dil to dil tha

by peera4u on November 01, 2008, 08:40:13 AM
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dil to dil tha koi samunder ki mitti to nahi
tera naam likh ke phad du koi chitti to nahi

jee nahi bhara teri baatain sunte sunte
magar dil ki baat suljhi to nahi

jab guzara unki galiyon se haste haste
mere yaaron ne dee duhai to nahi

mere ane ki rangeen khwaab dekte dekte
tere haton me mehandi rachi to nahi

thak gaye hai "peera" hum kaam karte karte
kal se koi chutti to nahi.....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2008, 09:45:25 AM »
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dil to dil tha koi samunder ki mitti to nahi
tera naam likh ke phad du koi chitti to nahi

jee nahi bhara teri baatain sunte sunte
magar dil ki baat suljhi to nahi

jab guzara unki galiyon se haste haste
mere yaaron ne dee duhai to nahi

mere ane ki rangeen khwaab dekte dekte
tere haton me mehandi rachi to nahi

thak gaye hai "peera" hum kaam karte karte
kal se koi chutti to nahi.....
Hum dono shayer hain karte hain shayri
Yeh baat tune kisi se kahi to nahi  Winking

Good Work Peera Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2008, 11:16:03 AM »
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Nice First Step Peera Ji
Doosra bhi badhaiye jaldi ji
Bahut kaam tu mat kar
Kal chutti nahi  to sick leave sahi
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peera4u
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2008, 03:40:12 PM »
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thanks sajid, rajesh

kitana kaam karenge, abb hum aram karenge
tere diye huwe gham abb teri naam karenge
ye taamam khushiya abb sare amm karenge
raat bhi din jaisi hai kab aram karenge
nawkari chod ker abb hum app na kaam karenge
abb hum aram karenge
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2008, 12:09:30 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob peera ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2008, 09:16:37 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Peera
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2008, 09:19:33 PM »
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dil to dil tha koi samunder ki mitti to nahi
tera naam likh ke phad du koi chitti to nahi

jee nahi bhara teri baatain sunte sunte
magar dil ki baat suljhi to nahi

jab guzara unki galiyon se haste haste
mere yaaron ne dee duhai to nahi

mere ane ki rangeen khwaab dekte dekte
tere haton me mehandi rachi to nahi

thak gaye hai "peera" hum kaam karte karte
kal se koi chutti to nahi.....

Peera ji poem ki shuruwaat kamal ki hui... magar shayad baad main app kai sawalo-jawabo main uljh si gai lagti hai...apki yah char line behad pasand aai, good work

dil to dil tha koi samunder ki mitti to nahi
tera naam likh ke phad du koi chitti to nahi

jee nahi bhara teri baatain sunte sunte
magar dil ki baat suljhi to nahi
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