Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan

by Mansi_d_archi on December 01, 2004, 12:08:52 AM
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #30 on: December 08, 2004, 06:51:11 PM »
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suna hai pehli hi mulakat mein kabhi-2 kuch ho jata hai
bina mile,bina sune jaane kyo dil unka mujhme kho jata hai
ab to unki baatein sunkar yakeen hamein bhi ho jata hai
pata nai chalta kabhi bhi,kahin bhi,kaise bhi ye paak dil kho jata hai glasses2 .
..........dun read it if u dun wanna comment on it! :twisted:
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akela
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«Reply #31 on: December 08, 2004, 07:10:08 PM »
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nice all
@mansi ji
ye dil bana hi hai shayad khone ke liye,
har pal ,har din aansuo mai bhigone ke liye,
issiliye kah raha hu mai dost,
mohabbat karo bhi yaha, tho sirf rone ke liye Puzzled !
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #32 on: December 08, 2004, 07:20:53 PM »
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Quote from: "akela"
nice all
@mansi ji
ye dil bana hi hai shayad khone ke liye,
har pal ,har din aansuo mai bhigone ke liye,
issiliye kah raha hu mai dost,
mohabbat karo bhi yaha, tho sirf rone ke liye Puzzled !


yeh kya hai bakwaas!
tune to kho hi dii aas
kuch nahin na sahi
bhagwaan to hai tere paas
padh meri bakwaas or ji bhar k le le saans
soch ke dekh kya lagti hogi meri shayri bhi kisi ko khaas!......lol...lol :twisted:
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akela
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«Reply #33 on: December 08, 2004, 07:28:54 PM »
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Usual Smile mai tho tha hi aapka daas,
par aapne tho nikal dil ki bhadaas,
ab bhagwaan ka kya kare,
jab shayari mere hi nahi aai aapko raas. Usual Smile
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #34 on: December 08, 2004, 07:36:05 PM »
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shaayri ka ek ek shabd mujhe na aaya raas
laga jaise dimaak mein tere keeda hai koi khaas (lol.....rone wala keeda)
nikaal na nikaal rone-dhone ki apni bhadaas
main to rakhungi or dungi sabko jeene ki har possible aas :wink:
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akela
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«Reply #35 on: December 08, 2004, 07:49:56 PM »
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khushya hi  hoti pyar mai,
gam na hote agar kaash,
tho chehre pe apne bhi muskurahat hoti
auur na hota ye akela uddas.
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #36 on: December 08, 2004, 08:12:05 PM »
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khushiya hi nahi gum bhi hain tanhaayi ke saathi
gum na kar tu agar dukh hi tere haath hain aati
chhu jaaye jo mohabbat ki hawa, bujhne na de fir bhi ishq ki baati
mohabbat sikhaaye sab kuch humein,saare rang ye samaaye hai laati :twisted:
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Miss Kismat
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«Reply #37 on: December 08, 2004, 10:18:43 PM »
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Nice Work you all!!!! Keep it up.....With Luv Miss Kismat  :wink:
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akela
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«Reply #38 on: December 09, 2004, 09:35:33 AM »
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issk hai hi aise bagiya jaha bahar aane par phool kam kaante hazar hote hai.
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«Reply #39 on: December 09, 2004, 12:23:52 PM »
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issk hai hi aise bagiya jaha bahar aane par phool kam kaante hazar hote hai.


V well said! ^^
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #40 on: December 09, 2004, 12:50:22 PM »
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very nice maansi...............akela........
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #41 on: December 09, 2004, 07:06:47 PM »
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thanx Waheed :twisted:
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lovebites
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«Reply #42 on: December 10, 2004, 12:25:57 AM »
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good work akela and mansi....keep them comin.............!
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #43 on: December 10, 2004, 12:57:52 PM »
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thanx all :twisted:
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #44 on: December 10, 2004, 08:49:03 PM »
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issk hai hi aise bagiya jaha bahar aane par phool kam kaante hazar hote hai.


welll said waheed ji..................

shayad isi liye issk karney wale  muskura kai rotey hain........
tabhi to unko hum dewana kehtey hain........
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