*~Dil Se Kahe Doh*~

by honeyrose on April 13, 2008, 05:51:03 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 20, 2008, 01:47:12 PM »
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hmm aapka shyri padkar meri hindi sudar gayi ..keep up jee

 

Aap bhi acha likhti hai so keep it up.. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #16 on: April 20, 2008, 01:52:15 PM »
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Kya Kahein Dil Se Hum Kisi Ko,.
Dil Apna Hum Gawaa Baithe,.

Nazar Milakar Unki Mehfil Mein Unse,.
Hum Karaar Bhi Apna Lutaa Baithe,.

Kaun Samjhaayega Ab Aaakar Is Deewaane Ko,.
Har Ek Se Taalukh Hum Kataa Baithe,.

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«Reply #17 on: April 20, 2008, 02:00:19 PM »
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Very nice Azeem bro..

Dil se joh chaho woh jasbat se kaho
Dil na tum gawana joh karte hai woh intezar

Nazar toh unki bhi mil rahi hoghe
Pyaar woh bhi karte hoghe

Rukh kar karo intezar waqt ka
Dil se pukaro joh karte hai woh intezar..
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«Reply #18 on: April 20, 2008, 02:01:05 PM »
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Kya Kahein Dil Se Hum Kisi Ko,.
Dil Apna Hum Gawaa Baithe,.

Nazar Milakar Unki Mehfil Mein Unse,.
Hum Karaar Bhi Apna Lutaa Baithe,.

Kaun Samjhaayega Ab Aaakar Is Deewaane Ko,.
Har Ek Se Taalukh Hum Kataa Baithe,.

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azeem jee accha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #19 on: April 20, 2008, 03:22:32 PM »
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Shukriya Sonia Ji,.
Aap Bhi Kuch Likh Kar Jaate To Kuch Seekhne Ka Maukha Milta,.
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«Reply #20 on: April 20, 2008, 03:26:13 PM »
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Har Baar Sitam Tumhaare Sehte Aaaye Hain,.
Ab Dil Kehta Hai, Ke Sitam Ise Gawaara Nahi,.

Kabta Aaakhir Aaas Lagaaye Jeete Jaayenge Hum,.
Kehdo Ke Ye Dil "Azeem" Ab Tumhaara Nahi,.

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«Reply #21 on: April 20, 2008, 05:21:45 PM »
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Har Baar Sitam Tumhaare Sehte Aaaye Hain,.
Ab Dil Kehta Hai, Ke Sitam Ise Gawaara Nahi,.

Kabta Aaakhir Aaas Lagaaye Jeete Jaayenge Hum,.
Kehdo Ke Ye Dil "Azeem" Ab Tumhaara Nahi,.

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Kaise keh de ke yeh dil main tum nahi
pyar se sajake rakha hai tasveer tera
zara dil k aankhon se dekho to sahi
hum hai wohi jo din main sau baar
tera naam liya karte hai

ishq ka mausam aaya hai ab
sitam ki baathein na kiya karo
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«Reply #22 on: April 21, 2008, 03:34:34 PM »
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Bahot Hi Badiya Soniya Ji.,. Applause
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«Reply #23 on: April 21, 2008, 03:43:15 PM »
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Kaise keh de ke yeh dil main tum nahi
pyar se sajake rakha hai tasveer tera
zara dil k aankhon se dekho to sahi
hum hai wohi jo din main sau baar
tera naam liya karte hai

ishq ka mausam aaya hai ab
sitam ki baathein na kiya karo
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Jeete Aaaye Hain Hum Sab Ka Aitbaar Karke,.
Ab Tamanna Hai Ke Marjaayein Hum Bhi Pyaar Karke,.

Wo Chehra Dhoonda Tha Humne, Jo Dil KO Karaar De,.
Lootaa Diya Is Aaas Pe Sab Kuch Humne, Ke Wo Bhi Hume Pyaar De,.

Afsos Ke Hume Har Jagaah Ruswaaiyaan Mili,.
Khushi Ki Tamanna Ki, To Tanhaaiyaan Mili,.

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«Reply #24 on: May 21, 2008, 09:40:42 AM »
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Jeete Aaaye Hain Hum Sab Ka Aitbaar Karke,.
Ab Tamanna Hai Ke Marjaayein Hum Bhi Pyaar Karke,.

