Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan -Panna 4:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #45 on: December 10, 2004, 09:05:56 PM »

jo ishq karta hai sacha,wo kabhi na aansu bahaane dega
door ho chaahe jitna bhi,ehsaas na tumhe hone wo dega
lamha-lamha faaslo ko kabhi na paas aane dega
aansu usi ke liye bahaye hain jaate,jo dukh sab door karega
deewana kaho ya kaho pagal,aisa pyaar kaha milega


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smile_deep1

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Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan

«Reply #46 on: December 10, 2004, 09:33:59 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

well said........

deewana kaho ya pagal ye tohmat nahin,
ashiko ka taj hotey hain...........
unkey chehron ki muskurahat ki awaz hotey hain,
unkey pairon main lagey katon ke mohtaj hote hain,
woh to ishk-e-mohabat ki jahan ke sartaj hotey hain..........


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waheed_rose2004

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Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan

«Reply #47 on: December 11, 2004, 05:04:39 AM »

too good smile........................ Usual Smile


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smile_deep1

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«Reply #48 on: December 11, 2004, 05:48:36 AM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

too good smile........................ Usual Smile

thanx waheed ji


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Mansi_d_archi

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Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan

«Reply #49 on: December 11, 2004, 12:36:24 PM »

ya nice 1 Deep


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lovebites

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«Reply #50 on: December 11, 2004, 01:03:56 PM »

-------------khawab---------------

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Mein or woh ik din

kamrey mein behtey!

batain ker rahay they k

Mujhe achanak ik kial aya

Kiyal k atey he mein ne

Us se kaha dear,

Tum apna haath mere haath mein

Tahma do!

Or us ne apna haath

Mere haath mein tahma diya

Phir mein ne masti mein a ker

Us ka haath choomna chaha

Lakin------lakin haath choomey se

Pehley he

Meri anhk khul gi[/b]


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #51 on: December 11, 2004, 01:15:34 PM »

aankh khul gayee??? Shocked

lol


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #52 on: December 11, 2004, 01:17:24 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

yeah ur rite... jo sachcha pyar karta hai wo kabhi nahi chahta uske pyar ke aansu bahein... par...

Puzzled !

anyvvays, it vvas nice


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #53 on: December 11, 2004, 01:42:58 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

100 % true maansi.............. tongue3


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #54 on: December 11, 2004, 02:05:23 PM »

thanx Chimpu & Waheed glasses2

jus like a dew,he grew in my soul
though didn't leave me n din't let me roll
jus in a moment d dew freezed n left my lonely soul so very pleased
jus like an ice burg im so stuck,no idea as 2 y my nerves chuck Puzzled !

kindly comment.....dis is my 3rd eng poem written after a really long time (around 2 yrs)n plz plz plz, do try 2 make it beautiful~ :wink:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #55 on: December 11, 2004, 08:41:32 PM »

4get it ppl....LOTSA WEIRD RHYMING WORDS :cry:

im startin smthn new.Hope u'll enjoy as its frm d core of my heart..reflects d true state of my mind ...MY STORY!

I know u’ll b standing there!

Down d memory lane I luked
There I saw I had him always booked
Though I never was so sure
Thought some day his luv might turn sour
Coz deep down there,my heart I cudn’t cure

Cudn’t cure d broken pieces
Dat’s y now it always ceases
Ceases 2 grow fonder
& pleases my emotions not 2 surrender

D more it stops,d faster it beats
Carrying unconsciously on trembling feets

Dunno wat it wants,dunno goin where
Still deep down somewhere I know u’ll b standing there!

Down d memory lane I c
U were always my world’s key
Though I never was so sure
But I know its U whom it wants 2 lure

U gave my life a meaning…
A meaning ….dat I no longer stare
No longer at my life Istare
& no longer about d past I care

coz I got U & no more pain will now dare
Dare 2 touch my happiness I swear
Now on earth ,everything I can bear
coz I know u’ll always b standing there


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #56 on: December 11, 2004, 08:54:50 PM »

yeah thts better mansi!!! superb!!!

:dance: :dance: :dance:

:kiss:

gud vvrk . keep it up ::

jst remember sum things... keep it organised... giv it a title... sumthing... n dont use shortcuts in poem writing :: write "the" not "d"

but after all, its ur vvrk...

im here to comment on ur vvrk.. rest depends on u


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #57 on: December 11, 2004, 09:13:21 PM »

lol...thanx a lot Chimpu! Its superb coz u had faith in me....so it was jus an effort frm my side :twisted: :wink: n yeh thx 4 d kiss :yuck:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #58 on: December 11, 2004, 09:20:45 PM »

okay. now g'nit sweet dreams Puzzled !

kitni baar bolun :twisted:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #59 on: December 11, 2004, 09:25:51 PM »

teri marzi!! maine nai bola kuch...shut down kar or shut up bhi! :evil: :twisted: :evil:


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