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Do mehke mehke se jism jab ek chaadar me so rahe theLabon ki dabi dabi hasi me saansein ulajh gai thiSukhe hue kinaaron pe tab kahin duurr Thanda saawan baras raha thaChaand bhi chupke se ye dekh sharma gaya thaHawaein bhi shaakhon se athkheliyan kar rahi thiBadan ek anjaane dard se chhuuur ho raha thaSaara jahaan so raha tha bas do ruuhein jag rahi thiDo ruuhein do na rehke ek ho gai thi jabBata uss waqt main kahan thi???Bata uss waqt tu kahan tha???
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2010, 01:30:58 PM » |
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wah wah kasak ji. jitne bebaak aur rindaana alfaaz hain, utne hi naazuk aur khoobsurat khayaal hain.
makhdoom ki mash-hoor nazm ki yaad taaza ho gayee ....
ik chameli ke mandve tale maikade se zara door us mod par do badan pyaar ki aag mein jal gaye
bauhaut khoob !
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2010, 01:40:01 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2010, 02:21:51 PM » |
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wah wah kasak ji. jitne bebaak aur rindaana alfaaz hain, utne hi naazuk aur khoobsurat khayaal hain.
makhdoom ki mash-hoor nazm ki yaad taaza ho gayee ....
ik chameli ke mandve tale maikade se zara door us mod par do badan pyaar ki aag mein jal gaye
bauhaut khoob !
shukriyaa zarra ji aapne itne dil se ise padha aur saraha... bht bht shukriya ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2010, 02:22:38 PM » |
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thnx thk for appreciating
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2010, 03:00:14 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2010, 03:11:38 PM » |
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naa thi khabar k kaun tu tha kaun main thi jo bacha tha dono me wo bas masti ki lehar thithnx guddu itni tareef k liye.....mmuuaahhh
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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2010, 03:13:27 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2010, 09:26:09 PM » |
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Anamika di, bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2010, 03:58:58 AM » |
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Anamika di, bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob.. thnx rahim
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2010, 04:54:43 AM » |
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WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI KASAK... DIL KI JI.....
"DO MEHKE MEHKE SE JISM" EK CHAADAR ME SO RAHE THE DHEERE DHEERE DO JISM EK JAAN HO RAHE THE
HOLE HOLE SE NAZDIKIYAN BADH RAHI THI DIL MACHAL RAHE THE TAN MAN ME AAG LAG RAHI THI
PYAAR KI AANDHIYAN CHAL RAHI THI DO JISM SAMBHAL NAHI PAA RAHE THE BHULA KE DUNIYA KO EK DUJHE ME KHO RAHE THE
"DO MEHEKE MEHEKE SE JISM" EK CHAADAR ME SO RAHE THE............
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2010, 02:52:49 PM » |
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wowwwwww kasak ji kya romatic question he apka........
as usal it can be written only by kasak......
wese chupke se ek baat kahni he apse.....poetry to apki behtareen hoti hi he but isme muje pic bht jayda pasand ayi......
deep thoughts.......
well wese ek baat kahu apke sawal ke jawab me ......
wo jo 2 jism the na unme se ek me hi tha ........ab "dobara mat puchna" ki bata tu kaha tha ha ha ha ha
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