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Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan
aur fir chal diye hum kahan,tum kaha
do pal ki thi saanson ki woh raftaar
chheen liya aaj isne yeh karaar
Do pal woh the jaise do janam
dil ka tha wohi ek marham ( 'malhum' i guess :? )
yaad to rahenge hum tumhe bhi kam se kam
pyaar ho bhi jaye agar kahin kam
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2004, 08:28:10 PM » |
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Do pal ka tha khwaabon ka karvaan
khamoshi se loot liya yaadon ne mera jahaan
honth sile rahe aankhen dekhti rahi
le aaya uska nazaara kahan se fir kahan :!:
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2004, 05:50:37 AM » |
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Do pal ka tha khwaabon ka karvaan
khamoshi se loot liya yaadon ne mera jahaan
honth sile rahe aankhen dekhti rahi
le aaya uska nazaara kahan se fir kahan :!: waoooo bohat achey mansi but can u plz can its color.......! |
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2004, 07:53:16 AM » |
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do pal ki thi diye mein roshni
do pal jagmagaya jisse mera jahaan
chaand ki chaandni bhi jawaab de gayi
mita na saki pyaar ki lau ke nishaan
do pal le aaye yaadon ki baraat mere aangan
khanak raha hai tera diya pyaar ka pehla kangan
ek hi hai dil yeh mera,ban gaya sapno ka tere aangan
ek pal mein chale na jaana ,deke pyaar ka pehla saawan :evil: :
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2004, 01:15:05 PM » |
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wah!!!!!!!!!! very nice ghzal maansi..........mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai...
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2004, 07:32:35 PM » |
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thanx Waheed & Lovebites !  Do pal ki thi woh suhaani shaam
likhi gayi meri kismat uske naam
do pal ke the uski aankhon ke jaam
jaise mila tha nashe mein araam
do pal ki thi bijli ki kadak
sikha gayi meri haya ko sabak
chaahat ki baarish se dil gaya dhadak
do pal mein mil gayi zindagi ko nayi sadak |
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2004, 08:04:56 PM » |
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Diivaaron se mil kar ronaa achchhaa lagataa hai
Ham bhii paagal ho jaayenge aisaa lagataa hai
Duniyaa bhar kii yaadein ham se mil ne aatii hain
Shaam Dhale is suune ghar mein melaa lagataa hai
Kitane dinon ke pyaase honge yaaro socho to
Shabanam kaa qataraa bhii jin ko dariyaa lagataa hai
Kis ko "Qaiser" patthar maruun kaun paraayaa hai
Shiish mahal mein ik ik cheharaa apanaa lagataa hai
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2004, 08:21:59 PM » |
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thanx ppl n nice one baazish ! Cud u plz write on d topic of my post.."do pal ka tha khwaabon ka karvaan"....i'll be really obliged if u use hindi words only |
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2004, 08:27:54 PM » |
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thanks....ok i will try
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2004, 06:51:34 AM » |
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nice mansi................bazish..............
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2004, 11:13:11 AM » |
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thanx Waheed
do pal ka tha khwaabon ka karwaan
do pal mein ho gaye sapne jawaan
sapno mein dekhti hu khud ko wahaan
na le jaa saki thi patthar dil kismat jahaa
do pal kaid hain aaj bhi do dilo mein
pyaar ka mazaa hai isliye in faaslon mein
do pal ki khushboo thi kuch kuch aisi
uski yaadon se mehki is shayri jaisi :twisted:
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2004, 12:03:57 PM » |
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nice work mansi and bazish
Doo pal koo milla jo saat teraa, hum mar kar jee gahay
phir zahar diya joo judai ka, hum hass kar pee gahay
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2004, 12:06:41 PM » |
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gud work all...
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2004, 12:47:30 PM » |
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awesome husain!!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2004, 01:26:15 PM » |
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thax mansi
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