DIL MEIN AAYE , DILRUBA HO GAYE ................. HASAN

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«Reply #30 on: December 23, 2013, 02:49:14 PM »
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Dil  meiN   aaye   mere  ,  Dilruba  ho  gaye
Dard  pahle  diya  ,  phir   Dawa   ho   gaye


Jaise  jaise  chadha  un pe  Rang - e - Shabab
Bhole - bhaale  thhe  ,  Qaatil - adaa  ho  gaye


Pahle   tishna - labi   wo    badhaate   rahay
Jab   pilaayi  ,  mujassam   nasha   ho   gaye


Unn  meiN  MaiN , mujh  meiN  Woh , saaf  dikhne  lagay
Eik   dooje   ka    Hum    Aaina    ho    gaye


Poochte - poochte     Hum    pata    aap   ka
Khud   na    jaane   kahaaN   Laapata   ho  gaye


Achha   lagta   hai   mera   manaana   unheiN
Bus  isi  waaste  ,   phir   Khafa   ho  gaye


Eik   Aandhi   ne    aise    ujaada    Chaman
Sab   Maze   Zindagi   kay  ,  Hawa  ho  gaye


Meethe - Meethe  kuchh  ehsaas  de kar  ' Hasan'
Beete  LamhoN  ka  woh  waaqe'aa  ho  gaye

Aadaab Sir
bahut hi nasheela kalaam
Par is sher ka javaab naheen.
Unn  meiN  MaiN , mujh  meiN  Woh , saaf  dikhne  lagay
Eik   dooje   ka    Hum    Aaina    ho    gaye
Umda shayri ki misaal. behatreen

mukeshji,bahut  shukriya aur dheron duaaein.
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«Reply #31 on: December 24, 2013, 12:26:43 AM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir behad khoobsoorat ghazal, maza aa gaya padh ke, khaastaur se ye sher bahut pasand aaye:

Jaise  jaise  chadha  un pe  Rang - e - Shabab
Bhole - bhaale  thhe  ,  Qaatil - adaa  ho  gaye

Pahle   tishna - labi   wo    badhaate   rahay
Jab   pilaayi  ,  mujassam   nasha   ho   gaye

Unn  meiN  MaiN , mujh  meiN  Woh , saaf  dikhne  lagay
Eik   dooje   ka    Hum    Aaina    ho    gaye

Achha   lagta   hai   mera   manaana   unheiN
Bus  isi  waaste  ,   phir   Khafa   ho  gaye

Meethe - Meethe  kuchh  ehsaas  de kar  ' Hasan'
Beete  LamhoN  ka  woh  waaqe'aa  ho  gaye

DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareN meri taraf se.
iftakhar saheb,purkhuloos tabsire k liye bahut mashkoor book,khush rahye.
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«Reply #32 on: December 24, 2013, 10:32:50 AM »
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Dil  meiN   aaye   mere  ,  Dilruba  ho  gaye
Dard  pahle  diya  ,  phir   Dawa   ho   gaye


Jaise  jaise  chadha  un pe  Rang - e - Shabab
Bhole - bhaale  thhe  ,  Qaatil - adaa  ho  gaye


Pahle   tishna - labi   wo    badhaate   rahay
Jab   pilaayi  ,  mujassam   nasha   ho   gaye


Unn  meiN  MaiN , mujh  meiN  Woh , saaf  dikhne  lagay
Eik   dooje   ka    Hum    Aaina    ho    gaye


Poochte - poochte     Hum    pata    aap   ka
Khud   na    jaane   kahaaN   Laapata   ho  gaye


Achha   lagta   hai   mera   manaana   unheiN
Bus  isi  waaste  ,   phir   Khafa   ho  gaye


Eik   Aandhi   ne    aise    ujaada    Chaman
Sab   Maze   Zindagi   kay  ,  Hawa  ho  gaye


Meethe - Meethe  kuchh  ehsaas  de kar  ' Hasan'
Beete  LamhoN  ka  woh  waaqe'aa  ho  gaye

