Do baten aap se

by mkjtunna on March 21, 2009, 04:35:04 AM
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          DO BATEN AAP SE
Ye kavita nahi prem ka fashana hai,
isko likhne wal koi bahut bada deevana hai,
padhne ki takat ho jisme wahi hath lagaye isme,
padhkar yadi samajh na yaaye tatpachat,
likhkar ek patra paithaye is nachij ke naam,
intzaar me rahunga main karne ko aapka kaam,
agar hai aapka bhi isme varnit jaisa kuch haal,
bata do mujhse nahi to ho jaoge behaal'
main soch samajhkar kuch kadam uthaun,
sochu main kya aapka marg-darshan kar paun,
chahat rahegi khushi milne aur bantne ki,
sang aakar mere tum bhi ji lo kuch pal jeevan ki,
phir se kah raha hun main, yaron ka yaar,
ye kavita nai sargam mastana hai,
padhne waalo ko bhi ye kar deta deewana hai,
aagar deewangi se tum bach pao,
to uthkar ek kalam uthao,
kripya meri acchaiyon aur trutiyon ko mujhe batao.


 sunny


This is my first writtent poem for you. Contact me on mkjtunna@rediffmail.com
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 06:34:30 PM »
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WAH SUNNY, BAHUT ACCHI TARAH SEY AAP NEY APNEY VICHAAR BEYAAN KIYE HAI
PAR KYA JAWAAB DU AAP KOH, AAP NEY KYA AISEY KUCH SAWAAL KIYE HAI

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mkjtunna
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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2009, 09:02:19 AM »
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Thanks jasbir bhai saab. In this poem i am trying to help those peoples who are in love and can not able to express their thought. So i suggested them to take my help. Also it is my first poem so i have concluded about my other poems in it.
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karndhar
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2009, 11:30:38 AM »
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Nice Poem, mkjtunna Ji,
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2009, 11:41:21 AM »
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Very Nice Mkjtunna.
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mkjtunna
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2009, 02:07:39 PM »
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thanks Karnadhar aur sophi ji aapko. Main jald hi apni ek do kavita aur bhi aap logo ke samne pesh karta hun. please kaisa laga bataiyega.
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2009, 03:39:30 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne mkjtunna ji..
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