dil laganey / gair

by Hasana on October 16, 2004, 04:44:38 PM
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Hasana
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Jab paas ho to rukh say nigahein na morna
Jab door ho to mera tasavur na chorna
Aye dost...dil laganey se pehley soch ley
Muskil bohat hai ristoen ki zanjerein torna (NM)


Basney lagay hain kuch asey sapney
Koi bulaye jaise naino se sapney
Hote hain apney bhi gair magar
Hum ne paya key hotey hain gair bhi apney


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Rishi
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2004, 05:06:44 PM »
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nice one hasna !
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paraaye bhi apne ho jaate hain,
sare sapne bhi sachh ho jaate hain,
neeyat ho agar insaan ki sachhi,
bichhde dil bhi ek din mil jaate hain,
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2004, 02:20:11 PM »
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Wah !! Kya baat hai! hasana ji! & Rishi!
Bahut Achchhe!!!

Dil ke Raaz hamen abhi Suljhaane nahin aate!
Ishq mein Banaane Jhuthe bahane nahin aate!
Yeh Gham ka dariya Hai Door Kinaaraa hai,
Aap hi Ban jaata hai Afsana, Ashiq Banaane nahi aate!
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Rishi
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2004, 02:27:03 PM »
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nice one Arun !
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dil mein kuch aur ho, jubaan kuchh aur bole,
ye kisi aashiq ki kahaani nahi hogi,
hum ne to suna hai duniyaa walon se,
chehra aashiq ke dil ka aaina hota hai....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2004, 06:22:48 PM »
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Very Nice!!! Rishi!
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Rishi
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2004, 07:42:18 PM »
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Thanx Arun !
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mujh pe chhaa jaaye tu barsaat ki khushbu ki tarah,
ang-ang apna main is rut mein mehkataa hua dekhoon,
maine jis lamhe ko pooja hai bas ek baar us ko,
khawaab ban ke teri aankhon mein utartaa dekhoon....
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2004, 09:36:29 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob!!!!! jabardast !!!!!


badalo ki ghata ki tarah cha jai tumhari bahen
halaki barsaat ki boondo ki tarah baras jai tumhari najare
thund ke mosam mai wo tumhara gram aagosh
bas phir na rahe mujko aor tumko koi hosh......
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2004, 03:11:05 AM »
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wowowowow! Kya Likkhaaa hai!!!
Rishi & Pooja ji! Tremendous!  Excellent!!!Wah!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2004, 03:35:06 AM »
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Thanks AKS JI!!!!!

BARSAAT KI BOONDEN BHI KAYA AGAN LAGATI HAI
MAHSOOS KARO TO THUNDI, MAGAR DIL KO BAHKAATI HAI
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2004, 09:21:19 PM »
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Wah pooja ji!!Very Nice!

Tumhaare Sheeshe se Shaffaq Jism par
Paani Bhi kahan Thahar Paata hai!
Kya Khata Is Mein Dil ki Thahari,
Jo Haath se Phisal-Phisal Jaata hai!
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Neelam
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2004, 05:49:08 AM »
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very nice Sharma jee.but its phisal not fisal with "f"...........
sher bahut acha hai aapka........
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2004, 09:26:43 AM »
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Shukriya Neelam ji!!
I have amanded My Lines accordingly!!
Thanks for correcting me!!
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afsar pasha
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2009, 06:31:38 AM »
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Masha Allah Kya Baat Hai Applause Applause tearyeyed love9
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