Wo Chehra Dhoonda Tha Humne, Jo Dil KO Karaar De,.
Lootaa Diya Is Aaas Pe Sab Kuch Humne, Ke Wo Bhi Hume Pyaar De,.

Afsos Ke Hume Har Jagaah Ruswaaiyaan Mili,.
Khushi Ki Tamanna Ki, To Tanhaaiyaan Mili,.

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Very nice Azeem bro..Usual Smile

Mujhe unka intezaar hai bepanha itna pyaar hai
Kuch na mange unke pyaar ke siwa yeh dil ki pyaas hai

Mango toh jaan bhi dete par afsoos aab tadapna hi hai
Kuch der ruk jaate woh haseen pal lauta dete

Manzil nahi hai door magar kuch haseen pal saath betha lete
Mujhe unka intezaar hai bepanha itna pyaar hai
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«Reply #25 on: May 21, 2008, 12:03:36 PM »
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VERY NICE ALL ....AND GOOD HONEYROSE JI AND GOOD JAANASHEEN JI

JANE KYA LOG APNE DIL SE KAHENA CHAHTE HAI
MAIN BAS ITNA JANTI HOON KI DIL KO CHUP KARNAA CHAHTE HAI
AGAR KOI APNE DIL SE KAHE DEIN KI KYA KAHOON USSAY
TOH DIL KAHETA JO TUMNE MUJHME BAAT BASA RAKHI WOH KAHE DO AAJ
ISI BAAT KO SUNTE HUE WOH AAJ KAHENE JATI KAISE KYOKI USKE DIL MEIN HAI EK DAR WOH DAR APNI BAAT KAHEKE KAISE DOOR KAR DETI AAJ
USAY YE LAGTA KI WOH NAHI KAHE PAYEGI , MAGAR DIL TOH RUKTA NAHI RUKNE SE , USNE USKE LABO TAK BAAT LEKAR AA GAYA HAI AAJ... YAHI TOH BAAT HAI DIL SE MAINE KAHA AAJ............

**********************************MUSKAN*************************
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«Reply #26 on: May 21, 2008, 01:18:30 PM »
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VERY NICE ALL ....AND GOOD HONEYROSE JI AND GOOD JAANASHEEN JI

JANE KYA LOG APNE DIL SE KAHENA CHAHTE HAI
MAIN BAS ITNA JANTI HOON KI DIL KO CHUP KARNAA CHAHTE HAI
AGAR KOI APNE DIL SE KAHE DEIN KI KYA KAHOON USSAY
TOH DIL KAHETA JO TUMNE MUJHME BAAT BASA RAKHI WOH KAHE DO AAJ
ISI BAAT KO SUNTE HUE WOH AAJ KAHENE JATI KAISE KYOKI USKE DIL MEIN HAI EK DAR WOH DAR APNI BAAT KAHEKE KAISE DOOR KAR DETI AAJ
USAY YE LAGTA KI WOH NAHI KAHE PAYEGI , MAGAR DIL TOH RUKTA NAHI RUKNE SE , USNE USKE LABO TAK BAAT LEKAR AA GAYA HAI AAJ... YAHI TOH BAAT HAI DIL SE MAINE KAHA AAJ............

**********************************MUSKAN*************************

Very nice lines muskan acha likha hai aapne..Usual Smile

Mat poocho ke iss dil ke geharai main kya hai
Kuch khwabon ki tasveer hai aur kuch yaadein hai
Zuban chup hai dekh rahi hai unki aankhon main
Ek din jab milege woh kehe dengi dil ki baatein
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«Reply #27 on: May 29, 2008, 11:27:18 AM »
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Nice One Jaya Sis,.
And Muskan Ji,.
Aap Dono Ne Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha hai,.
And Thank U,.
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«Reply #28 on: June 08, 2008, 06:51:29 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bro...

Aaj tez barsaat mein tumari yaad aaye
Kuch ajeeb se mehek tumari khushbu mein laye
Puchhna hai tumse yeh kaise dil ki haalat huey
Aapke Pairon par aapna naam likh ke roye
Kudh ko tumare zindagi ke hawale kar ke khoyi
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«Reply #29 on: June 09, 2008, 01:39:46 PM »
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U Are Always welcome sis,.
And Niec One Again,./
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