Dilbar hi kaafi hai...R...

by brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 09:06:18 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 14, 2010, 01:41:44 PM »
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Beheti hawao k sang terra tassavur hi kaafi hai,
terri ibadat k liye ae khuda merra dilbar hi kaafi hai......


Wah Kya baat Hai Geet Ji... Do Line me hi Poori Gazal likh di aapne.. Aapki Yeh do line Seedhe Dil tak utar gain..!!!! Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause



Ibaadat Uski Karta Hoon, Jispe Main Marta Hoon,
Ek Wahi Hai Jiske Liye, Khuda Tak Se Ladta Hoon...!!!





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«Reply #31 on: May 14, 2010, 01:43:01 PM »
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Bahut Khooooob Kapil Ji & Devangi Ji.. aapne Bhi har Sher Behad Hi Touching likha hai.. Lajawab peshkash... Applause Applause



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«Reply #32 on: May 14, 2010, 02:31:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Bahut Khooooob Kapil Ji & Devangi Ji.. aapne Bhi har Sher Behad Hi Touching likha hai.. Lajawab peshkash... Applause Applause



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«Reply #33 on: May 15, 2010, 03:52:32 PM »
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Wah Kya baat Hai Geet Ji... Do Line me hi Poori Gazal likh di aapne.. Aapki Yeh do line Seedhe Dil tak utar gain..!!!! Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause



Ibaadat Uski Karta Hoon, Jispe Main Marta Hoon,
Ek Wahi Hai Jiske Liye, Khuda Tak Se Ladta Hoon...!!!


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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi khoob likha hai...!!! Applause Applause Applause

tum hamari saanson me aur dhadkano me samayi ho, hum tumhe yaad kaise karein,
bin maange hi hamari har muraad poori ho gayi, hum ab koi fariyaad kaise karein...



shukriya mann ji,kapil ji n max ji...aap sabne bhi bahut acha likha hai...

Bakshi hai mhbt-e-nazar aesi khuda ne mujhe,
paa li jannat si khushi jo paa liya maine tujhe......
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«Reply #34 on: May 15, 2010, 03:59:07 PM »
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really good lines

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«Reply #35 on: May 15, 2010, 04:14:23 PM »
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thnx alot reaper ji...
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«Reply #36 on: May 24, 2010, 06:17:34 PM »
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shukriya Geet ji... aapne bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

jannat ka ehsaas to mehboob ke baahon me hi hota hai,
mohabbat ka izhaar to mehboob ke nigahon se hi hota hai...


shukriya mann ji,kapil ji n max ji...aap sabne bhi bahut acha likha hai...

Bakshi hai mhbt-e-nazar aesi khuda ne mujhe,
paa li jannat si khushi jo paa liya maine tujhe......

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«Reply #37 on: May 27, 2010, 11:10:26 AM »
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Shukriya ji aur bahut khoob aur sach baat kahi apne..



Hum ikara-e-mhbt ko sabse khushnasib manzar mante hai,
hum ishq mein pal pal ki judai ka asar jante hai.........
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«Reply #38 on: June 20, 2010, 09:09:03 PM »
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shukriya Geet ji aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

agar ishq karte ho to usme kabhi judai nahi hoti,
ek jism aur ek hi jaan me kabhi koi doori nahi hoti....


Shukriya ji aur bahut khoob aur sach baat kahi apne..



Hum ikara-e-mhbt ko sabse khushnasib manzar mante hai,
hum ishq mein pal pal ki judai ka asar jante hai.........
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«Reply #39 on: June 22, 2010, 06:04:33 PM »
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Shukriya ji...

Hum chahte tou hai har pal unke sath bitana,
per na manzil ka pata hai na paas hai koi thikana.........
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«Reply #40 on: July 08, 2010, 02:09:12 AM »
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chalte raho mohabbat ki dagar pe, yahi jeewan ki reet hai,
mohabbat mehboob ke dil me rahe usi me tumhari jeet hai...
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«Reply #41 on: July 08, 2010, 04:58:05 PM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy.. Applause Applause Applause

Jeet bhi apni haar ban jati hai,
jab mhbt dard-e-dil k manzar dikhati hai.........
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«Reply #42 on: July 16, 2010, 09:17:03 AM »
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mohabbat me na kabhi haar na kabhi jeet hoti hai,
mohabbat me to sirf aur sirf mohabbat hoti hai...
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«Reply #43 on: July 24, 2010, 08:12:43 AM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Geeet ji aur Kapil Bhai.. bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



Mohabbat Kabhi Haar-Jeet Ki Mohtaaz Nahi Hoti,
Yeh Wo Shaye Hai, Jahann Kabhi Raat Nahi Hoti...!!




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«Reply #44 on: July 24, 2010, 08:16:45 AM »
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bht khubbb sab ek se badhkar ek hain yahan....
badhiya mehfil jami hui hai...maza aagaya.......
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