Dua Chahta hoo.n - Nooruddin Noor

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Muhabbat mein teri Wafa chahta hoo.n,
Mere dard-o-gam ki dawa chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri azmath, tu hi meri shuhrath,
Muhabbat ka tujhse sila chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri arzoo,  tamanna bhi tu hai,
Laboo.n par khushi tere sada chahta hoo.n,

Tabassum hai ada teri, tarannum sada teri,
Tu mujh ko bhi chahe dua chahta hoo.n,

Muhabbat mein teri wafa......

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Janab Nooruddin Noor Saheb, aapki ghazal ko paRhne ke baad maiN is nateeje pe pahuNcha hooN k aapke ander aik honhaar shayar maujood hai jise agar kuchh ezaafi ilm haasil ho jaaye maslan bahr waghaira ka ilm to wo aik saharangez shakhsiyat ka maalik ho jaaye. Aapko ghazal kahne ka Dhang aa raha hai, bas is meiN rawaani ki zarurat hai. Aap bahr seekhne ka kaam kareN phir dekheN sheroN meiN jaadoobayaani kaise aati hai. Aapke hi ashaar ko bahr meiN laane ki koshish karuNga jis se aapko ghazal ke ramooz o nukaat ka kuchh ilm ho jaaye:

Muhabbat meiN teri wafa chaahta hooN
Sabhi dard o ghum ki dawa chaahta hooN

Tu hi meri azmat, tu hi meri shohrat
Muhabbat ka tujhh se sila chaahta hooN

Tu hi meri khushiyaN, tamanna bhi tu hai
Khushi tere lab pe sada chaahta hooN

Hamaari muhabbat ka mil jaaye tohfa
Ki tu mujh ko chaahe sada chaahta hooN

Ye aik maiN ne jasarat ki hai aur agar meri ye jasarat aapko buri lag jaaye to darguzar kijiyega. Apni is achchhi koshish par daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: Nooruddin Noor on June 22, 2011, 04:50:32 AM
Muhabbat mein teri Wafa chahta hoo.n,
Mere dard-o-gam ki dawa chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri azmath, tu hi meri shuhrath,
Muhabbat ka tujhse sila chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri arzoo,  tamanna bhi tu hai,
Laboo.n par khushi tere sada chahta hoo.n,

Tabassum hai ada teri, tarannum sada teri,
Tu mujh ko bhi chahe dua chahta hoo.n,

Muhabbat mein teri wafa......

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Muhabbat mein teri Wafa chahta hoo.n,
Mere dard-o-gam ki dawa chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri azmath, tu hi meri shuhrath,
Muhabbat ka tujhse sila chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri arzoo,  tamanna bhi tu hai,
Laboo.n par khushi tere sada chahta hoo.n,

Tabassum hai ada teri, tarannum sada teri,
Tu mujh ko bhi chahe dua chahta hoo.n,

Muhabbat mein teri wafa......

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Janab Nooruddin Noor Saheb, aapki ghazal ko paRhne ke baad maiN is nateeje pe pahuNcha hooN k aapke ander aik honhaar shayar maujood hai jise agar kuchh ezaafi ilm haasil ho jaaye maslan bahr waghaira ka ilm to wo aik saharangez shakhsiyat ka maalik ho jaaye. Aapko ghazal kahne ka Dhang aa raha hai, bas is meiN rawaani ki zarurat hai. Aap bahr seekhne ka kaam kareN phir dekheN sheroN meiN jaadoobayaani kaise aati hai. Aapke hi ashaar ko bahr meiN laane ki koshish karuNga jis se aapko ghazal ke ramooz o nukaat ka kuchh ilm ho jaaye:

Muhabbat meiN teri wafa chaahta hooN
Sabhi dard o ghum ki dawa chaahta hooN

Tu hi meri azmat, tu hi meri shohrat
Muhabbat ka tujhh se sila chaahta hooN

Tu hi meri khushiyaN, tamanna bhi tu hai
Khushi tere lab pe sada chaahta hooN

Hamaari muhabbat ka mil jaaye tohfa
Ki tu mujh ko chaahe sada chaahta hooN

Ye aik maiN ne jasarat ki hai aur agar meri ye jasarat aapko buri lag jaaye to darguzar kijiyega. Apni is achchhi koshish par daad qubul kijiye.

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good improvisation ansari sahab
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Quote from: waquif ansari on June 22, 2011, 07:24:57 AM
Janab Nooruddin Noor Saheb, aapki ghazal ko paRhne ke baad maiN is nateeje pe pahuNcha hooN k aapke ander aik honhaar shayar maujood hai jise agar kuchh ezaafi ilm haasil ho jaaye maslan bahr waghaira ka ilm to wo aik saharangez shakhsiyat ka maalik ho jaaye. Aapko ghazal kahne ka Dhang aa raha hai, bas is meiN rawaani ki zarurat hai. Aap bahr seekhne ka kaam kareN phir dekheN sheroN meiN jaadoobayaani kaise aati hai. Aapke hi ashaar ko bahr meiN laane ki koshish karuNga jis se aapko ghazal ke ramooz o nukaat ka kuchh ilm ho jaaye:

Muhabbat meiN teri wafa chaahta hooN
Sabhi dard o ghum ki dawa chaahta hooN

Tu hi meri azmat, tu hi meri shohrat
Muhabbat ka tujhh se sila chaahta hooN

Tu hi meri khushiyaN, tamanna bhi tu hai
Khushi tere lab pe sada chaahta hooN

Hamaari muhabbat ka mil jaaye tohfa
Ki tu mujh ko chaahe sada chaahta hooN

Ye aik maiN ne jasarat ki hai aur agar meri ye jasarat aapko buri lag jaaye to darguzar kijiyega. Apni is achchhi koshish par daad qubul kijiye.

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Shukriya Waqif ji,

Aap ne bilkul bhi sahi likha hai,

Maine jaldi main ashaar likhdiye the isiliye thik kar na saka

khush rahiye
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Quote from: Nooruddin Noor on June 22, 2011, 04:50:32 AM
Muhabbat mein teri Wafa chahta hoo.n,
Mere dard-o-gam ki dawa chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri azmath, tu hi meri shuhrath,
Muhabbat ka tujhse sila chahta hoo.n,

Tu hi meri arzoo,  tamanna bhi tu hai,
Laboo.n par khushi tere sada chahta hoo.n,

Tabassum hai ada teri, tarannum sada teri,
Tu mujh ko bhi chahe dua chahta hoo.n,

Muhabbat mein teri wafa......

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Very Romantic ... Very Touching ... Noor Sahab !

dil se daad qubuul KareN ... !!
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Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya anshumali ji.

yo.n hi saath dete rahiye,

Khush rahiye,

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