Dil Se Nikle Kuchh Savaal....

by punam on June 08, 2008, 08:12:01 AM
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Meri neend udaane waale
zara yeh batlaade tujhe neend aati hai ya nahin..

meri nigaahon se kabhi na hatne waale
zara yeh batlaade teri nigaahen mujhe dhoondti hain ya nahin..

din raat khwaabon men aane waale
zara yeh batlaade tere khwaabon men mera aana hota hai ya nahin...

mera chain churake bechain karne waale
zara yeh batlaade tu bhi mere liye bechain hota hai ya nahin..

mere dil men ghar kar ke rahne waale
zara yeh batlaade tere dil men mere liye jagah hai ya nahin...

meri zindagi men aake mujhe mujhi se churane waale
zara yeh batlaade teri zindagi men mujhe shaamil kar paaoge ya nahin...
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2008, 08:55:13 AM »
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Meri neend udaane waale
zara yeh batlaade tujhe neend aati hai ya nahin..

meri nigaahon se kabhi na hatne waale
zara yeh batlaade teri nigaahen mujhe dhoondti hain ya nahin..

din raat khwaabon men aane waale
zara yeh batlaade tere khwaabon men mera aana hota hai ya nahin...

mera chain churake bechain karne waale
zara yeh batlaade tu bhi mere liye bechain hota hai ya nahin..

mere dil men ghar kar ke rahne waale
zara yeh batlaade tere dil men mere liye jagah hai ya nahin...

meri zindagi men aake mujhe mujhi se churane waale
zara yeh batlaade teri zindagi men mujhe shaamil kar paaoge ya nahin...

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Wah kamaal ka likha hai punam dear.. Applause

 
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2008, 01:02:59 PM »
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pOONAM JI MERI EK POST LKHTA HU .. PER PYAAR KE LIYE NHI HAI.

tumhari need udaii hai per sota main bhi nhi..
meri nigahon mein bas gayi ho tumhe khota main bhi nhi.

sach kehta hu mere khwaboon mein roj tum aati nhi ho.
aapne paar ka kya hoga, sach mein tum batlati nhi ho.

tere dil mein reht hu per mere dil mein um reh sakti nhi.
rota hu zar-zar tum aapna mujhe keh sakti nhi....

soocha hu jub aapne bare mein t na jaagta na sota hu.
sach bolu to tere hi liye bechain bahut hota hu.

pyaar kerne ki kismat thi, hasil tumhe ker sakta nhi.
na reh paunga tere bina aur,tujhe khud me shamil bhi ker sata nhi
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2008, 01:07:03 PM »
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Meri neend udaane waale
zara yeh batlaade tujhe neend aati hai ya nahin..

meri nigaahon se kabhi na hatne waale
zara yeh batlaade teri nigaahen mujhe dhoondti hain ya nahin..

din raat khwaabon men aane waale
zara yeh batlaade tere khwaabon men mera aana hota hai ya nahin...

mera chain churake bechain karne waale
zara yeh batlaade tu bhi mere liye bechain hota hai ya nahin..

mere dil men ghar kar ke rahne waale
zara yeh batlaade tere dil men mere liye jagah hai ya nahin...

meri zindagi men aake mujhe mujhi se churane waale
zara yeh batlaade teri zindagi men mujhe shaamil kar paaoge ya nahin...


Wah wah waaaaah Punam  Applause Applause Dil se keh rahi hu bahut hi accha likha hai aapne...Keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2008, 01:12:51 PM »
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pOONAM JI MERI EK POST LKHTA HU .. PER PYAAR KE LIYE NHI HAI.

tumhari need udaii hai per sota main bhi nhi..
meri nigahon mein bas gayi ho tumhe khota main bhi nhi.

sach kehta hu mere khwaboon mein roj tum aati nhi ho.
aapne paar ka kya hoga, sach mein tum batlati nhi ho.

tere dil mein reht hu per mere dil mein um reh sakti nhi.
rota hu zar-zar tum aapna mujhe keh sakti nhi....

soocha hu jub aapne bare mein t na jaagta na sota hu.
sach bolu to tere hi liye bechain bahut hota hu.

pyaar kerne ki kismat thi, hasil tumhe ker sakta nhi.
na reh paunga tere bina aur,tujhe khud me shamil bhi ker sata nhi

Bhandhu jee aapne bahut accha reply diya hai. Bahut bahut accha laga padkar.
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2008, 01:16:22 PM »
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Mere dil se nikla hai ek sawal
Bichadne ke bavjood tera intezar kyu hai,
Koyi kuch bhi kahe tujhper aitbar kyu hai,
Meri jajbathon mein yeh kaisi tapish hai,
Kya baat hai kyu dil mera bekarar hai Huh???
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2008, 02:16:39 PM »
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tumhare jawab ka tumhe intzaar hai.
dil mein jo basa hai wo mera pyaar hai.
reh nhi paati ho humein chorker,
isliye dil aaj bhi bekarrar hai.
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2008, 02:21:06 PM »
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nice Punam, Sonia nad Dost Kavi!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2008, 02:24:42 PM »
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kya hua pooja ji saath nhi dogi.
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2008, 02:34:42 PM »
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tumhare jawab ka tumhe intzaar hai.
dil mein jo basa hai wo mera pyaar hai.
reh nhi paati ho humein chorker,
isliye dil aaj bhi bekarrar hai.

haha... lovely ..  Applause

 

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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2008, 02:57:04 PM »
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thank q ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2008, 03:06:00 PM »
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kya hua pooja ji saath nhi dogi.


Koshish karati hu.. chah kar bhi kafi waqat se khumar-e-Ishaq main likha nahi ja raha..

Dil-e-izhaar se kab hume inkaar hai
Dil main be-intahaan pyar hai
Tham kar kahin hath to chor na doge
Rah rah kar dil main yahi sawal hai
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2008, 02:41:39 PM »
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kyn aata hai ye sawaal pyaar mein,
aankhe taras jaati hai tere intzaar mein .
dooriyan rakhogi aur.. kitni humse
ki ab rukti nhi hai khumari humse khumaar mein
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2008, 03:03:33 PM »
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Koshish karati hu.. chah kar bhi kafi waqat se khumar-e-Ishaq main likha nahi ja raha..

Dil-e-izhaar se kab hume inkaar hai
Dil main be-intahaan pyar hai
Tham kar kahin hath to chor na doge
Rah rah kar dil main yahi sawal hai


Lovely... good lines pooja di
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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2008, 03:46:04 PM »
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ye kaisi kashish hai in lamhon ki,
ki teri or khincha chala aata hoon,
har lamha meri rooh ko tadpata hai,
isiliye to fanaa-e-kabra par bhi,
 tera hi naam likha chala jata hoon
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