door rehne ka yeh mausam aaya kaisa sanam...

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Door rehne ka yeh mausam ayaa kaisa  sanam,
Pass hi hai tere hum yeh bhi guzar jaayega,
Guzar ke pass hamein jab yeh sama laayega,
Dooboge tum to magar humko bhi doobaoge,
Door rehte hue bhi tan hai mera mehka hua,
Nazare tumhari hamein chupke se chuh jaati hai,
ke bin kahe hue bhi bahut kuch keh jaati hai,
Dooriyon se bhi hai ek nasha sa chhaya hua,
 Abhi yeh haal hai , na jaane tab kya hoga mera,
Soch ker hi yahi mun hai  mera ghabraya  hua ,
Sambhalo dil ko ke yeh pehle se hi hai dhadka hua..
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2005, 01:39:04 PM »
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very nice gesu kapoor

Mere Honton ke mehaktay hue naghmo par na ja
Mere seenay main kaye aur bhi ghum paltay hain
Mere chehray par dikhaway ka tabassum hai magar
Meri aankhon main udaasi kay diye jalte hain
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2005, 07:13:43 AM »
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thanks abeera
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2006, 12:41:50 PM »
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very nice gesu kapoor

Mere Honton ke mehaktay hue naghmo par na ja
Mere seenay main kaye aur bhi ghum paltay hain
Mere chehray par dikhaway ka tabassum hai magar
Meri aankhon main udaasi kay diye jalte hain


bahut khoob!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2006, 12:48:53 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Gesu Bhai,..
Keep Going
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2006, 12:50:56 PM »
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shukriya azeem ji hum behna hain bhai nahi... :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2006, 12:55:51 PM »
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Sorry Sis I Hope U Dont Mind It,...
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2006, 01:03:46 PM »
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Door rehne ka yeh mausam ayaa kaisa  sanam,
Pass hi hai tere hum yeh bhi guzar jaayega,
Guzar ke pass hamein jab yeh sama laayega,
Dooboge tum to magar humko bhi doobaoge,
Door rehte hue bhi tan hai mera mehka hua,
Nazare tumhari hamein chupke se chuh jaati hai,
ke bin kahe hue bhi bahut kuch keh jaati hai,
Dooriyon se bhi hai ek nasha sa chhaya hua,
 Abhi yeh haal hai , na jaane tab kya hoga mera,
Soch ker hi yahi mun hai  mera ghabraya  hua ,
Sambhalo dil ko ke yeh pehle se hi hai dhadka hua..


bahut khoob gesu....
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2006, 04:48:05 AM »
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na not at all azeem ji.. u know i don't have mind.. :lol:  :lol:

shukriya ranju ji!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2006, 05:05:46 AM »
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Nice one Gesu! Lemme try..

Ye Dooriyon ka mousam badaa ajeeb hai
Kya karein tanha rehna bhi apna naseeb hai
Chah kar dekho humein bhi tum kabhi
Hum bhi humnafas, humrahi tere habib hain
Kashti dooley majhdhaar se gumshuda hokar
Dikhta to naih ke abb sahiil bhi kareeb hai
Ghis Ghis ke shyahi abb shayari bhi nahi banti
ye waqt hai ulfat ka, ya zindagi ki tehzeeb hai?
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2006, 05:09:21 AM »
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Nice one Gesu! Lemme try..

Ye Dooriyon ka mousam badaa ajeeb hai
Kya karein tanha rehna bhi apna naseeb hai
Chah kar dekho humein bhi tum kabhi
Hum bhi humnafas, humrahi tere habib hain
Kashti dooley majhdhaar se gumshuda hokar
Dikhta to naih ke abb sahiil bhi kareeb hai
Ghis Ghis ke shyahi abb shayari bhi nahi banti
ye waqt hai ulfat ka, ya zindagi ki tehzeeb hai?


wah neer ji its excellent!!!!! Usual Smile
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