Do pal ka tha khwaabo ka kaarwaan

by Mansi_d_archi on December 01, 2004, 12:08:52 AM
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«Reply #60 on: December 13, 2004, 05:12:35 PM »
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d poem continues

Deep down d memory lane i luked,
Time told me'dis was d guy 2 whom u were 2 b hooked'
though it din't take yrs 4 my heart 2 realise
jus dat I was stunned 2 c such a beautiful sun-rise

mornings weren't meant 4 me
days jus flee not lettin even a blink
but as soon as i got him,time began 2 shrink
wishin 2 capture every moment ,nthn left now 2 think

deep down d memory lane i find
luck had never been so kind
jus in 2 months he got me blind
widout even havin met,now he’s always on my mind :queen:
 

Though i never had any fear
coz life somehow had been li'l clear
but now im afraid at d very thot of losin u my dear
well i know some day i'll have it all clear
coz i know u'll always b standing there
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«Reply #61 on: December 13, 2004, 06:43:06 PM »
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d poem continues

Deep down d memory lane i luked,
Time told me'dis was d guy 2 whom you were 2 b hooked'
though it din't take yrs 4 my heart 2 realise
jus dat I was stunned 2 c such a beautiful sun-rise

mornings weren't meant 4 me
days jus flee not lettin even a blink
but as soon as i got him,time began 2 shrink
wishin 2 capture every moment ,nthn left now 2 think

deep down d memory lane i find
luck had never been so kind
jus in 2 months he got me blind
widout even havin met,now he’s always on my mind :queen:
 


too good work mansi.................
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«Reply #62 on: December 13, 2004, 06:47:58 PM »
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nice one.. shoz dedication


i liked it   u get 100%   :agreed:


very nice vvrk mansi
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #63 on: December 14, 2004, 05:36:22 AM »
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thanx Deep n heart! I din't have a pen n diary ,so straight frm my heart (widout usin much of my silly mind) :wink:
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«Reply #64 on: December 14, 2004, 06:49:01 AM »
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u r welcome dear Usual Smile
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lovebites
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«Reply #65 on: December 14, 2004, 08:03:38 AM »
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Lahoo Mein Rang Ki Soorat Basa Hai Tera Khayal,
Mein Kis Tarha Teri Yaadoon Se Faasla Rakhoon,
Kisi Bhi Shaqs Se Koi Gharaz Naheen Mujhe,
Mein Sirf Tere Liye Sab Se Waasta Rakhoon.
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«Reply #66 on: December 14, 2004, 09:31:51 AM »
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nice lovebites!

I added 1 more paragraph 2 dat poem......Go back again n have a luk frns :twisted:
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Talat
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«Reply #67 on: December 14, 2004, 09:58:02 AM »
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Good work Mansi!!!!
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #68 on: December 14, 2004, 10:10:25 AM »
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thanx Talat! yom
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lovebites
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«Reply #69 on: December 14, 2004, 10:38:06 AM »
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nice lovebites!

I added 1 more paragraph 2 dat poem......Go back again n have a luk frns :twisted:


Thanks yeh i checked it out Gr8......................work.................... ....!
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«Reply #70 on: December 14, 2004, 11:00:28 AM »
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thx

Chimpu plz dun scare urself,stop readin luv-poems,i wanna c u as jolly as :hug:  :ghug:  u were yesterday.........plz sad5
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«Reply #71 on: December 16, 2004, 08:59:25 AM »
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Deep down d memory lane i luked,
Time told me'dis was d guy 2 whom you were 2 b hooked'
though it din't take yrs 4 my heart 2 realise
jus dat I was stunned 2 c such a beautiful sun-rise

mornings weren't meant 4 me
days jus flee not lettin even a blink
but as soon as i got him,time began 2 shrink
wishin 2 capture every moment ,nthn left now 2 think

deep down d memory lane i find
luck had never been so kind
jus in 2 months he got me blind
widout even havin met,now he’s always on my mind :queen:
 

Though i never had any fear
coz life somehow had been li'l clear
but now im afraid at d very thot of losin you my dear
well i know some day i'll have it all clear
coz i know you'll always b standing there


wah!!!!!  mansi.............lovebites................bahot khoob......
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«Reply #72 on: December 16, 2004, 09:57:37 AM »
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Deep down d memory lane i luked,
Time told me'dis was d guy 2 whom you were 2 b hooked'
though it din't take yrs 4 my heart 2 realise
jus dat I was stunned 2 c such a beautiful sun-rise

mornings weren't meant 4 me
days jus flee not lettin even a blink
but as soon as i got him,time began 2 shrink
wishin 2 capture every moment ,nthn left now 2 think

deep down d memory lane i find
luck had never been so kind
jus in 2 months he got me blind
widout even havin met,now he’s always on my mind :queen:
 

Though i never had any fear
coz life somehow had been li'l clear
but now im afraid at d very thot of losin you my dear
well i know some day i'll have it all clear
coz i know you'll always b standing there


Wow Very Lovely Lines!!!!Excellent!!!!
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #73 on: December 16, 2004, 09:03:43 PM »
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thx 4 such an overwhelmin response ppl Usual Smile i'll continue it later, havin exams..lol but killin my time in othr threads sad5

Though i never wished 4 it
dat i'll found som1 so fit
such a diamond i hit
dat its filled my life's empty kit

lol......dun ask 4 more again
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«Reply #74 on: December 16, 2004, 09:07:41 PM »
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gr8 kudi yom
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