is dil ko samjha do--
good lines.
khus rahiye
sukriya
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2011, 06:00:40 AM » |
|
thanx rishi ji.... Bahut Khub Priya JI
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2011, 06:01:13 AM » |
|
thanx alot kb..... bahut badhiya Manzil E Ishq ji.
Jara is dil ko samjha do--
good lines.
khus rahiye
sukriya
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
KOYAL46
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2011, 05:20:46 AM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2011, 05:30:27 AM » |
|
aaj to bade dino baad dikhi koyal....
kaisi hai...
mast likha hai tune...
& thanx for liking...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
