Dil pe Dastak

by raiees on August 05, 2007, 11:13:20 AM
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Laut jaate hain wo mere dil pe dastak de kar,
Aur hum hain ki palken bichaaye baithe hain..
Ye jhijhak hai, ya darr hai, ya phir ye adaa hai,
Ki hum chilman se nazrain gadaaye baithe hain...
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2007, 11:28:12 AM »
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He he he .... :lol:

Bahut khoob Raiees =D>

Bhaiya yeh adaa hai :wink:
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2007, 11:37:05 AM »
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Thanks Rajbir  :D

Woh to hume pata hai ki ye ada hai.. lekin ye baat puchhna bhi to padega na kyonki...


Is ada pe voh ek aur ada dikhaynge
Hum unki aur voh humari baat samajh jayenge
:lol:
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2007, 05:45:14 PM »
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Laut jaate hain wo mere dil pe dastak de kar,
Aur hum hain ki palken bichaaye baithe hain..
Ye jhijhak hai, ya darr hai, ya phir ye adaa hai,
Ki hum chilman se nazrain gadaaye baithe hain...


It is nice. Good imagination & then nicely expressed.
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2007, 05:58:58 PM »
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Thanks Ricky  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2008, 03:06:05 PM »
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nice, short, cute poem!
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2008, 06:59:03 PM »
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Agree with ANJAAN.. bahoot old post laai hai baher app anjaan, achi lines padne ko mili!!!

Nice work raiees
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