Dil unke naam kar ke......

by punam on May 03, 2008, 07:14:28 AM
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Dil unke naam kar ke aaj khud ko bhul chuki hun main
yeh unki mohabbat ka asar hai unhe bataun kaise main...

din bhar unki yaad me khud ko jalati reheti hun main
saanson me hai mehek unhi ki unhe kaise dikhaun main....

hathon me rachi mehendi me likha hai unhi ka naam
dekh unhe saamne saram se muh chupa leti hun main...

mila nahi pati hun unse nazaren lakh kosish kar ke main
lab kap kapa jate hai  apni dil ki baaten kaise batlaun main...
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2008, 07:46:46 AM »
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Thanx shihab ji..aap bhi kuch likhte...
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2008, 03:21:58 PM »
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nice lines poonam ji....
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2008, 06:00:31 PM »
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Dil bhi kissi ke naam hota hai yeh aaj tumse jaana hai, -
Muhabbat men bhi bada inaam milta hai aaj tumse jaana hai, -

Yaadon men jalkar prem ko paate hain aaj tumse jaana hai, -
saason men kaise bas jaate hain armaan aaj tumse jaana hai. -

Tune mehendi men priya ko paaya hai aaj sach dikhlaya hai, -
Munh chhupaane ka yeh andaaz tune khoob dikhlaya hai, -

Yun nazaron men sharam ka raaz bhi ajab samjhaya hai, -
Tere honton ke larazne men bhi haseen ahsaas ko paaya hai. -


(Syed Naami)

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Puna Saahiba,

Dekhiye humko samajh nahin aaya aap ki kavita ko kis mahima se parkhun, par phir socha, kabhi prashna khud hi uttar ke roop men milte hain.
So, aisa kuchh aap ki kavita ki prashansa men likh paaya hun jo khud prashna khud jawab.

Shukriya....
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2008, 06:02:09 PM »
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Quote from: punam on May 03, 2008, 07:14:28 AM
Dil unke naam kar ke aaj khud ko bhul chuki hun main
yeh unki mohabbat ka asar hai unhe bataun kaise main...

din bhar unki yaad me khud ko jalati reheti hun main
saanson me hai mehek unhi ki unhe kaise dikhaun main....

hathon me rachi mehendi me likha hai unhi ka naam
dekh unhe saamne saram se muh chupa leti hun main...

mila nahi pati hun unse nazaren lakh kosish kar ke main
lab kap kapa jate hai  apni dil ki baaten kaise batlaun main...



Punam ...bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause

Shihab jee aap ne b reply bahut accha diya

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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2008, 06:12:57 PM »
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Teinku baba  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2008, 05:34:44 AM »
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tere shaher ka mausam suhana lage..
mai eak shaam churalon agar tujhe bura na lage..

tum agar bhula sakti ho to bhula do mujhe ..
tumhe bhulane me shayad mujhe zamana lage..

tu is tarah se mere saath bewafa-e- kar ..
ke tere baad mujhe koi bewafa na lage..

jo doobna hai tujhe to itne sukoon se doob..
ke aas paas ki laheroon ko bhi pata na lage..

na jane kya hai kisi ki udaas ankhoon me ..
wo mo chupa ke bhi jaye to bewafa na lage..

                              abdul qadeer..
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2008, 09:04:53 AM »
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Thanx pandit ji...
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2008, 09:05:53 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 03, 2008, 07:48:55 AM
Bahaane Mujhse.E.Sanam Tum Deen Aur Raat Karte Ho
Magar Chhup Chhup Ke Raqibo Se Meri Hi Baat Karte Ho.

Yun To Har Pal Khud Ko Sajate Ho Ik Mere Hi Naam Se
Fir.e. Jaaneman Saamne Aane Se Itna Kyun Sharmate Ho.

Jaante Hai Tum Bhi Takte Rehte Ho Raah Mere Aaneki
Fir Jane Kyun Mere Aate Hi Parde Main Chupne Lagte Ho.

