doobta hua suraj

by jay pratap singh on August 20, 2012, 06:43:35 PM
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dubta hua ye sooraj kaha raha hai aoonga mai,
chha gaya hai jo andhera fir usse hataonga mai,
aa gai jo ye ghadi jab haath mai hai hath kadi,
dhalti hai per har raat to chaahe ho jitni bhi badi,
soya hua jo khaab hai fir se usse jagaonga mai,
doobta hua ye sooraj kah raha hai aonga mai,
chha gaya hai jo andhera fir usse hataonga mai.........
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2012, 06:45:34 PM »
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Quote from: jay pratap singh on August 20, 2012, 06:43:35 PM
dubta hua ye sooraj kaha raha hai aoonga mai,
chha gaya hai jo andhera fir usse hataonga mai,
aa gai jo ye ghadi jab haath mai hai hath kadi,
dhalti hai per har raat to chaahe ho jitni bhi badi,
soya hua jo khaab hai fir se usse jagaonga mai,
doobta hua ye sooraj kah raha hai aonga mai,
chha gaya hai jo andhera fir usse hataonga mai.........
 


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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2012, 07:01:01 PM »
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khawaab se tujse dost mei.n abhi anhi uthauga
kaisi hai teri ye rachna tujhe mei.n phir batauga

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Quote from: jay pratap singh on August 20, 2012, 06:43:35 PM
dubta hua ye sooraj kaha raha hai aoonga mai,
chha gaya hai jo andhera fir usse hataonga mai,
aa gai jo ye ghadi jab haath mai hai hath kadi,
dhalti hai per har raat to chaahe ho jitni bhi badi,
soya hua jo khaab hai fir se usse jagaonga mai,
doobta hua ye sooraj kah raha hai aonga mai,
chha gaya hai jo andhera fir usse hataonga mai.........
 
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2012, 07:04:35 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on August 20, 2012, 07:01:01 PM
khawaab se tujse dost mei.n abhi anhi uthauga
 hai kaisi teri  rachna, tujhe  phir batauga

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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2012, 11:29:54 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2012, 10:10:59 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2012, 10:32:28 AM »
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Good work JPS..
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2012, 04:38:19 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2012, 06:48:52 PM »
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bahut bahut sukriya.............
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