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut  bahut  shukriya janab sun il. Sacral saheb.khush rahye.
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«Reply #33 on: December 24, 2013, 01:32:38 PM »
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Dil  meiN   aaye   mere  ,  Dilruba  ho  gaye
Dard  pahle  diya  ,  phir   Dawa   ho   gaye


Jaise  jaise  chadha  un pe  Rang - e - Shabab
Bhole - bhaale  thhe  ,  Qaatil - adaa  ho  gaye


Pahle   tishna - labi   wo    badhaate   rahay
Jab   pilaayi  ,  mujassam   nasha   ho   gaye


Unn  meiN  MaiN , mujh  meiN  Woh , saaf  dikhne  lagay
Eik   dooje   ka    Hum    Aaina    ho    gaye


Poochte - poochte     Hum    pata    aap   ka
Khud   na    jaane   kahaaN   Laapata   ho  gaye


Achha   lagta   hai   mera   manaana   unheiN
Bus  isi  waaste  ,   phir   Khafa   ho  gaye


Eik   Aandhi   ne    aise    ujaada    Chaman
Sab   Maze   Zindagi   kay  ,  Hawa  ho  gaye


Meethe - Meethe  kuchh  ehsaas  de kar  ' Hasan'
Beete  LamhoN  ka  woh  waaqe'aa  ho  gaye

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut umdaa aur rawaan ghazal kah dee hai aapne.Such me,Aapee ye ghazal dil-o- dimaag per chha gayee hai.Really zabardast.Dili daad Qabool farmaaiye. Sh
sudhir Ji duaein .ghazal ki pazeerai k liye bahut bahut  shukriya.
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«Reply #34 on: December 24, 2013, 06:38:12 PM »
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Dil meiN aaye mere , Dilruba ho gaye
Dard pahle diya , phir Dawa ho gaye

Unn meiN MaiN , mujh meiN woh , saaf dikhne lagay
Eik dooje ka Hum Aaina ho gaye

Wah Bahut Bahut Khub Sir Jee Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
hoisla afzai k liye bht shkrgizar hoon.duaaein.
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«Reply #35 on: December 24, 2013, 09:55:14 PM »
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Ye waali gazal achchii hai... Maiko kab aayegaa aesaa likhnaa :weep: :weep:

thanks,,masoom.aap Achha likhte hain,bus aur behtar ki koshish large rahye
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«Reply #36 on: December 25, 2013, 11:02:53 PM »
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Thanks,masoom jeen.duaaein
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«Reply #37 on: December 26, 2013, 01:49:35 AM »
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Marhaba!! nihayat zordar ghazal he...
Ye shair tu sehl e mumtana he:
'Unn  meiN  MaiN , mujh  meiN  Woh , saaf  dikhne  lagay
Eik   dooje   ka    Hum    Aaina    ho    gaye''
Zor e Qalam aur ziyada!!
shukriya,nawazish janab.khush rahye.
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«Reply #38 on: December 26, 2013, 07:40:09 PM »
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shukriya nashwaniji, khush rahye
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«Reply #39 on: December 28, 2013, 07:12:33 PM »
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choooooooooo chweet ek RAU le lo fazal saahab  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

shukriya, shebaji.khush rahye.
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«Reply #40 on: January 01, 2014, 06:07:16 PM »
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Bahot khubsurat ghazal kahi hai Siddiqui sahab. Parhkar maza aa gaya. Khas taur par ye sher khas laga:

Poochte - poochte     Hum    pata    aap   ka
Khud   na    jaane   kahaaN   Laapata   ho  gaye

Daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #41 on: February 11, 2014, 01:01:25 AM »
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Bahot khubsurat ghazal kahi hai Siddiqui sahab. Parhkar maza aa gaya. Khas taur par ye sher khas laga:

Poochte - poochte     Hum    pata    aap   ka
Khud   na    jaane   kahaaN   Laapata   ho  gaye

Daad pesh karta hun.
Housla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya janab
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