Do kadam saath mere...

by daljeet_faqeer on April 16, 2009, 10:09:30 AM
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Do kadam saath mere tum bhi chalo to zara,
Kabhie tanhai mein baithkar dil ki baat suno to zara.

Is rukh e aftaab ko parde mein na chhupao tum,
Kya jayega tumhara chaand ko dekh lene do to zara.

Mana ke haseen ho tum hum bhi jawaan kam nahin,
Husn adhoora hai ishq bina hamari kadar karo to zara.

Nazron ke bol samajhte hain itne bhi nadaan nahin hum,
Pyaar bhari nazar se humein bhi kabhie dekho to zara.

Mehboob mankar humne tumhein is dil mein basaya hai,
Mohabbat se bhare dil ke jazbaat ko tum samjho to zara.

                                Daljeet'faqeer'
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2009, 10:16:50 AM »
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bahoot khoob Daljeet ji.
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2009, 10:28:27 AM »
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Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on April 16, 2009, 10:09:30 AM
Do kadam saath mere tum bhi chalo to zara,
Kabhie tanhai mein baithkar dil ki baat suno to zara.

Is rukh e aftaab ko parde mein na chhupao tum,
Kya jayega tumhara chaand ko dekh lene do to zara.

Mana ke haseen ho tum hum bhi jawaan kam nahin,
Husn adhoora hai ishq bina hamari kadar karo to zara.

Nazron ke bol samajhte hain itne bhi nadaan nahin hum,
Pyaar bhari nazar se humein bhi kabhie dekho to zara.

Mehboob mankar humne tumhein is dil mein basaya hai,
Mohabbat se bhare dil ke jazbaat ko tum samjho to zara.

                                Daljeet'faqeer'

bahut achche daljeete..............u r welcome here .hope to see more frm u

kuch nazm taaza huyi aaj mere jehan main
shayad woh os shama kii thi, jisk aparvaana jal gaya
magar yeh baat abhi tak hai Qaabil-e-daaad
woh mar k bhi Shama-e-Ishq roshan kar gaya
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2009, 10:45:18 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 16, 2009, 10:28:27 AM



kuch nazm taaza huyi aaj mere jehan main
shayad woh os shama kii thi, jisk aparvaana jal gaya
magar yeh baat abhi tak hai Qaabil-e-daaad
woh mar k bhi Shama-e-Ishq roshan kar gaya
Wah wah Kya baat Salil. Very Nice lines
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2009, 10:51:35 AM »
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Bohat Achche Daljet Ji,./
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2009, 10:55:09 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 16, 2009, 10:45:18 AM
Wah wah Kya baat Salil. Very Nice lines
thanks sophi for appreciating my wrk

mere dil ne mehsoos kar k dekha teri mohabbat ko
aur tanhayee k siwa kuch na nazaar aaya
maine dekha phir teri aanhon k kore main dabe moti ko
aur mujhe tera dard ek sailaab sa nazar aaya
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2009, 02:44:49 PM »
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bohat bohat pyara daljeet ji, khoob kaha apne.
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2009, 02:46:14 PM »
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bohat khoob salil ji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2009, 04:58:26 PM »
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Bohat khoob Daljeet and very well addition by you Salil....chalo kisi se hum bhi kuch kehte hain...

Na kar umr zaya, Na kho in palo ko pagli

Na main begunah hu, na tu farishto jaisi

Yeh baar baar tera bevajah rooth jana

Jo yeh mohabbat hain, yeh mohabbat kaisi..

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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2009, 06:02:37 AM »
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Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on April 16, 2009, 10:09:30 AM
Do kadam saath mere tum bhi chalo to zara,
Kabhie tanhai mein baithkar dil ki baat suno to zara.

Is rukh e aftaab ko parde mein na chhupao tum,
Kya jayega tumhara chaand ko dekh lene do to zara.

Mana ke haseen ho tum hum bhi jawaan kam nahin,
Husn adhoora hai ishq bina hamari kadar karo to zara.

Nazron ke bol samajhte hain itne bhi nadaan nahin hum,
Pyaar bhari nazar se humein bhi kabhie dekho to zara.

Mehboob mankar humne tumhein is dil mein basaya hai,
Mohabbat se bhare dil ke jazbaat ko tum samjho to zara.

                                Daljeet'faqeer'

Daljeet Faqeer Sa'b..aapki Jab Kalum Chalti Hai To Behtarin se Behtarin Andaaz Mein Ash'aar Nikal aate Hai janaab ! Shayar jo ho aap.
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2009, 01:18:35 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 16, 2009, 10:51:35 AM
Bohat Achche Daljet Ji,./
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    sab khoobsurati
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Hum aur aap jaise shaiyar
    kispe aur kya likh paate.
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