Dono ko hai Ishq, magar....!!!

by Talat on May 15, 2008, 11:24:49 AM
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Ye maine kisi ki special farmaaish pe likha hai...!! Ye ek ladke ke jazbaat hain, jo kisi se mohabbat karta hai aur jaanta hai ki use bhi mohabbat hai, par dono ne iqrar nahin kiya hai...!!

I dont know whether I have done justice to this or not !!
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 11:37:55 AM »
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NICE ONE....
CELMIRA JI,
VERY WELL EXPRESSED HIS FEELINGS....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 11:45:38 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 15, 2008, 11:24:49 AM
Ye maine kisi ki special farmaaish pe likha hai...!! Ye ek ladke ke jazbaat hain, jo kisi se mohabbat karta hai aur jaanta hai ki use bhi mohabbat hai, par dono ne iqrar nahin kiya hai...!!

I dont know whether I have done justice to this or not !!








bahoot khoob pahalee baar padha aapko, achaa bayaan kiya hai aapne....

netra...
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2008, 11:56:35 AM »
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Oye hoye..ladkon ke jazbaat aap ki zubaani Winking

Mashallah bahut achche !

Ab tum meri taraf se bhi likh diya karo shayari...mujhe to likhna aata nahi sad5

@Netra

Kyun bhai Talat ji ko nahi pehchana naye roop mein Winking
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2008, 12:03:07 PM »
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Very Good combination of Beautiful Words with Emotions..
Really very very nice.. Celmira.. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2008, 01:10:05 PM »
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YAR TU JAB AAPKO PATA HYE TU AAP KUCH KYOUN NAHEEN KARTYE
AAP DONO K DARMYAN ESYE HALAT PYDA KARO K WO KUD KIH DYEEN
KISE KO MILNA KOYE GUNHA TU NAHEEN.
NOOR
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2008, 01:22:45 PM »
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You have done Full justice in creating this beautiful poem.  Applause
B ahut accha laga padkar Talat sis
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2008, 03:34:37 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot khoob bahoot hi aacha likha hai aap ne
us ladke ke dil ke saare baate keh daali aap ne


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Baadal
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2008, 06:02:07 PM »
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Written with a polytonal movement of time and feelings.
Bravo!!
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2008, 06:52:53 PM »
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Thanks all the friends for reading this and appreciating the thoughts and feelings.


k.shael Bohot shukriya aapne pasand kiya ! Usual Smile


Netra Ji Hum mashkoor hain aapke ki aap yahan aaye aur humara hausla badhaya Usual Smile


Rajbir Ji bas farmaish ki kisi ne, to poori karni padi...bohot shukriya..aap batayen, hum likhne ki koshish karenge Usual Smile


Mahiya Your views are always much appreciated and mean so much to me, thanks so much Mahiya Usual Smile

Noor Aapka shukriya, Ji ye haqiqat nahin hai, sirf kisi ne is tarah ki feelings pe likhne ki farmaaish ki thi Usual Smile

Roja Thanks a lot Roja sis, I am happy you liked it. Usual Smile

Baadal Thanks Baadal ek ladke ki nazar se is poem ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye Usual Smile

S.Naami I am thankful to you for reading the poem with such depth...Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2008, 07:18:25 PM »
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wah wah wah bahoot khoob Celmira, bahoot hi achi kavita ki rachan ki hai apne!! Good job!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2008, 07:51:01 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Celmira Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Alfaaz Bikhere hain aapne.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Daad Kubool kare..

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2008, 08:17:07 AM »
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Lovely


But Der Karoge aap to koi aur ...
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2008, 12:40:59 PM »
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bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne celmira sis..Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2008, 12:44:32 AM »
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Celmira ji Aadaab...  Behad umda or nafasat se kisi ke jazbaat pesh kiye aapne, is hunar mandi or saliqe ki dad deta hun, or ek baat ar'z he ham ye kaarigari to nahi jaante albatta sur mila ne ki or saath dene ki koshish ki he ummid he sab ko pasand aayegi.

Aap ne ladke ke jazbaat pesh kiye to sochha me kisi ladki ke jazbaat pesh karun, go ke maharat nahi isme bas us khat ka jawaab likhne ki ek kamzor si koshish he.

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