dilse...jyuthika..

by jyuthika on August 13, 2014, 11:58:27 AM

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Dooriya he darmiya,
Badh rahi par dilki nazdikiya,
Aankhose door rahekebhi ho nazrome samaye,
Aate ho nazar tum jaise mere hamsaye,
Kaise kahu juda he tu mujse,
Jabki ruhme meri samaya he tu, mila jabse,
Khayalose tere zindagiko mahesus karu,
Zinda hu me tujse,bin tere kaise jeeu?
Faslose mitate nahi dilke rishte,
Kareeb rahete he harpal joode hai jo dilse…
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Re: dilse...jyuthika..

«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2014, 02:29:04 PM »

Nice one. Juthika ji Maine pahle bhi aapko advise kiya hai ki do shabdo ko milaakar na likhe. Yadi shabd alag alag likhenge to sher jyada effective hoga.


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Re: dilse...jyuthika..

«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2014, 05:37:25 PM »

nice liners


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Re: dilse...jyuthika..

«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2014, 10:45:08 AM »

Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on August 13, 2014, 02:29:04 PM

Nice one. Juthika ji Maine pahle bhi aapko advise kiya hai ki do shabdo ko milaakar na likhe. Yadi shabd alag alag likhenge to sher jyada effective hoga.

ji me samji nahi aap kya kahe rahe ho, do shabdoko milakar means me yaha big fontme likhna chahti hu par muje nahi aata so aisa hi likh jata he...its ok.