Dilbar hi kaafi hai...R...

by brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 09:06:18 PM
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Beheti hawao k sang terra tassavur hi kaafi hai,
terri ibadat k liye ae khuda merra dilbar hi kaafi hai......
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 09:10:50 PM »
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Very touching creation Geet ji,bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 09:17:49 PM »
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thnx madhu ji...
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 11:07:46 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob...

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na main khuda maangta hoon, na hi mujhe jannat chahiye,
mujhe to bas mere mehboob ke dil me thodi si jagah chahiye...


Beheti hawao k sang terra tassavur hi kaafi hai,
terri ibadat k liye ae khuda merra dilbar hi kaafi hai......

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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 12:51:30 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Geet Ji

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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 05:37:50 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai        Brokenbyluv ji.......

Kyun Mandir-Masjid jaaun kyun jaaun Girja-Gurudwara
mere mehboob me mujhe mallik dikhe aisa hai mera dilbar pyaara..
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2010, 11:34:47 AM »
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Thanx a lot Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut Khoob Geet Ji

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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2010, 07:37:40 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Geet jee, Kapil dost aur Cara jee..

With all due respects, main itna kehna chahta hoon ke koi bhi dilbaar itna pyaara nahin hai ke Rabb ki jagah le sake...

Bura laga ho, toh maaf kijiyega..

Shukriya!
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2010, 10:30:06 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Bahaut bahaut khoob Geet jee, Kapil dost aur Cara jee..

With all due respects, main itna kehna chahta hoon ke koi bhi dilbaar itna pyaara nahin hai ke Rabb ki jagah le sake...

Bura laga ho, toh maaf kijiyega..

Shukriya!
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2010, 06:54:44 AM »
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bohat khoob geet ji. khoob kaha aapne......
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2010, 12:45:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji, rajesh ji,rahim ji, cara ji n saurabh ji...

rahiin ji maine dilbar ko khuda ka darja nhi diya hai maine tou apne khuda se kaha hai ki uski ibadat k liye merra dilbar hi kaafi hai matlab merri au merre dilbar ki dua tou ek hi hai tou agar main na kar pau kabhi dua tou ae merre khuda terri ibadat k liye merra dilbar hi kaafi hai...
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2010, 12:49:34 PM »
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na main khuda maangta hoon, na hi mujhe jannat chahiye,
mujhe to bas mere mehboob ke dil me thodi si jagah chahiye...




Chahato k katghare mein ek naam merra hai,
kisi k chehre ki roshni mein merre aanewale kal ka sawera hai......
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2010, 02:36:34 PM »
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u r welcome Geet ji...!!!

bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji, rajesh ji,rahim ji, cara ji n saurabh ji...

rahiin ji maine dilbar ko khuda ka darja nhi diya hai maine tou apne khuda se kaha hai ki uski ibadat k liye merra dilbar hi kaafi hai matlab merri au merre dilbar ki dua tou ek hi hai tou agar main na kar pau kabhi dua tou ae merre khuda terri ibadat k liye merra dilbar hi kaafi hai...
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2010, 02:37:39 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

diya teri chahat ka jisse meri har shaam roshan hai,
jiya teri chahat se mera patjhad bhi ab saawan hai...


*jiya is used for heart


Chahato k katghare mein ek naam merra hai,
kisi k chehre ki roshni mein merre aanewale kal ka sawera hai......
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2010, 09:15:28 AM »
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he he he main smjh gyi last time nisha word pe misunderstandng hui thi isliye apne jiya word ko clear kar diya khair acha hai warna sach mein main phir pooch baithti ye jiya kaun hai...Giggle


Patjhad ho saawan ho basant ho ya ho bahar,
in sab mausamo mein mehsus karti hu main uska pyar......
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