Bus Ik Aapki Hi Khatir Karli Hai Sabse Dushmani Humne.
Aur Ek Aap Hai Jo Izhaar.e.Mohabbat Se Itna Darte Ho

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Jo Huqum Punam Ji
Hum Aap Jitna Achha To Nahi Likh Sakte Hai
Par Fir Bhi Kosis Karte Hai Ji.

thanx shihab ji..wah ji bahot khoob likhe aap ne..
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2008, 09:08:55 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2008, 06:00:31 PM
Dil bhi kissi ke naam hota hai yeh aaj tumse jaana hai, -
Muhabbat men bhi bada inaam milta hai aaj tumse jaana hai, -

Yaadon men jalkar prem ko paate hain aaj tumse jaana hai, -
saason men kaise bas jaate hain armaan aaj tumse jaana hai. -

Tune mehendi men priya ko paaya hai aaj sach dikhlaya hai, -
Munh chhupaane ka yeh andaaz tune khoob dikhlaya hai, -

Yun nazaron men sharam ka raaz bhi ajab samjhaya hai, -
Tere honton ke larazne men bhi haseen ahsaas ko paaya hai. -


(Syed Naami)

-----------------
Puna Saahiba,

Dekhiye humko samajh nahin aaya aap ki kavita ko kis mahima se parkhun, par phir socha, kabhi prashna khud hi uttar ke roop men milte hain.
So, aisa kuchh aap ki kavita ki prashansa men likh paaya hun jo khud prashna khud jawab.

Shukriya....

aap ko main kya kahun..kuch na samjh k bahot khoob reply karte ho...
thanx ji..
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2008, 09:09:33 AM »
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Thanx sonu...
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punam
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2008, 09:10:19 AM »
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pata nahi mujhe dil ki tamanna kya hai
mere dil ki tadap ka sabab kya hai...

pata nahi yeh ehsaash kaisa hai
kyun kisi k liye yeh dil bechain hota hai....

pata nahi kisi k yaad me kyun aansoo behate hai
kyun kisi k intezaar yeh dil ko hota hai....

pata hai itna Dil ki badolat khayam  mohabbat hai
dil me basta koi ek sakhs jiske naam dil deen raat leta hai....
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2008, 06:25:52 PM »
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Quote from: punam on May 04, 2008, 09:04:53 AM
Thanx pandit ji...
U r welcome poo ji..
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2008, 06:26:46 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on May 04, 2008, 05:34:44 AM
tere shaher ka mausam suhana lage..
mai eak shaam churalon agar tujhe bura na lage..

tum agar bhula sakti ho to bhula do mujhe ..
tumhe bhulane me shayad mujhe zamana lage..

tu is tarah se mere saath bewafa-e- kar ..
ke tere baad mujhe koi bewafa na lage..

jo doobna hai tujhe to itne sukoon se doob..
ke aas paas ki laheroon ko bhi pata na lage..

na jane kya hai kisi ki udaas ankhoon me ..
wo mo chupa ke bhi jaye to bewafa na lage..

                              abdul qadeer..
gud lines abdul ji.......
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2008, 06:28:03 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 03, 2008, 07:48:55 AM
Bahaane Mujhse.E.Sanam Tum Deen Aur Raat Karte Ho
Magar Chhup Chhup Ke Raqibo Se Meri Hi Baat Karte Ho.

Yun To Har Pal Khud Ko Sajate Ho Ik Mere Hi Naam Se
Fir.e. Jaaneman Saamne Aane Se Itna Kyun Sharmate Ho.

Jaante Hai Tum Bhi Takte Rehte Ho Raah Mere Aaneki
Fir Jane Kyun Mere Aate Hi Parde Main Chupne Lagte Ho.

Bus Ik Aapki Hi Khatir Karli Hai Sabse Dushmani Humne.
Aur Ek Aap Hai Jo Izhaar.e.Mohabbat Se Itna Darte Ho

....
Jo Huqum Punam Ji
Hum Aap Jitna Achha To Nahi Likh Sakte Hai
Par Fir Bhi Kosis Karte Hai Ji.
shihab ji......gud gud...
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