Dil Rehtaa Be-Karaar Bohat Hai..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on May 29, 2013, 08:52:49 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 30, 2013, 01:23:42 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: May 30, 2013, 02:20:30 PM »
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pathar kaate lohaa kaate.
teree ghazal men dhaar bahut hai.  bahut khoobsoorat kalaam
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«Reply #17 on: May 30, 2013, 02:42:44 PM »
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Shireen Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob jee behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... laa jawaab ahsaas O khayaal aur umdaa bayaani ... Usual Smile

Har ashaar par bus waaH waaH aur waaH hi hai jee... is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Thanq So Much For Your Kind Words!!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 01, 2013, 07:27:29 AM »
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bahut hi achha kalaam! ashaar umda hain!
apne jazbaaat ko poetry me likhna itna asaan nahi hota,i have noticed
you are among some genuine poet and poetess.
dheron daad !
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«Reply #19 on: June 04, 2013, 11:06:42 PM »
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Beautiful ghazal in simple words . Very nice .Congrats.

Thanq Sir!
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