DIL PAR DASTAK DENE WALE

by sanchit on April 25, 2010, 03:24:02 PM
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Dil par dastak dene wale,
Kabhi dar par mere dastak de de,
Dekhkar bhula di tujhe jo duniya mene,
Us duniya ko meri kahani de de,
              Dil par dastak dene wale
              Kabhi dar par mere dastak de de,....
Berang si hai duniya meri tere bina,
Bhar de isme rang or,
Hoton ki apne lali de de,
              Dil par dastak dene wale,
              Kabhi dar par mere dastak de de,....
Tarannum nahi jindagi me meri koi,
apni dhadkan ke sur ki rawani de de,
Benur hai tanha si ye raaten meri,
Apne saath ki koi shaam nurani de de,
              Dil par dastak dene wale,
              Kabhi dar par mere dastak de de,....
Lab khamosh hain mere bahut dino se,
Aaj labon ko mere apni aawaj suhani de de,
              Dil par dastak dene wale,
              Kabhi dar par mere dastak de de,....
Yaad rakhe duniya mujhe bhi aashiqon ki tarah,
Apne pyar ki bas itni nishani de de....!!!!              










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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 04:48:49 PM »
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sanchit dear aapne ek bahut achchi koshish kii hai
..........
aapko ek salaah hai meri aap yoindia k senior members Celmira,khwahish, aur pooja ko jaroor padiye jo aapki kucch ek khamiyo ko sudharegi
aap likhte khoob hai hai
magar zajbaaton kii jab tak ek shakal na ho oose koi nahin dekhta toh mere dost woh shakal dikhni chahiye...........

its justr an advice
and i know u will go far waiting more of ur shayaris
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neelgold
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2010, 06:33:57 PM »
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Gud one .. Kepp it up .....
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2010, 05:37:42 AM »
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Good one Sanchit Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2010, 11:25:22 AM »
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Nice creation Sanchit ji.
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