Dil Se Nikle Kuchh Savaal....

by punam on June 08, 2008, 08:12:01 AM
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syednaami
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«Reply #15 on: June 18, 2008, 12:31:39 AM »
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Punam Saahiba,,, aapne yeh intahai gahrai se likha hai...
Aur yeh nazm maine taqreeban roz hi padhi hai...
Jawab suljhayi nahin deta...
Kya kahun kya likhun...

Pahli line ka jawab banata hun wahin ruk jata hun...
Par koshish kar kar nahin likh paya...

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Sab doston ne kaafi kamaal ki shayiri paish ki hai... SubhaanAllah...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #16 on: June 18, 2008, 01:42:38 AM »
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Koshish karati hu.. chah kar bhi kafi waqat se khumar-e-Ishaq main likha nahi ja raha..

Dil-e-izhaar se kab hume inkaar hai
Dil main be-intahaan pyar hai
Tham kar kahin hath to chor na doge
Rah rah kar dil main yahi sawal hai

 
Izhaar kiya per intezar aaj bi hai
Yeh dil ki halat ab kisi se chipa nahi hai
Kya fir meri dunia basakar chup jaoge?
Dil se nikta hai yehi sawal..!!



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syednaami
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«Reply #17 on: July 08, 2008, 05:20:04 PM »
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Sonia01 aap ne buhat khoobsurat likha hai...
Aur bhi likhiye...
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«Reply #18 on: July 11, 2008, 04:07:12 PM »
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Meri neend udaane waale
zara yeh batlaade tujhe neend aati hai ya nahin..

meri nigaahon se kabhi na hatne waale
zara yeh batlaade teri nigaahen mujhe dhoondti hain ya nahin..

din raat khwaabon men aane waale
zara yeh batlaade tere khwaabon men mera aana hota hai ya nahin...

mera chain churake bechain karne waale
zara yeh batlaade tu bhi mere liye bechain hota hai ya nahin..

mere dil men ghar kar ke rahne waale
zara yeh batlaade tere dil men mere liye jagah hai ya nahin...

meri zindagi men aake mujhe mujhi se churane waale
zara yeh batlaade teri zindagi men mujhe shaamil kar paaoge ya nahin...


Behad Lajawab Sawal Hain aapke.. Ab Jawab bhi to Utni Hi Mohabbat-e-Gaharaai se dene honge na..!! happy9

Behad Gaharaai se likha hai.. Lagta hai Dil se Likha hai..!!
Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooob

**~** Mann **~**
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punam
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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2008, 05:41:38 AM »
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sorry kehte huye bhi ajeeb sa lag raha hai..
main yeh post dekhi hi nahi kyun ki yaad hi nahi tha...apni likhi huyi khud bhul gayi thi...
once again sorry to u all...

Thanx Honey di...

Thanx Bhondu ji..aur bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne...

Thanx sonu..dil se hi thanx bole rahi aur sorry bhi der se reply jo kar rahi...
khoob likhi ho tum bhi...

Thanx pooja di...
bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne bhi yehan..

munirmansuriraja ji bahot khoob..

syed ji sukriya...aur haan main aap se yeh puch bhi nahi pa rahi.. kya abhi tak aap kya likhna hai soch rahe..
aap jaise shayar jo phat se reply kar dete woh abhi tak soch rahe..?
main khud sarminda hun...yehan der se aane pe..sorry...

Thanx Mann ji..chalo aap ko laga reply dena hoga yeh hi bahut hai...
aap ko pasand aaya dekh acha laga...


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